CSI: Miami

good chapter i loved it please continue i need more Carly please...Theresa

lol i will post more soon its like 9:14 where i am what time is it where u r

i have to go at like 9:30 my time lol

chapter seven new york timmy ( the teams arrive in new york and head to the lab) H: all right so whats the plan ( the phone rings) T: what now david D: well timmy i will let them all go if you do what i say T: what david D: well first you get me five thousend dollars and then you go to the warehouse you remember the warehouse timmyT: yeah i remember the warehouse D: good and one more thing T: what D: leave the rest out of it!! ( david hangs up )T: he wants five thousend dollars and he wants me to bring it to him alone H: speed that is not an optionM: horatio's right St: well we can always just let tim do it himself T: thank you for backing me up stella H: now is not the time for this speed i can get you the money i will go make the call now T: thank you H Dan: well maybe we should go with you though and hide out and if we hear any gunshots or anything we bust in T: that's the right idea danny M: well lets set out plan into action ( tim and the teams head off to the warehouse) T: all right david i got your money now let them go D: but first i wanna chat don't you T: let them go david!!D: timmy i don't think you wanna be talking to me that way T: david i did what you asked now please let them go D: why i wanna chat with you little brother

Chapter Eight Little brother T: yeah david D: so how are mom and dad doing T: i don't know david concidering i haven't seen them in four years D: yeah your right little brother T: david just go to D: stop right there timmy T: david let them go ( david gets his gun out) T: david put the gun away D: not a chance little brother T: david come on your better then this D: am i am i really? timmy T: all right enough of the crap now let them go!!D: no way timmy because i wanna chat with you T: david i have had enough D: now is that any way to talk to your older brother now i don't think so ( david punches tim ) T: aahh D: don't speak to me like that again got it ( tim punches david ) D: wow little brother you can pack a punch but i have a gun T: don't do it david!! ( a shot goes off ) T: No!!!

wow what a good chapter please continue soon i need more soon when you can...Theresa

Chapter nine the death of a loved one T: gina!! Ka: mom! ( then S.W.A.T busts in ) D: you idiot! timmy! you brought the cops!! T: David! go to hel! Ka: mom!! ( ryan see's gina lying on the floor and rushes over to help her ) Ry: gina stay with me ( horatio unties kaylee kyle and reed and kyle and reed take kaylee outside) ( then the S.W.A.T team arrests david and tim runs over to gina ) T: gina baby please stay with me i love you Ry: tim she's gone T: oh god no baby no ( tim walks outside to find kyle reed and calleigh trying to comfort kaylee ) Ka: dad! where's mom is she ok! T: kaylee she's gone Ka: no!! ( kaylee trys to run into the warehouse but tim stops her ) T: kaylee baby its gonna be all right Ka: no its not!! ( tim wraps kaylee in his arms ) T: yes it is baby ( a few hours later kaylee kyle tim and the team are back in miami and a few days after its time for gina's memorial) Ka: i love you mom forever and always T: gina baby i promise i am gonna take good care of kaylee and i love you Ry: gina i promise i will look after kaylee god i love you gina ( then ryan kaylee and tim head home) T: kaylee baby why don't you go and rest for a while Ka: ok dad Ry: tim i know how much you loved my sister T: we were high school sweethearts did she ever tell you that Ry: no we didn't really talk much but i loved her so much T: ryan i loved her too Ry: its gonna be hard T: yeah it is espeicaly for kaylee Ry: yeah ( kaylee overhears them talking and starts to cry )

please continue this is getting good that last chapter was good...Theresa

Chapter ten moving on part one of two Ka: good morning dad good morning unlce Ryan Ry: morning kaylee T: good morning kaylee Ka: what smells so good T: its called bacon and eggs Ka: yay my favorit Ry: well i better get off to work cya later tim bye kaylee Ka: bye uncle ryan T: you better hurry up and eat today is your last day of school Ka: i am hurrying don't rush me too much T: i need to go get dressed for work Ka: ok dad i will do the dishes T: ok sweetheart Ka: ok dad kyle is here i will see you after you get home from work T: all right bye sweetheart ( kaylee heads off to scholl with kyle and tim heads off to work) T: hey eric E: hey speed how are you T: ok you? E: fine C: hi guys T: aren't you supposed to be off today?C: well i was but nataila has the flu so i gotta fill in for her today so hows it going T: fine E: all right C: ok then lets get to work T: she is way too cheerful ( eric and tim laugh and head into the lab ) T: hey H E: hey H H: hello gentelmenC: hey tim come over here T: ok whats up C: i was wondering if you wanted to catch up tonight after work T: ok where C: how about my place T: ok i will call kaylee and tell her i will be home late ( tim calls kaylee and lets her know he is gonna be home late) ( that night) T: hey cal you ready C: yeah just hold on a minute T: ok C: all right i am ready lets go ( tim and calleigh go to calleigh's place and talk for a few hours ) T: its midnight i better be getting home C: yeah you should get home i will see you tomorrow at 7:00 T: yeah night C: night ( calleigh closes the door behind tim and smiles and tim gets in his car and smiles )

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Chapter Eleven Moving on part two ( a few weeks later T: kaylee come on its time to get up Ka: i am up i am just getting ready! T: ok Ka: ok i am ready for camp T: ok lets go ( tim drives kaylee to camp then heads back home to get ready for his date with calleigh) T: hey ryan Ry: hey you look nice where are you going T: i have a date Ry: with who T: calleigh Ry:i see listen me and nataila are going on a date tonight you wanna tag alone T: no thanks Ry: all right see ya later T: ryan Ry: yeah T: i think tonight will be the night Ry: that what T: you know Ry; i see well have fun T: you too ( tim goes to calleigh's place ) T: hey cal C: hey tim oh you brought me flowers how sweet thank you T: your welcome ( they talk for a while and then they kiss) T; i am sorry C: no i am sorry ( they both laugh ) T" calleigh C: yeah tim T: i love you C: i love you too now what do you say we go up to my bedroom T: that sounds great ( tim picks calleigh up and takes her to the bedroom and they make love) ( the next morning) T: good morning sunshine C: good morning T: oh man we better get ready or we are gonna be late for work C; yeah but wait tim T: yeah cal C: i love you T: i love you too baby( they kiss and get ready for work then head off to work)

Chapter Twelve true love ( two months later calleigh and tim were on a date when) T: calleigh C: yeah tim ( tim gets down on one knee ) T: will you marry meC: oh my god yes!! yes( they kiss ) C: babe T: yeah C: i have something to tell you T: what is it C: i'm pregnet T: your what wait how far along are you C: two months T: so its was from C: yeah T: this is great C: we just better hope nobody finds out about us T: and how are we gonna do that calleigh i mean come on C: yeah true T; so C: i guess this means i gotta move in now?T: yeah C: have you told kaylee yet T: i think we both should tell her C: ok ( the next day tim and calleigh tell kaylee that they are gonna get married and that kaylee is gonna have a little baby brother or sister) Ka: yay this is the best birthday present ever! ( the next day) C: hey eric E: hey cal hey speed TT: hey H: calleigh and speed may i talk to you guys please Tim and cal: sure T: what is it H H: i heard that you two are getting married and are expecting a baby T: did kaylee tell you that H: no but you just told me yourselfs C: horatio me and tim love each other soo much T: we do H H: sounds like you two have true love

i love it thank you please continue i need more please...Theresa

Chapter 13 the wedding T: yeah H we do have true love H: but look what the cat dragged in rick stetler R: speedle calleigh! over here now!T: rick if you are gonna fire one of us make it me R: who said anything about firing anyone just don't let your relationship get in the way of your work T: you got it ( rick walks away and calleigh and tim breath a sigh of relief) H: so calleigh how far along are you C: two monthsH; and when's the wedding T: well we wanna get married before the baby is born so soon C: yup H why don't you two head home for the day and spend some time with kayleeT: ok thanks H C: thank you horatio H: your welcome ( four months later calleigh is six months pregnet and today is the day of calleigh and tim's wedding eric and ryan are tim's best men and kaylee is calleigh's maid of honor) Preacher: do you tim speedle take this woman to be your lawfully wedded wifeT: i do Preacher: and do you calleigh du something take this man to be your lawfully wedded husbandC: i do preacher: i now pronounce you husband and wife you may now kiss the bride ( tim and calleigh kiss) T: i love you cal C: i love you too

Chapter 14 the new addition to the speedle family ( too weeks after the wedding tim and calleigh are at calleigh's doctor appointment)Doctor: do you want to know if its a boy or girl C: do you tim T: its up to you C: yes we want to know Doctor: well you are gonna have a baby girl C: tim you hear that a girl! Doctor: and a boy calleigh and tim: and a boy? Doctor: yes your having twins a girl and boy T: twins?Doctor: yes twins ( tim and calleigh get out of the doctor's appointment and head home ) Ka: hey dad hey calleigh C: kaylee me and your father have something to tell you Ka: what is it C: well i am gonna have twins ka: twins!!!C: yeah T: shocking isn't it ( three months later calleigh wakes up in the middle of the night) C: tim tim T: yeah babeC: i'm having contractionsT: what!! come on lets get you to the hospital( tim and calleigh go to the hospital) ( and a few hours later) T: come on calleigh baby push!! C: ahhhhhhh T: come on babe you can do it push!! ( sound of baby crying) Doctor: its a girl C: oh god not again aaaaahhhhh T: push calleigh push! ( sound of an other baby crying) Doctor: its a boy T: you did great babe what should we name them C: the girl is gonna be hannah marisol speedle T: and the boy is gonna be Zackary timothy speedle C: that name is perfect T: so is hannah ( tim and calleigh kiss and hold their newborn babies)