CSI: Miami

She's cute,but I have no doubt in that she's bored...I hope girls will be here soon

Hey Girls i'm here how are you this morning ~~Carlynn

THIS EVENING.WE ARE OKI HAVE GRACIE AND THERESA AT MSN AT BORAD AND ANOTHER BOARD MY FINGERS ARE DOUBLE

Chapter 111 The end shall come soon Part Two ( at the lab) Eric: H what's going on Horatio: Tim and Ryan where taken hostage by the mala noches Eric: what!?( horatios phone rings and he picks it up ) ?: oh and i forgot to tell you we have your wife marisol and maybelle Eric"s Lover ( the phone hangs up ) Horatio: they have marisol and maybelle tooEric: ok i'm coming with you Horatio: ok lets go ( they go to the warehouse) Horatio: ok we are here now let them go ?: you know i don't really want to i want them to see this ( meanwhile in a different room in the warehouse ) Tim: ahh Ryan you gotta stay with me man i know it hurts and i know your weak just stay with me ok i'm almost outta these ropes ok i'm, out ( tim goes over to where ryan is) Tim: ryan ryan wake up Ryan: ahh what Tim: here man let me untie you ( tim unties ryan and lays him on the floor and tim takes off his jacket and puts it on ryan's wound ) Tim: stay with me man ok Ryan: i don't think i can *Cough* Tim: i know it hurts ryan you just gotta stay with me ( the door opens and Marisol and maybelle come into the room) Marisol: we managed to break free come on lets get him and you outta here ( tim helps ryan walk and they go out into the center of the warehouse where eric and horatio are) Eric: speed Ryan! ?: how the H*** did you four manage to break free Tim: it's called brains ( someone hits tim over the back of the head and he falls to floor and so does ryan and tim gets back up and punches the guy who hit him on the back of the head and the other guy falls to the floor) ?: oh and there is something you should know Carly Helped us with this Horatio: what? Carly: don't listen to him! ?: what the h*** are you doing here Carly: helping to stop you Antonio! Antonio: you still got henry and harold and natalia to worry about now ( then someone comes and hits antonio on the back of the head) Harold: that was for my son! get Ryan outta here go now ( tim and marisol and maybelle help ryan get up and walk and they get out of the warehouse) Henry: now lets play this Right ( a bunch of gunshots go off) Eric: horatio!

WOW CARLY NICE TWIST LOVED IT PLEASE CONTINUE PLEASEEEEEEEE I'M LOVING ITTHERESA

THIS IS ONE OF THE LAST CHAPTERS ~~CARLYNN

OK THAT''S FINE WITH ME I KNOW ITS HARD TO KEEP A STORY GOING WITHOUT ANY IDEAS I'M LOSING THEM BECAUSE OF SCHOOL AND ALL THAT STUFFTHERESA

YEAH AND ALSO I HAVE A NEW STORY AND ALL THAT AND PLUS I HAVE BEEN MEANING TO END TOGETHER AGAIN FOR A WHILE SO NOW IS PROBABLY A GOOD TIME ~~CARLYNN

OK COOL YEA I KNOW WHAT YOU MEAN I'M NOT GOING TO END PEOPLE'S MISTAKES RIGHT NOW I'M THINKING OF A PLAN OR SOMETHING FOR THE STORY SO I'LL TRY WRITING A CHAPTER TODAYTHERESA

Chapter 112 The end Shall come soon Part Three Eric: Horatio! Horatio: eric do me a favor and tell Marisol and Jaylyn that i love them and i always will Eric: H your gonna make it out of here Horatio: no i'm not eric take care of marisol and jaylyn for me ok?Eric: H please don't die on me Horatio: i am leaving you in charge of the lab Eric: H please ( horatio stops breathing ) Eric: horatio! ( S.W.A.T busts in ) Marisol: oh god Horatio!( eric is crying ) Henry: he got what he deserved Eric: and you are gonna get what you deserve Henry ( Eric Punches Henry) Eric: that was for horatio ( eric punches henry three more times) Eric: and that was for me marisol and jaylyn Henry: ouch ( an hour later a horatio's body is taken to the mourge and Eric goes to the hospital to see how calleigh eric and tim are doing) Eric: hey speedTim: hey man Eric: did you hear Tim: yeah Eric: you ok? Tim: yeah i have a broken rib but other then that Eric: how's calleigh Tim: i don't know yet i was just about to go see her Eric: what about Ryan Tim: he should be ok he lost a lot of blood though Eric: yeah ( tim goes to calleigh's room) Calleigh: tim oh thank god your ok Alexx: i will go now sweety talk to you later Tim: is the baby ok? Calleigh: yeah they gave him something to help his lungs more Tim: i love you calleigh Calleigh: i love you too what should we name our new son Tim: how about Jacob Horatio Speedle Calleigh: sounds good to me Eric: knock knock Calleigh: hi Eric Eric: hey Cal Calleigh: how you holding up Eric: ok i guess Maybelle: it will be ok you know that right babe Eric: i know Calleigh: how is marisol holding up Eric: not so good i better go find her Tim: bye man Eric: bye speedMaybelle: bye Calleigh: bye Carly: are you all ok Tim: yeah we are fine Kaylee: daddy i heard abotu what happened Kyle: i cant believe my dad's dead Lily: grandpa went to heaven Kaylee: yeah he did sweetheart well i got news Carly: let me guess your pregnant Kaylee: yup tim: congradutlations honey Kaylee: thanks daddy Hannah: mommy daddy! Zack: hi Tim: come here you two ( hannah and zack and tim hug ) THE END

GOOD ENDING CARLY LOVED IT SAD TOO LOVED ITTHERESA

HEY CARLY GREAT STORY GREAT ENDING I LOVED IT CONGRATS TO YOU ON A GREAT STORY

THANK YOU ALL LOL I AM GLAD YOU ALL LIKED MY STORY ~~CARLYNN

it was good CarlyTheresa

HEY I HAVE A QUESTION WOULD YOU ALL LIKE A SEQUAL TO THIS STORY LOL ~~CARLYNN