CSI: Miami

that was a good chapter i loved it please continue i need more please and i can read it just fine its ok don't worry about i can read it...Theresa

lol when i first posted it it was all bunched up and stuff lol but i fixed it didnt i? lol im happy lol i am happy cuz i am back and posting and stuff lol ^__^ ~Carly

yea you fixed it please continue soon when you can of course...Theresa

lol i will continue soon im getting tired and aaahhh i missed the season premier of ugly betty oh well lol

ok coll thanks and sorry that you missed Ugly Betty i missed the rest of Survivor but oh well i don't care...Theresa

lol on man i meant to watch survivor cuz i havent seen it before lol oh well it will be on next week lol

yea or you could watch it online too but its not a good way to watch it i'm probably not going to watch this Season of it though, i wonder who got voted off tonight...Theresa

great chapter loved it ill be watching!!!!! ))

Chapter three the shocker of a lifetime H: Mr: wolfe Ry: yeah H H: why did kaylee's dad leave Ry: i don't know i met him once and he was a great guy he loved kaylee and gina sooo much and gina was sooo happy it had been a long time since i had seen her that happy H: Do you remember his name Ry: yeah it Was Tim but i can't remember his last name H: Tim? Ry: wait do you think it could be Tim Speedle H: it may be possible Ry: kaylee has a picture of her dad on her nightstand H: well lets go to your sister's house then ( Horatio ryan calleigh and eric go to gina's house meanwhile at horatio's house where kaylee and kyle are) ka: you know this isnt like my mom she wouldnt just leave me like that Ky: yeah i know Ka: i mean especily after what happened with my dad Ky: true we better get to studying for that test tomorrow Ka: yeah your right ( meanwhile at gina's house) H: your sister has a very nice house Ry: yeah i wonder how long she has been back though C: hey i think i found something Ry: what is it C: a phone number Ry: do you think it could've been the person's phone number of who she went out with last night H: lets find out calleigh get the phone number back to the lab asap C: you got it E: H! H: yeah Eric E: come look at this! H: all right E: look who is in the picture H: speed? E: Tim never said anything about a kid H: i wonder why but i think we should run a dna test to be sure Ry: i will call kaylee and ask her to go to the lab ( ryan calls kaylee ) Ry" hey kay Ka: hey uncle Ry whats going on Ry: can you go to the lab Ka: umm yeah sure what for Ry: Horatio wants to ask a few more questions Ka: ok i will meet you there Ry: all right H ( ryan and horatio and eric head back to the lab ) H" hey kaylee Ka: hi you wanted to ask me something H: would if be all right if i took a smaple of your dna Ka: umm yeah sure ( horatio swabs kaylee's mouth and gets some of speed's dna) ( alexx eric calleigh horatio and ryan are all waiting for the test results and then they finally get back horatio gets the piece of paper ) H: omg she's speed's daughter

Hii just read your storyits amazing and i love about Mac coming to Miamiwell best wishesNancy

thank you Nancy ~~~Carly~~

chapter four the truth H: i can't believe this C: oh my god E: how come speed didn't say anything about her H: i don't know but we have to foucus on finding gina right now and i need to go talk to kaylee ( horatio goes to the break room and finds kaylee reading a book ) H: whatcha reading Ka: a book H: kaylee Ka: yeah? H: well i have something to tell you about your father Ka: what is it H: see he use to work for me Ka: mom said he was a cop but she didn't really tell me much more about him H: kaylee we are gonna find your mother and right now i think its best you go back to my house and stay there Ka: ok but can i say bye to my uncle H: of course ( horatio walks out of the break room and sends ryan in ) Ry: hey kay ( kaylee laughs ) Ka: hi uncle Ry Ry: hey i love you Ka: i love you too uncle ryan ( ryan and kaylee hug ) Ry: you better get going Ka: yeah bye Ry: bye C: god she is such a sweet little girl Ry: little? calleigh she's 14 C: she is?Ry: yeah C: wow Ry: i know C: she has soo much of speed in her Ry: really? C: yeah she has his eyes and hair and sense of humor and sarcasmness and a bunch of other stuff Ry: she is very sarcastic ( Ryan and calleigh laugh) Ry: but i love her even though she is a trouble maker C: ryan she isnt a girly girl is she? Ry: you couldnt tell from the skateboard? yeah she hates pink and girly stuff C: i see what sports does she like Ry: baseball basketball swimming soccer skateboarding C: wow Ry: yeah i know ( later that night) H: well i think its time we head home for the night E: yeah good night H C: night guys A: good night Ry: night H: ryan are you sure you dont wanna come over to my house for the night Ry: no i'm good and i know kaylee is in good handsH: good night Mr Wolfe ( horatio gets home and finds kaylee and kyle watching a movie ) H: guys its midnight you should be in bed Ky: dad we are still studying for our finals H: you two need to go to bed so good night Ky: night dad night kaylee Ka: night kyle night Mr. caine H: good night ( horatio kaylee and kyle all head off to bed ) ( later that night someone breaks into kaylee's bedroom and the man puts his hand over kaylee's mouth horatio hears the noise and grabs his gun and walks to the guest bedroom where kaylee's is sleeping) H: put your hands up! T: horatio wait! H: speed? Ka: dad?

oh my God!!i cant believe it!!!Speed is still alive!!!yeahhplease write morei cant wait to see what happend next!!Nancy

Chapter five the reason why H: speed your supposed to be dead T: i know H but i can explain H: well then explain T: can we talk somewhere else? H: yeah kaylee go back to sleep you have a big test tomorrow Ka: i will try ( tim and horatio walk into the living room ) T: see there was a reason why i leftH: but speed i don't get why you left gina and kaylee T: it was only to protect them H: from what T: H i work for the F.B.I and when kaylee was one i got called in and they wanted me to work a case with jake berkley H: wait jake berkley? T: yeah he is the one who has been letting me know you guys are all right H: but speed how did you find out about gina being kidnapped we didn't tell jake about the case T: he overheard you guys talking about it H: i see T: and when he told me i asked him where kaylee was and here i am H: but why did you come speed do you know the guy who kidnapped gina? T: yeah his name is david and i don't know his last name but H: but what T: he is a very dangerus man horatio i mean he tried to kill me and he threatened kaylee and gina H: speed we need to tell the team T: H we can't kaylee and gina are already in enough danger H: speed we need to tell them T: H did you not just hear a word i just said H; i heard you loud and clear T: we can't tell the team that i am still alive! it will put kaylee and gina in more danger and you and kyle H: speed lets dicuss this in the morning T; fine ( horatio went into the hall closet and pulled out a blanket and a pillow for speed an they both went to sleep) ( the next morning) Ky: morning dad morning stranger wait dad who is that H: he is an old friend Ka: kyle we need to go or we are gonna be late Ky: yeah true bye dad bye dad's old friend Ka: bye Mr caine bye dad H: speed we better get to the lab T: all right ( speed and horatio head off to the lab while kaylee and kyle ride their skateboards to school like they do every morning meanwhile at the lab) E: morning H morning Speed!?T; hi C: but your supposed to be dead!! T: i know its a long story H: well well well look who finally arrived M: hi horatio hi calleigh hi eric hi Tim? H: good morning mac E: yeah hi mac ( tim explains why he left and says sorry ) ( meanwhile kaylee and kyle are riding their skateboards to school when a car starts following them ) Ka: kyle is that car following us? Ky: yeah ( two men get out of the car and cloroform kaylee and kyle and put them in the car) ( meanwhile at the lab horatio gets a phone call and the person on the phone asks to talk to tim speedle) T: David? D: hey timmy guess who i have T: i swear if you hurt them! D: if you listen to what i say and do what i say then maybe i will let them go T: What do you want D: you know what i want timmy you!! T: where are you taking them! D: to las vegas hope to see you there timmy

chapter six las vegas timmy T: they are taking them to las vegas H: well then i guess we will have to go to las vegas T: H let me do this alone H: speed he has my son ( the phone rings and its david asking for speed again) D: oh and by the way timmy we dont just have kaylee and kyle and gina we also have reed garret you know mac's stepson ( david hangs up) T: mac they have reed too M: wait so what does this guy want T; i dont know that is what i've been trying to figure out H: well let me call an old friend and we will be on our way to las vegas ( horatio calls grissom and explains what is going on and tells grissom that they will be there soon) H: lets be on our way ( a few hours later the team is in las vegas) Gri: hey horatio H: its nice to meet you in person grissom Gri: you too this is my team this is greg sanders nick stokes and you know cathrine and warrick Cat: well lets get down to business Gre: lets get down to business? ummm cathrine what the Cat: greg be quiet Gri: so they have kaylee gina kyle and reed? H: yes they do Gri: but one thing i don't understand is ( then all of a sudden the phone rings its david again ) T: what is it this time david D: i just called to say we are moving again T: where are you going this time D: new york T: new york? D: hope to see you there timmy T: great he is taking us on a wild goose chase H: well lets go to new york M: i will call my team and tell them W: whoohoo we are going to new york N: Warrick what is up with that W: i have never been to new york Gri: guys would you stop T: H i gotta go by myself its not you guys he wants its me H: but speed he has my son and mac's stepson T: H i can get then back just don't do this anymore your in even more danger then you were before H: and speed that is a risk i am willing to take M: i just got done talking to stella lets get on the next flight to new york ( the teams get on a filght and head to new york)