CSI: Miami

holy shit more Carly pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee this is getting good i think its their dad more please...Theresa

hey carlykeep going please please pleasei love this story please pleasegracie

gracie theresa and bel i am gonna do a bit of changing to the story cause i thought of something today that i wanted to do to the story and the changes i gotta go a few chapters back to do so the changes will be in the chapter the new girl in town chapter and the chapters after that chapter so i hope you like the changes ~~Carly~~

and you will find out why i made changes in the next chapter or two the changes i made in the new girl in town chapter and the chapters after that are small and i will post the next chapter soon ~~Carly~~ *__*

OK CARLYI'M LEAVING THE BOARD BUT I'LL COME ON AND READ YOUR STORY AND A FEW OTHERSI'M STOPPING CAINE GIRLS ASWELLSORRYGRACIEP.SI'M REALLY REALLY SORRY

it's ok gracie i love your story caine girls but it's ok i left the boards for a while after they changed the boards so i understand i will miss you ~~Carly~~

Chapter 52 the truth must be told( a few hours later we begin where claire is being held) ?: i've missed you claire now if i could just get your brother to come we could be a family again Cl: dad? ( meanwhile horatio goes to clarie's place and can't find and and she left her cell phone so horatio goes to the lab and calls speed and tim heads to the lab) T: all right H what should we do H: tell the truth T: yeah ( a few hours later ) E: H why did you want us to come here at this time of night H: my sister was kidnapped and well the truth must be told E: what truth T: carly is not horatio's niece or mac taylor's daughter she is my niece C: by who T: david is carly's father and carly is three years younger then kaylee E: so she is 16 T: yeah and the reason she came to town was to find her sisters and brother J: did she find them T: she found her sisters but not her brother Ry: who are her sisters T: theresa and bel J: what?? Ry: who is her brother T: he is only four and his name is brett H; point is mac and claire are only carly's adopted parents and reed T: is her half brother H: now we need to find claire and find brett before my father does something bad to them ( meanwhile where claire is) ?: yes it's me your father and look i have someone to keep you company right brett D: what are you doing i thought we were gonna get her together ?: chill a little david!D: fine hello clarie ( meanwhile at the lab ) E: does calleigh know C: of course i knew E: wait so how was carly able to get her own place Re: she wasn't she helped get it but i bought it and came here H: we need to stop arguing and find claire and brett Car: daddy has him i know it T: david is dead Car: no he isn't T: wait a minute what!

HEY CARLY KEEP GOING PLEASEPLEASE PLEASEPLEASEGRACIE

good chapter Carly sorry to say but i'm going on STRIKE no more People's Mistakes sorry...Theresa

oh my god theresa why are you going on strike!! ~~Carly~~

because of what's going on with my sister Graciee sorry Calry i might post one more then i might end it, i'll think it over sorry...Theresa

Chapter 53 everyone's worst enemies Re: i got a call a few days ago and it was him T: why didn't you tell anyone reed Re: he said if i told anyone he would kill me Gri: hi Car: grissom?H: good you came Gri: of course i came clarie is a good friend of mine ( meanwhile where clarie and brett are) Br: i wanna go home D: be quiet Cl: shhhhh shhh brett you are gonna be home soon Br: i want my sister's and brother Cl: i know shhhhh ?: clarie would you shut him up Cl: i'm trying would you just let him go he has nothing to do with this D: he is my son! of course he has something to do with this Cl: he's your son?? ( meanwhile at the lab) Th: carly reed! Car: theresa Bel thank god you two are all right Bel: we missed you guys Re: we missed you too ( carly theresa reed and bel all hugged) H: all right now we need to find claire and brett ( horatio's phone rings) H; caine ?: hello son i missed you tell ya what i will let your sister and brett go if you and speed come to the warehouse (horatio's dad hangs up ) T: what does he want H H: speed he wants you and me to go to the warehouse T: then lets go C: no babe T: cal i will be all right H: speed are you sure T: yeah Car: uncle tim ( horatio and speed go to the warehouse) ?: it's so nice of you to finally join usD: hi little bro ?: clarie get you and that little piece of S*** out of here D: hey don't call my son a piece of S*** ?: i'm the one running this so shut it!! ( horatio's dad and david get their guns out as do horatio and speed) ( gunshots go off)

hey carlymore please please please pleaseGracie

hey gracie whats up lol i will post an other chapter in a while and i have a question would you like to be in my story ~~Carly~~ ^__^

OK CARLY CAN'T WAIT TO READ ITYOU WANNA PUT ME IN YOUR STORY???YEAH SURE GRACIEP.STHANKS