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Chapter 44 new girl in town ( a few days after that calleigh and nathan are home happy and healthy) ( meanwhile at the lab)Car: Hi uncle horatio! H: carly what are you doing here Car: i got a job offer and i'm here to check it out H: what job offer Car: i got a job offer to work at the zoo down here H: that's great T: H whose this H: this is my niece carly T: hi i'm tim nice to meet you Car: nice to meet you too H; how is your father Car: he's great i just talked to him last night Ry: carly! Car: ryan! Ry: long time no see Car: yeah H: you two know each other?Ry: yeah we went to high school together H; i see Car: i better get going to the job interview i will see you later H: bye sweetheart T: since when do you have a niece H: i never told you i had a sister she died in 9/11 T: wow H: yeah and carly's father is mac taylor T: really H: yup ( tim's phone rings) T: hey cal what's up ok ok calm down i will be right there H: speed go ( tim rushes to the hospital) T: cal what's going on C: nathan he wasn't breathing doctor: mr and ms speedle i am so sorry for your loss T: wait no what he's not dead doctor: i am so sorry C; noo! ( a week later) C: tim T: yeah calC: i want a divorce T: what C: we can do spilt custudy of hannah and zack i just i want a divorce T: but cal C: tim just please T: but i love C: don't tim ( a few weeks later tim and calleigh are now divorced and lexie and eric broke up also) T: it's just hard being without herE: i know how you feel man i mean i thought me and lexie had the real thing but i guess not ( meanwhile lexie and calleigh are talking )L: i loved him but after a while my love for eric just kinda went away C: yeah i know so i heard you gotta new guy friend L: yeah jake berkley his girls are fantastic C: yeah ( a few weeks later) E: hi cal C: hi eric would you like to go out with me tonight E: ummm sure ( meanwhile in horatio's office) Car: hi uncle horatio H: hi carly Car: what's wrong aren't you supposed to be happy you are gonna have a baby soon H: yeah well Car: well what H: long story Car: did you and marisol get into a fight H: yeah we did Car: must have been big to have you this glum H: i'm just tired i haven't been getting much sleep lately T: hey H hey carly Car: hi tim ( horatio and carly talked for a while and while carly was walking out to go home) T: bye carly Car: bye

HI .LOVED IT .LET'S C HOW LONG TIM N CARLY LAST .AND HERE WE GO WIT CAL N ERIK .DIEN 2 NO WAT HAPPENZ

good chapter more Carly please i'm posting my next chapter now...Theresa

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Chapter 45 new love for everyone?? we start off at jake and lexie's date)L: sooo how are theresa and bel J: great really greatL: cool do you like being a single father?J: it's hard but i get threw it L: good J: what about you L: i don't have any kids J: oh ( meanwhile at eric and calleigh's date)E: so C: yeah so ( yeah i know not so exceiting )( the next day ) J: calleigh would you be my girlfriend C: oh my god yes!! ( meanwhile lexie and eric are in the break room) E: lexie babe i'm so sorry will you forgive me L: no babe i'm the one who should be sorry E: how about we are both sorry L: that works E: so will you be mine again L: yes ( eric and lexie kiss) ( meanwhile at horatio and marisol's place) H: marisol M: what do you want H: babe what are you doing M: i'm going to stay with my brother H: babe please just listen to me i'm sorry M: i don't wanna hear it horatio H: marisol please M: horatio i'm six months pregnant and you couldn't think to tell me until now!!!!!!H: babe please just listen i'm sorry i didn't tell you about my father M: that fact that you didn't tell me you had an abusive father until now and then all of a sudden you have a niece and a sister!!! and oh lets not forget about your thing with julia H: wait what i didn't do anything with julia M: you didn't?H: no babe i would never cheat on you M: oh god horatio i'm sooo sorry H: it's all right babe

heykeep going please please please pleasei love ths story so much pleasegracie

SO CTE.UD SOON PLZ

good chapter Carly more please this is good...Theresa

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Chapter 46 a family once broken ( a few days later ) H: hey carly Car: hi uncle horatio M: hi carly Car: hi marisol ( marisol hugs carly) ( horatio carly and marisol talk for a while then carly heads off to work )( meanwhile at the lab) E: so tim how are you T: ok i heard you and lex are back together E: yeah man we are T: i could always tell you had feelings for her E: i never knew H had a niece or a sister T: me either N: hi guys E: hi nat T: hi natalia N: oh eric i'm so happy to hear you and lexie are back together (later that day at carly's place )( the doorbell rings) Car: oh my god hi daddy what are you doing here Mac: i came to see my only daughter is that a problem Car: no i missed you Mac: i missed you too sweetheart Car: how is reed Mac: he's good he misses you like crazy though Car: i miss him like crazy too ( mac hugs carly)

HEYKEEP GOING PLEASE PLEASE PLEASEGRACIEP.SPLEASE PLEASE PLEASE

good chapter Carly i loved it more please...Theresa

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Chapter 47 a family once broken part two ( the next day horatio heads over to carly's place ) Car: hi uncle horatio H: hi carly Mac: hi horatio H: mac? Mac: yeah i came into town for a few days H: nice to see you again Mac: you too Car: well i have to be going to work so i will see you two later Mac: bye carly H: bye carly ( carly leaves and mac and horatio talk) H: mac what is the real reason you came into town Mac: i think claire may still be alive H: me too i think that she was put into a safe place to keep her safe from our father Mac: probablyH: he called me the other day Mac: your abusive father i thought he was still in jail H: he got let out Mac: why H: i don't know but he knows about me and claire having kids and i'm worried that he will go after kyle or carly Mac: yeah wait would he do that H: as far as i see it he is capable of anything Mac: i should call carly and ask her to take the day off H: let her work i already told her about me and claire's father and if she see's him she will call me Mac: you sure H: yes i am sure

HEY CARLYKEEP GOING PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASEYOUR STORY IS WAY MUCH BETTER THAN MINEPLEASE PLEASE PLEASE KEEP GOING PLEASEGRACIEP.SPLEASE PLEASE PLEASE

good chapter Carly more pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee this is good....Theresa

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Chapter 48 a shocker for everyone ( carly got home from work and saw a note from her father on her counter and it said carly i am gonna stay with your uncle for the night i love you from dad and then the doorbell rings) Coming!! ( carly opens the door) Re: hi sis Car: hi bro ( reed and carly hug each other) Car: so what brings you to miami Re: i got a job offer here as a reporter Car: cool you are staying here Re: No i'm not i'm staying at a hotel till i can find an aparment Car: no you are staying here Re: sis Car: reed don't fight me on this Re: fine ( later that night carly and reed went to bed ) ( the next day everyone was at the one of the biggest parties of the year when all of a sudden the building blows up and an hour later) Car: hello can anyone hear me Mac: carly are you ok! Car: I'm fine just a few scratches are you ok??Mac: yeah i'm fine ( a few hours later everyone is found and not hurt when......) Cl: hello is everyone ok Mac & H: claire????? Car & Re: mom???

AWESOME STORI .LUV IT .PLZ CONT

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