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![[Post New]](/forum/templates/default/images/icon_minipost_new.gif) 09/25/2008 12:46:58
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csirules45
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hi everyone this is a story i wrote a month ago but when they changed the message board i lost it i was sooooo sad but now i am gonna rewrite it and add a few changes hope u like it CHAPTER ONE ( it was a normal day in the csi lab until) Ka: uncle ryan! Ry: kaylee! what are you doing here arent you supposed to be in school Ka: uncle Ryan mom went missing Ry: kaylee what happenedKa: she went out last night and didnt come home she didnt even call me she always calls me if she isnt gonna come home that night Ry: kaylee calm down all right Ka: all right Ry: come on lets go talk to my boss Ka: ok Ry: H H: yes mr wolfe Ry: i need your help H: with what Ry: my sister went out last night and my niece just came in and said she didnt come home and didnt even call that isnt like gina Horatio H: may i see your niece Ry: yeah she is in the break room ( horatio and ryan go to the break room to talk to kaylee ) H: kaylee? Ka: mr caine Ry: you 2 know each other H: yes she is kyle's girlfriend Ry: she's kyle's girlfriendH: yes Ry: oh yeah that's right i forgot H: kaylee i thought you and your mom were going to new york to visit someone Ka: we were until what happened last night Ry: kaylee who were you gonna go visit in new york Ka: mom's friend H: and whats your mom's friend's name Ka: well see we were gonna go to new york and las vegas H: who does your mom know in new york and las vegas Ka: well she knows a guy named mac in new york and a guy named grissom in las vegas H: i know those people Ka: you do H: yes they are very old friends Ry: H what are we gonna do H: well mr wolfe we are gonna find your sister
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![[Post New]](/forum/templates/default/images/icon_minipost_new.gif) 09/25/2008 17:53:50
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wow that was a good chapter pretty please continue i need more please this is getting good...Theresa
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![[Post New]](/forum/templates/default/images/icon_minipost_new.gif) 09/25/2008 17:58:10
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hey theresa its been a while lol u probly dont rember me lol its been a month since we last talked cuz when they changed the message board i lost the original Together Again but now im rewriting it and making a few changes to make it better then the original well hopefully better anyway lol hope to talk to u soon
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![[Post New]](/forum/templates/default/images/icon_minipost_new.gif) 09/25/2008 19:02:35
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yea i remember you of course i can't forget you i so can't wait to read your story again it was getting good to when the old boards got shut down that pissed me off i tried helping people getting on but they wouldn't work for anyone it did work for a day before then it wouldn't work for me which sucked i tried helping everyone get their stories but it was the same thing....Theresa
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![[Post New]](/forum/templates/default/images/icon_minipost_new.gif) 09/25/2008 19:31:00
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lol its good to see u again and i am sooo pis$ed at the boards for changing it and they didnt even send us anything telling us they were gonna change it and i was 21 chapters into my story!! which got me soo mad and i didnt come back till just today and found the fan ficton thing was back and i looked for the original Togther Again but it wasnt there so i am rewriting it and making a few changes to maybe make it a little better then it was before well hopefully u will like the changes and im gonna explain more this time that is how i am gonna make changes well part of it anyway lol hope to talk to u again soon and its also good to be back lol ^_^~Carly ^__^
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![[Post New]](/forum/templates/default/images/icon_minipost_new.gif) 09/25/2008 19:49:05
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it is good to see you again yea i was pi$$ed off at the boards too, yea you were 21 chapters into your story that sucks, man i loved that story too, well welcome back its good to have you back, ok cool can't wait to read the whole story again yea talk to you soon....Theresa
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![[Post New]](/forum/templates/default/images/icon_minipost_new.gif) 09/25/2008 19:53:46
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i will post an other chapter tonight after i am done with something that i have to do talk to u later
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![[Post New]](/forum/templates/default/images/icon_minipost_new.gif) 09/25/2008 19:55:29
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ok bye i'm going to add you to my friends list...Theresa
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![[Post New]](/forum/templates/default/images/icon_minipost_new.gif) 09/25/2008 19:57:34
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csirules45
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lol never mind i thought i had to do some school work lol and and yay i am gonna get added to ur friends list lol ur the first person to add me lol ^__^ i will post an other chapter right now well i gotta write it first lol and i have a question how do you add people? cuz i have no idea how lol
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![[Post New]](/forum/templates/default/images/icon_minipost_new.gif) 09/25/2008 20:00:32
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that's good, your welcome i'm glad to add you i just added you, i can't wait to read more this story is getting good i'm so loving it thank you...Theresa
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![[Post New]](/forum/templates/default/images/icon_minipost_new.gif) 09/25/2008 20:02:29
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you click on the persons picture or name and you see a button that says add to friends and it goes to a little thing where you write a message and you write what you want to say and then you press the send button, i hope that helps you out...Theresa
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hey great start to the story i never got to read the old one so im looking forward to this one keep going please bel form australia
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![[Post New]](/forum/templates/default/images/icon_minipost_new.gif) 09/25/2008 20:21:31
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Chapter Two H: but first i have to call an some old friends Ry: grissom and mac?H: yes Ry: i know mac but who is grissomH: Gil Grissom works with the las vegas csi department Ry: oh but how do you know him H: well this girl got kiddnapped and her kidnapper bought her to miami and me and two people from Gil Grissom's team came and well it was a few years ago Ry: oh Kaylee how do you know them Ka: Well after my dad left us mom and me went to las vegas and mom met Grissom and then after a few years me and mom moved to new york and Mac was her boyfriend for a while and i met his stepson reed H: all right kaylee i think me and your uncle have no more questions for you umm wait one more question Ka: what is it H: how did you get here Ka: i rode my skateboard H: all right well your school should be letting out about now i am gonna call kyle and u are gonna stay at my house Ry: umm H H: Ryan i think it would be the safest place for her right now and u can stay over too Ry: no i am good kaylee Ka: yeah uncle ryan Ry: be good Ka: i will try my best ( horatio and ryan walk into horatio's office and Horatio calls the team into his office to decied what they are gonna do next) C: hello Horatio hello ryan whats going on E: calleigh why are you soo cheerful all the time C: eric there is nothing wrong with being cheerful E: but i mean you are way cheeful A: eric would you stop there is nothing wrong with being cheerful H: all right eric calleigh alexx thats enough we have a case E: what is it Ry: my sister gina left my niece home alone last night and didnt come home an didnt even call her C: Ryan you never told us you had a sister Ry: you never asked H: thats enough i am on the phone M: hey horatio H: hi mac how are you M: whats going on this time H: wellM: well what H: you know gina wolfe rightM: yeah me and her went out for a while and her daughter was good friends with reed why whats going on H: well it appears the gina went out last night and left kaylee alone and didnt call her at all M: that doesnt sound like gina H: that is what her brother said M: Ryan? yeah well gina wouldnt do that she loves kaylee sooo much H: thats the only problem M: you think gina's been kidnapped H: its our only explanation M: all right i am on the next flight out of new york and to miami H: see you soon all right team we need to go to gina's house and see if we can find anything out of the ordanairy and Mr Wolfe where is kaylee's dad Ry: he left gina and kaylee when kaylee was one i think kaylee has a picture of him on her nightstand H: all right Mr Wolfe Lets find your sister
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omg the things got messed up and now its all like in one big bunch i hope u can read it if not i will rewrite the chapter my computer is sooo messed up when i wrote the first chapter i was using my moms but my computer appairentily likes to mess it up and put in all in a big bunch!! ahhhh if u cant read it let me know and i will rewrite the chapter
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![[Post New]](/forum/templates/default/images/icon_minipost_new.gif) 09/25/2008 20:27:12
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csirules45
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never mind i fixed it lol
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