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belluvsmiami

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HEY HEY STOP THE FIGHTING OTHERWISE IM NOT WRIITNG JACK SHIT YOU LADIES GOT THAT !!!!! ANYMORE COMMENTS AND ILL DROP THE WHOLE RYAN THING ALL TOGETHER YOU GOT THAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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ha ha lmao dont wake her up until Gen gets here. Gen thinks she can deal with her...

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HEY HEY I HAD TO GIVE THE BTCH 7 TRANQS JUST TO GET HER DOWN THIS TIME LOL THE BITCH IS GETTING STRONGER LOL ILL BE BAKC IN 1 HOUR WITH NEW CHAPTER OK??

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those were grat chpater bel loved them

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Hey bel sorry about earlier I was in theHospital.....edwin pushed me and broke my ankle..):

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CHAPTER 328K: ryan molly is ummR: whos is she he grabbed her armK: i dont know ryanR: what do you mean you dont know he said with letting go of her arm and crossing hisK: i dont know because i slept with like 3 other guys in hawaii and i didnt get their namesR: oh great and so ryan was spinning in the room and his hands were on his head and then he saidR: i want a swab from both of you ok? i want ot know if she is mine or notK: ok and so ryan pulled out two swabs and he took them from kendra and molly.Then ryan got up and he walked away and then he went to the lab and he asked maxine if she could do it as soon as possible but keep it quietM: ok ryan ill try and so maxine processed it and told ryan she will call him when she is done.Mean while at eric and calleighs calleigh was pacing the floor and she saidC: how much longer eric?E: 5 more minutes calleigh calm down a little and he grabbed her hand and pulled her into him and he saidE: we'll deal with it when the time comes ok?Calleigh ruffled her hair and flicked it back and then he saidE: wait wait the line is forming and then he loked at the box and then at the test and he saidE: its negatve calleigh im sorryC: are you sure?E: yup and he handed the box and the test to her and she saidC: oh my god well then whats wrong with me im never late EVER!!!E: maybe its stress you know we have been alot latelyC: i dunno maybe and then eric hugged her and he saidE: it woud have been nice to have another little baby in the house with his head looking at the floorC: yeah she smiled and then she turned around to face him and she kissed himE: you want to start on another then he smiledC: eric?And then he scooped her up and took her to their room and shut the door.Over at the hospital gen was carrying some files back to her office and she bumped into the door frame and she hurt her sideG: oww shit and then gen put her files down and she felt her breast and she had a bit more of a feel and then she felt something different.Gne rang her doctor and she was making an appointment to seeher the next day.When gen got home thatnigth jake kissed her on the cheek and he was cooking her dinner and gen laid down on the lounge.After a while gen went and had a long hot bath and then she felt herself again and it was sore.She got out of the bath but she was hiding it from jake .They ate dinner and then they went to bed and the next day gen was walking to work and then she went into the doctors.G: hi im gen marcoux im here to see Dr.MinchinburyR: ok gen marcoux yes just take a seat and then gen sat down and it felt like the longest wait and she was in pain and then he called herDr Minchinbury: gen mrcouxG: yes thats me DM: this way pleaseGen went to walk in and she wished she had jake beside her and just before she did she seen calleigh and as a last minute reaction she grabbed her arm and yanked her in and calleigh saidC: gen what the hell?G: just shh i need someone here with me C: wheres jake?G: he doesnt know i just need some support ok?C: ok then and she nodded and sat down with her.G: i bumped my side yesterday and i hurt it really bad and then i felt around my breast and then i felt a lump and i kinda freaked out and thats when i came to youCalleighs eyes were wide open as she knew what gen was thinking and calleigh just held her hand and then the doctor examined her and thye told gen she had to have day surgery to see what the lump was exactly.Calleigh walked out with gen and gen thanked her for being there and made her promise not to tell jake and she said she wouldnt .Calleigh went to se her doctor and afterwards calleigh went and worked out and then she flet a leak and she ran to the toiletsCalleigh was in the stall and she yelledC: OH THANK BLOODY LORD and then she said OH EWW and laughed and then as she came out she seen clara Cl: calleigh?Calleigh didnt say anything and then she went to walk off and clara saidCl: hey you can at least acknowledge me you know we were best friends and calleigh ?C: what? she whispered Cl: i miss you and then calleigh grabbed her bag and slammed the locker and she walked out and said to herselfC: i miss you too and then she got into her car and she drove home where eric had met her and he was out the front and when she got out she ran to him and she jumped on him and she kissed him and she began to cryE: calleigh whats wrong?C: nothing and she kised him more and then he saidE: you seen somebody didnt you and she nodded and he carried her inside and they talked about what was wrong and he made her a hot chocolate and they sat there basking in each others arms.

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bel that was way freaking goooooood lol

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GOOD CHAPTER BEL LOVED IT PLEASE CONTINUE SOON GOT TO GO TO BED NIGHT BEL NIGHT GIRLS TALK TO YOU TOMORROW NIGHTTHERESA

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what a mess!!!hey by the way i think im still sleepybut i loved Calleigh's attitude at Marisolyeeeeiiiiiiithis is great!!!!!!!!!!!im going to be on line probably all dayyeah yeah yeahsee you my friendcongratulations!!!!!!! !!! - Nancy

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great chapter Bel ~~Carlynn

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Your story is doing really good Bel!I love it!Anna

dadou81

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hey bel

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Nothing I see nothing..

pizzaslt9

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Where are the messages?

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OMG GOOD CHAPTER

 
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