http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/list/293.page JForum - http://www.jforum.net hi everyone this is a story i wrote a month ago but when they changed the message board i lost it i was sooooo sad but now i am gonna rewrite it and add a few changes hope u like it CHAPTER ONE ( it was a normal day in the csi lab until) Ka: uncle ryan! Ry: kaylee! what are you doing here arent you supposed to be in school Ka: uncle Ryan mom went missing Ry: kaylee what happenedKa: she went out last night and didnt come home she didnt even call me she always calls me if she isnt gonna come home that night Ry: kaylee calm down all right Ka: all right Ry: come on lets go talk to my boss Ka: ok Ry: H H: yes mr wolfe Ry: i need your help H: with what Ry: my sister went out last night and my niece just came in and said she didnt come home and didnt even call that isnt like gina Horatio H: may i see your niece Ry: yeah she is in the break room ( horatio and ryan go to the break room to talk to kaylee ) H: kaylee? Ka: mr caine Ry: you 2 know each other H: yes she is kyle's girlfriend Ry: she's kyle's girlfriendH: yes Ry: oh yeah that's right i forgot H: kaylee i thought you and your mom were going to new york to visit someone Ka: we were until what happened last night Ry: kaylee who were you gonna go visit in new york Ka: mom's friend H: and whats your mom's friend's name Ka: well see we were gonna go to new york and las vegas H: who does your mom know in new york and las vegas Ka: well she knows a guy named mac in new york and a guy named grissom in las vegas H: i know those people Ka: you do H: yes they are very old friends Ry: H what are we gonna do H: well mr wolfe we are gonna find your sister

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/242058.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/242058.page GMT wow that was a good chapter pretty please continue i need more please this is getting good...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/242925.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/242925.page GMT hey theresa its been a while lol u probly dont rember me lol its been a month since we last talked cuz when they changed the message board i lost the original Together Again but now im rewriting it and making a few changes to make it better then the original well hopefully better anyway lol hope to talk to u soon

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/242933.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/242933.page GMT yea i remember you of course i can't forget you i so can't wait to read your story again it was getting good to when the old boards got shut down that pissed me off i tried helping people getting on but they wouldn't work for anyone it did work for a day before then it wouldn't work for me which sucked i tried helping everyone get their stories but it was the same thing....Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/243134.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/243134.page GMT lol its good to see u again and i am sooo pis$ed at the boards for changing it and they didnt even send us anything telling us they were gonna change it and i was 21 chapters into my story!! which got me soo mad and i didnt come back till just today and found the fan ficton thing was back and i looked for the original Togther Again but it wasnt there so i am rewriting it and making a few changes to maybe make it a little better then it was before well hopefully u will like the changes and im gonna explain more this time that is how i am gonna make changes well part of it anyway lol hope to talk to u again soon and its also good to be back lol ^_^~Carly ^__^

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/243218.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/243218.page GMT it is good to see you again yea i was pi$$ed off at the boards too, yea you were 21 chapters into your story that sucks, man i loved that story too, well welcome back its good to have you back, ok cool can't wait to read the whole story again yea talk to you soon....Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/243269.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/243269.page GMT i will post an other chapter tonight after i am done with something that i have to do talk to u later

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/243294.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/243294.page GMT ok bye i'm going to add you to my friends list...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/243299.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/243299.page GMT lol never mind i thought i had to do some school work lol and and yay i am gonna get added to ur friends list lol ur the first person to add me lol ^__^ i will post an other chapter right now well i gotta write it first lol and i have a question how do you add people? cuz i have no idea how lol

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/243310.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/243310.page GMT that's good, your welcome i'm glad to add you i just added you, i can't wait to read more this story is getting good i'm so loving it thank you...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/243322.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/243322.page GMT you click on the persons picture or name and you see a button that says add to friends and it goes to a little thing where you write a message and you write what you want to say and then you press the send button, i hope that helps you out...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/243335.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/243335.page GMT hey great start to the story i never got to read the old one so im looking forward to this one keep going please bel form australia

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/243377.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/243377.page GMT Chapter Two H: but first i have to call an some old friends Ry: grissom and mac?H: yes Ry: i know mac but who is grissomH: Gil Grissom works with the las vegas csi department Ry: oh but how do you know him H: well this girl got kiddnapped and her kidnapper bought her to miami and me and two people from Gil Grissom's team came and well it was a few years ago Ry: oh Kaylee how do you know them Ka: Well after my dad left us mom and me went to las vegas and mom met Grissom and then after a few years me and mom moved to new york and Mac was her boyfriend for a while and i met his stepson reed H: all right kaylee i think me and your uncle have no more questions for you umm wait one more question Ka: what is it H: how did you get here Ka: i rode my skateboard H: all right well your school should be letting out about now i am gonna call kyle and u are gonna stay at my house Ry: umm H H: Ryan i think it would be the safest place for her right now and u can stay over too Ry: no i am good kaylee Ka: yeah uncle ryan Ry: be good Ka: i will try my best ( horatio and ryan walk into horatio's office and Horatio calls the team into his office to decied what they are gonna do next) C: hello Horatio hello ryan whats going on E: calleigh why are you soo cheerful all the time C: eric there is nothing wrong with being cheerful E: but i mean you are way cheeful A: eric would you stop there is nothing wrong with being cheerful H: all right eric calleigh alexx thats enough we have a case E: what is it Ry: my sister gina left my niece home alone last night and didnt come home an didnt even call her C: Ryan you never told us you had a sister Ry: you never asked H: thats enough i am on the phone M: hey horatio H: hi mac how are you M: whats going on this time H: wellM: well what H: you know gina wolfe rightM: yeah me and her went out for a while and her daughter was good friends with reed why whats going on H: well it appears the gina went out last night and left kaylee alone and didnt call her at all M: that doesnt sound like gina H: that is what her brother said M: Ryan? yeah well gina wouldnt do that she loves kaylee sooo much H: thats the only problem M: you think gina's been kidnapped H: its our only explanation M: all right i am on the next flight out of new york and to miami H: see you soon all right team we need to go to gina's house and see if we can find anything out of the ordanairy and Mr Wolfe where is kaylee's dad Ry: he left gina and kaylee when kaylee was one i think kaylee has a picture of him on her nightstand H: all right Mr Wolfe Lets find your sister

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/243397.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/243397.page GMT omg the things got messed up and now its all like in one big bunch i hope u can read it if not i will rewrite the chapter my computer is sooo messed up when i wrote the first chapter i was using my moms but my computer appairentily likes to mess it up and put in all in a big bunch!! ahhhh if u cant read it let me know and i will rewrite the chapter

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/243415.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/243415.page GMT never mind i fixed it lol

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/243424.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/243424.page GMT that was a good chapter i loved it please continue i need more please and i can read it just fine its ok don't worry about i can read it...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/243464.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/243464.page GMT lol when i first posted it it was all bunched up and stuff lol but i fixed it didnt i? lol im happy lol i am happy cuz i am back and posting and stuff lol ^__^ ~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/243475.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/243475.page GMT yea you fixed it please continue soon when you can of course...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/243805.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/243805.page GMT lol i will continue soon im getting tired and aaahhh i missed the season premier of ugly betty oh well lol

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/243863.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/243863.page GMT ok coll thanks and sorry that you missed Ugly Betty i missed the rest of Survivor but oh well i don't care...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/243879.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/243879.page GMT lol on man i meant to watch survivor cuz i havent seen it before lol oh well it will be on next week lol

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/243894.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/243894.page GMT yea or you could watch it online too but its not a good way to watch it i'm probably not going to watch this Season of it though, i wonder who got voted off tonight...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/244102.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/244102.page GMT great chapter loved it ill be watching!!!!! ))

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/245018.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/245018.page GMT Chapter three the shocker of a lifetime H: Mr: wolfe Ry: yeah H H: why did kaylee's dad leave Ry: i don't know i met him once and he was a great guy he loved kaylee and gina sooo much and gina was sooo happy it had been a long time since i had seen her that happy H: Do you remember his name Ry: yeah it Was Tim but i can't remember his last name H: Tim? Ry: wait do you think it could be Tim Speedle H: it may be possible Ry: kaylee has a picture of her dad on her nightstand H: well lets go to your sister's house then ( Horatio ryan calleigh and eric go to gina's house meanwhile at horatio's house where kaylee and kyle are) ka: you know this isnt like my mom she wouldnt just leave me like that Ky: yeah i know Ka: i mean especily after what happened with my dad Ky: true we better get to studying for that test tomorrow Ka: yeah your right ( meanwhile at gina's house) H: your sister has a very nice house Ry: yeah i wonder how long she has been back though C: hey i think i found something Ry: what is it C: a phone number Ry: do you think it could've been the person's phone number of who she went out with last night H: lets find out calleigh get the phone number back to the lab asap C: you got it E: H! H: yeah Eric E: come look at this! H: all right E: look who is in the picture H: speed? E: Tim never said anything about a kid H: i wonder why but i think we should run a dna test to be sure Ry: i will call kaylee and ask her to go to the lab ( ryan calls kaylee ) Ry" hey kay Ka: hey uncle Ry whats going on Ry: can you go to the lab Ka: umm yeah sure what for Ry: Horatio wants to ask a few more questions Ka: ok i will meet you there Ry: all right H ( ryan and horatio and eric head back to the lab ) H" hey kaylee Ka: hi you wanted to ask me something H: would if be all right if i took a smaple of your dna Ka: umm yeah sure ( horatio swabs kaylee's mouth and gets some of speed's dna) ( alexx eric calleigh horatio and ryan are all waiting for the test results and then they finally get back horatio gets the piece of paper ) H: omg she's speed's daughter

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/245409.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/245409.page GMT Hii just read your storyits amazing and i love about Mac coming to Miamiwell best wishesNancy

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/245738.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/245738.page GMT thank you Nancy ~~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/246030.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/246030.page GMT chapter four the truth H: i can't believe this C: oh my god E: how come speed didn't say anything about her H: i don't know but we have to foucus on finding gina right now and i need to go talk to kaylee ( horatio goes to the break room and finds kaylee reading a book ) H: whatcha reading Ka: a book H: kaylee Ka: yeah? H: well i have something to tell you about your father Ka: what is it H: see he use to work for me Ka: mom said he was a cop but she didn't really tell me much more about him H: kaylee we are gonna find your mother and right now i think its best you go back to my house and stay there Ka: ok but can i say bye to my uncle H: of course ( horatio walks out of the break room and sends ryan in ) Ry: hey kay ( kaylee laughs ) Ka: hi uncle Ry Ry: hey i love you Ka: i love you too uncle ryan ( ryan and kaylee hug ) Ry: you better get going Ka: yeah bye Ry: bye C: god she is such a sweet little girl Ry: little? calleigh she's 14 C: she is?Ry: yeah C: wow Ry: i know C: she has soo much of speed in her Ry: really? C: yeah she has his eyes and hair and sense of humor and sarcasmness and a bunch of other stuff Ry: she is very sarcastic ( Ryan and calleigh laugh) Ry: but i love her even though she is a trouble maker C: ryan she isnt a girly girl is she? Ry: you couldnt tell from the skateboard? yeah she hates pink and girly stuff C: i see what sports does she like Ry: baseball basketball swimming soccer skateboarding C: wow Ry: yeah i know ( later that night) H: well i think its time we head home for the night E: yeah good night H C: night guys A: good night Ry: night H: ryan are you sure you dont wanna come over to my house for the night Ry: no i'm good and i know kaylee is in good handsH: good night Mr Wolfe ( horatio gets home and finds kaylee and kyle watching a movie ) H: guys its midnight you should be in bed Ky: dad we are still studying for our finals H: you two need to go to bed so good night Ky: night dad night kaylee Ka: night kyle night Mr. caine H: good night ( horatio kaylee and kyle all head off to bed ) ( later that night someone breaks into kaylee's bedroom and the man puts his hand over kaylee's mouth horatio hears the noise and grabs his gun and walks to the guest bedroom where kaylee's is sleeping) H: put your hands up! T: horatio wait! H: speed? Ka: dad?

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/246209.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/246209.page GMT oh my God!!i cant believe it!!!Speed is still alive!!!yeahhplease write morei cant wait to see what happend next!!Nancy

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/246275.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/246275.page GMT Chapter five the reason why H: speed your supposed to be dead T: i know H but i can explain H: well then explain T: can we talk somewhere else? H: yeah kaylee go back to sleep you have a big test tomorrow Ka: i will try ( tim and horatio walk into the living room ) T: see there was a reason why i leftH: but speed i don't get why you left gina and kaylee T: it was only to protect them H: from what T: H i work for the F.B.I and when kaylee was one i got called in and they wanted me to work a case with jake berkley H: wait jake berkley? T: yeah he is the one who has been letting me know you guys are all right H: but speed how did you find out about gina being kidnapped we didn't tell jake about the case T: he overheard you guys talking about it H: i see T: and when he told me i asked him where kaylee was and here i am H: but why did you come speed do you know the guy who kidnapped gina? T: yeah his name is david and i don't know his last name but H: but what T: he is a very dangerus man horatio i mean he tried to kill me and he threatened kaylee and gina H: speed we need to tell the team T: H we can't kaylee and gina are already in enough danger H: speed we need to tell them T: H did you not just hear a word i just said H; i heard you loud and clear T: we can't tell the team that i am still alive! it will put kaylee and gina in more danger and you and kyle H: speed lets dicuss this in the morning T; fine ( horatio went into the hall closet and pulled out a blanket and a pillow for speed an they both went to sleep) ( the next morning) Ky: morning dad morning stranger wait dad who is that H: he is an old friend Ka: kyle we need to go or we are gonna be late Ky: yeah true bye dad bye dad's old friend Ka: bye Mr caine bye dad H: speed we better get to the lab T: all right ( speed and horatio head off to the lab while kaylee and kyle ride their skateboards to school like they do every morning meanwhile at the lab) E: morning H morning Speed!?T; hi C: but your supposed to be dead!! T: i know its a long story H: well well well look who finally arrived M: hi horatio hi calleigh hi eric hi Tim? H: good morning mac E: yeah hi mac ( tim explains why he left and says sorry ) ( meanwhile kaylee and kyle are riding their skateboards to school when a car starts following them ) Ka: kyle is that car following us? Ky: yeah ( two men get out of the car and cloroform kaylee and kyle and put them in the car) ( meanwhile at the lab horatio gets a phone call and the person on the phone asks to talk to tim speedle) T: David? D: hey timmy guess who i have T: i swear if you hurt them! D: if you listen to what i say and do what i say then maybe i will let them go T: What do you want D: you know what i want timmy you!! T: where are you taking them! D: to las vegas hope to see you there timmy

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/246866.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/246866.page GMT chapter six las vegas timmy T: they are taking them to las vegas H: well then i guess we will have to go to las vegas T: H let me do this alone H: speed he has my son ( the phone rings and its david asking for speed again) D: oh and by the way timmy we dont just have kaylee and kyle and gina we also have reed garret you know mac's stepson ( david hangs up) T: mac they have reed too M: wait so what does this guy want T; i dont know that is what i've been trying to figure out H: well let me call an old friend and we will be on our way to las vegas ( horatio calls grissom and explains what is going on and tells grissom that they will be there soon) H: lets be on our way ( a few hours later the team is in las vegas) Gri: hey horatio H: its nice to meet you in person grissom Gri: you too this is my team this is greg sanders nick stokes and you know cathrine and warrick Cat: well lets get down to business Gre: lets get down to business? ummm cathrine what the Cat: greg be quiet Gri: so they have kaylee gina kyle and reed? H: yes they do Gri: but one thing i don't understand is ( then all of a sudden the phone rings its david again ) T: what is it this time david D: i just called to say we are moving again T: where are you going this time D: new york T: new york? D: hope to see you there timmy T: great he is taking us on a wild goose chase H: well lets go to new york M: i will call my team and tell them W: whoohoo we are going to new york N: Warrick what is up with that W: i have never been to new york Gri: guys would you stop T: H i gotta go by myself its not you guys he wants its me H: but speed he has my son and mac's stepson T: H i can get then back just don't do this anymore your in even more danger then you were before H: and speed that is a risk i am willing to take M: i just got done talking to stella lets get on the next flight to new york ( the teams get on a filght and head to new york)

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/247170.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/247170.page GMT good chapter i loved it please continue i need more Carly please...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/247214.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/247214.page GMT lol i will post more soon its like 9:14 where i am what time is it where u r

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/247225.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/247225.page GMT i have to go at like 9:30 my time lol

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/247231.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/247231.page GMT chapter seven new york timmy ( the teams arrive in new york and head to the lab) H: all right so whats the plan ( the phone rings) T: what now david D: well timmy i will let them all go if you do what i say T: what david D: well first you get me five thousend dollars and then you go to the warehouse you remember the warehouse timmyT: yeah i remember the warehouse D: good and one more thing T: what D: leave the rest out of it!! ( david hangs up )T: he wants five thousend dollars and he wants me to bring it to him alone H: speed that is not an optionM: horatio's right St: well we can always just let tim do it himself T: thank you for backing me up stella H: now is not the time for this speed i can get you the money i will go make the call now T: thank you H Dan: well maybe we should go with you though and hide out and if we hear any gunshots or anything we bust in T: that's the right idea danny M: well lets set out plan into action ( tim and the teams head off to the warehouse) T: all right david i got your money now let them go D: but first i wanna chat don't you T: let them go david!!D: timmy i don't think you wanna be talking to me that way T: david i did what you asked now please let them go D: why i wanna chat with you little brother

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/247736.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/247736.page GMT Chapter Eight Little brother T: yeah david D: so how are mom and dad doing T: i don't know david concidering i haven't seen them in four years D: yeah your right little brother T: david just go to D: stop right there timmy T: david let them go ( david gets his gun out) T: david put the gun away D: not a chance little brother T: david come on your better then this D: am i am i really? timmy T: all right enough of the crap now let them go!!D: no way timmy because i wanna chat with you T: david i have had enough D: now is that any way to talk to your older brother now i don't think so ( david punches tim ) T: aahh D: don't speak to me like that again got it ( tim punches david ) D: wow little brother you can pack a punch but i have a gun T: don't do it david!! ( a shot goes off ) T: No!!!

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/247892.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/247892.page GMT wow what a good chapter please continue soon i need more soon when you can...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/247921.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/247921.page GMT Chapter nine the death of a loved one T: gina!! Ka: mom! ( then S.W.A.T busts in ) D: you idiot! timmy! you brought the cops!! T: David! go to hel! Ka: mom!! ( ryan see's gina lying on the floor and rushes over to help her ) Ry: gina stay with me ( horatio unties kaylee kyle and reed and kyle and reed take kaylee outside) ( then the S.W.A.T team arrests david and tim runs over to gina ) T: gina baby please stay with me i love you Ry: tim she's gone T: oh god no baby no ( tim walks outside to find kyle reed and calleigh trying to comfort kaylee ) Ka: dad! where's mom is she ok! T: kaylee she's gone Ka: no!! ( kaylee trys to run into the warehouse but tim stops her ) T: kaylee baby its gonna be all right Ka: no its not!! ( tim wraps kaylee in his arms ) T: yes it is baby ( a few hours later kaylee kyle tim and the team are back in miami and a few days after its time for gina's memorial) Ka: i love you mom forever and always T: gina baby i promise i am gonna take good care of kaylee and i love you Ry: gina i promise i will look after kaylee god i love you gina ( then ryan kaylee and tim head home) T: kaylee baby why don't you go and rest for a while Ka: ok dad Ry: tim i know how much you loved my sister T: we were high school sweethearts did she ever tell you that Ry: no we didn't really talk much but i loved her so much T: ryan i loved her too Ry: its gonna be hard T: yeah it is espeicaly for kaylee Ry: yeah ( kaylee overhears them talking and starts to cry )

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/248328.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/248328.page GMT please continue this is getting good that last chapter was good...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/248501.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/248501.page GMT Chapter ten moving on part one of two Ka: good morning dad good morning unlce Ryan Ry: morning kaylee T: good morning kaylee Ka: what smells so good T: its called bacon and eggs Ka: yay my favorit Ry: well i better get off to work cya later tim bye kaylee Ka: bye uncle ryan T: you better hurry up and eat today is your last day of school Ka: i am hurrying don't rush me too much T: i need to go get dressed for work Ka: ok dad i will do the dishes T: ok sweetheart Ka: ok dad kyle is here i will see you after you get home from work T: all right bye sweetheart ( kaylee heads off to scholl with kyle and tim heads off to work) T: hey eric E: hey speed how are you T: ok you? E: fine C: hi guys T: aren't you supposed to be off today?C: well i was but nataila has the flu so i gotta fill in for her today so hows it going T: fine E: all right C: ok then lets get to work T: she is way too cheerful ( eric and tim laugh and head into the lab ) T: hey H E: hey H H: hello gentelmenC: hey tim come over here T: ok whats up C: i was wondering if you wanted to catch up tonight after work T: ok where C: how about my place T: ok i will call kaylee and tell her i will be home late ( tim calls kaylee and lets her know he is gonna be home late) ( that night) T: hey cal you ready C: yeah just hold on a minute T: ok C: all right i am ready lets go ( tim and calleigh go to calleigh's place and talk for a few hours ) T: its midnight i better be getting home C: yeah you should get home i will see you tomorrow at 7:00 T: yeah night C: night ( calleigh closes the door behind tim and smiles and tim gets in his car and smiles )

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/248607.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/248607.page GMT LOVE UR STORIE .KEEP GOING

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/248617.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/248617.page GMT Chapter Eleven Moving on part two ( a few weeks later T: kaylee come on its time to get up Ka: i am up i am just getting ready! T: ok Ka: ok i am ready for camp T: ok lets go ( tim drives kaylee to camp then heads back home to get ready for his date with calleigh) T: hey ryan Ry: hey you look nice where are you going T: i have a date Ry: with who T: calleigh Ry:i see listen me and nataila are going on a date tonight you wanna tag alone T: no thanks Ry: all right see ya later T: ryan Ry: yeah T: i think tonight will be the night Ry: that what T: you know Ry; i see well have fun T: you too ( tim goes to calleigh's place ) T: hey cal C: hey tim oh you brought me flowers how sweet thank you T: your welcome ( they talk for a while and then they kiss) T; i am sorry C: no i am sorry ( they both laugh ) T" calleigh C: yeah tim T: i love you C: i love you too now what do you say we go up to my bedroom T: that sounds great ( tim picks calleigh up and takes her to the bedroom and they make love) ( the next morning) T: good morning sunshine C: good morning T: oh man we better get ready or we are gonna be late for work C; yeah but wait tim T: yeah cal C: i love you T: i love you too baby( they kiss and get ready for work then head off to work)

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/248730.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/248730.page GMT Chapter Twelve true love ( two months later calleigh and tim were on a date when) T: calleigh C: yeah tim ( tim gets down on one knee ) T: will you marry meC: oh my god yes!! yes( they kiss ) C: babe T: yeah C: i have something to tell you T: what is it C: i'm pregnet T: your what wait how far along are you C: two months T: so its was from C: yeah T: this is great C: we just better hope nobody finds out about us T: and how are we gonna do that calleigh i mean come on C: yeah true T; so C: i guess this means i gotta move in now?T: yeah C: have you told kaylee yet T: i think we both should tell her C: ok ( the next day tim and calleigh tell kaylee that they are gonna get married and that kaylee is gonna have a little baby brother or sister) Ka: yay this is the best birthday present ever! ( the next day) C: hey eric E: hey cal hey speed TT: hey H: calleigh and speed may i talk to you guys please Tim and cal: sure T: what is it H H: i heard that you two are getting married and are expecting a baby T: did kaylee tell you that H: no but you just told me yourselfs C: horatio me and tim love each other soo much T: we do H H: sounds like you two have true love

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/248855.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/248855.page GMT i love it thank you please continue i need more please...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/248891.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/248891.page GMT Chapter 13 the wedding T: yeah H we do have true love H: but look what the cat dragged in rick stetler R: speedle calleigh! over here now!T: rick if you are gonna fire one of us make it me R: who said anything about firing anyone just don't let your relationship get in the way of your work T: you got it ( rick walks away and calleigh and tim breath a sigh of relief) H: so calleigh how far along are you C: two monthsH; and when's the wedding T: well we wanna get married before the baby is born so soon C: yup H why don't you two head home for the day and spend some time with kayleeT: ok thanks H C: thank you horatio H: your welcome ( four months later calleigh is six months pregnet and today is the day of calleigh and tim's wedding eric and ryan are tim's best men and kaylee is calleigh's maid of honor) Preacher: do you tim speedle take this woman to be your lawfully wedded wifeT: i do Preacher: and do you calleigh du something take this man to be your lawfully wedded husbandC: i do preacher: i now pronounce you husband and wife you may now kiss the bride ( tim and calleigh kiss) T: i love you cal C: i love you too

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/249503.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/249503.page GMT Chapter 14 the new addition to the speedle family ( too weeks after the wedding tim and calleigh are at calleigh's doctor appointment)Doctor: do you want to know if its a boy or girl C: do you tim T: its up to you C: yes we want to know Doctor: well you are gonna have a baby girl C: tim you hear that a girl! Doctor: and a boy calleigh and tim: and a boy? Doctor: yes your having twins a girl and boy T: twins?Doctor: yes twins ( tim and calleigh get out of the doctor's appointment and head home ) Ka: hey dad hey calleigh C: kaylee me and your father have something to tell you Ka: what is it C: well i am gonna have twins ka: twins!!!C: yeah T: shocking isn't it ( three months later calleigh wakes up in the middle of the night) C: tim tim T: yeah babeC: i'm having contractionsT: what!! come on lets get you to the hospital( tim and calleigh go to the hospital) ( and a few hours later) T: come on calleigh baby push!! C: ahhhhhhh T: come on babe you can do it push!! ( sound of baby crying) Doctor: its a girl C: oh god not again aaaaahhhhh T: push calleigh push! ( sound of an other baby crying) Doctor: its a boy T: you did great babe what should we name them C: the girl is gonna be hannah marisol speedle T: and the boy is gonna be Zackary timothy speedle C: that name is perfect T: so is hannah ( tim and calleigh kiss and hold their newborn babies)

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/249608.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/249608.page GMT good chapter Carly i loved it please continue i need more please this is getting good...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/249809.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/249809.page GMT Chapter 15 the end of the story T; hey eric hey ryan alexx and horatio Ry: so where are the new additions T: over there A: awww they are soo cute what are their names C: Zackary and hannah Ry: what cute names E: speed you have outdone yourself ( tim laughs) C: eric it wasn't all him E: you did great too calleigh T: ryan you wanna hold one Ry: ok ( tim picks hannah up and puts her in ryan's arms ) C: and we made her middle name a little longer Ry: really? C: yup its now hannah gina marisol speedle Ry: gina? T: yeah wait where is kaylee Ry: her baseball game T: baseball game oh thats right kaylee's playoff game was today Ry: yeah ( meanwhile when kaylee gets home ) Ry: kaylee Ka: yeah Ry: calleigh had the babies Ka: oh that would explain why they weren't at my biggest baseball game of this season Ry: kaylee Ka: i know i know besides we lost anyway Ry: you lost? Ka: yeah Ry: come on lets go to the hospital T: there you are sweetie i am so sorry Ka: its fine dad we lost anyway ( tim hugs kaylee) Ka: so where are my little brother and sister C: right here Ka: what are their names T: zackary and hannah Ka: can i hold one C: yeah here you can hold zackary ( kaylee picks up zackary) Ka: can i call him zack for short C; yeah ( a few weeks later everyone is happy and healthy )

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/250541.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/250541.page GMT and just so everyone knows that was the last chapter of Together Again but i am gonna make a sequal i haven't decieded on the name of it but i will let you guys know ~~Carly~~ ^__^

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/250548.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/250548.page GMT and it will take place a few years after the babies are born

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/250561.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/250561.page GMT know what never mind about the sequal i am just gonna keep the story Together Again but the next chapters will take place a few years after the babies were born hope you like them ~~Carly~~ ^__^

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/250570.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/250570.page GMT Chapter 16 everything goes wrong ( this takes place four years after hannah and zackary were born) T: hey H H: good morning speed how are the kids T: they are great H: how are they enjoying pre-k T: they love it H; how is kaylee T: great i just talked to her last night H: its hard to believe she is 19 now T: yeah it is C: hey guys H: hello calleigh A: hey tim and calleigh C: hey alexx T: hi alexx E: hey guys T: hey eric H: speed where is ryan T: he has the flu H: ok ( the phone rings ) T: speedle Ka: hey dad T: hey sweetheart Ka: dad would you and calleigh like to meet for dinner tonight T: sure what time Ka: say around 7:30 T: ok Ka: ok bye daddy i love you T: bye sweetheart love you too C: what was that about T: kaylee wants to meet us for dinner tonight C: i wonder what she has to tell us T: H would you know anything about this H: no T: your lying H: yes but i was told to let them tell you T: ok then ( later that day kaylee kyle calleigh and tim are all at dinner when) Ka: daddy calleigh we have some news for you guys T: ok Ky: we are getting married T: what Ka: yeah ( tim and calleigh go home in shock) ( the next day) T: hi H H: still in shock huh? T: yeah i just can't believe my little girl is getting married H: she is not that little anymore T: no she's not ( the phone rings) T: hey cal whats up C: tim somone took Hannah and zackary from school T: what!!!

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/250932.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/250932.page GMT holy shit please continue Carly i need more pleaseeeeeeeee...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/250968.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/250968.page GMT lol i will post more soon and just wait for what else i have in store lol ~~Carly~~ ^__^

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/251046.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/251046.page GMT ok i won't be here at like 6:30 my time but i'll be back at like 8:30 or 8 hopefully....Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/251060.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/251060.page GMT ok wait what time it is over there now ~~Carly~~ ^__^

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/251124.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/251124.page GMT HeyKeep going please!!I Love this story!!GracieCAINE GIRLS!!THERESA LIZZIE GRACIE

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/251146.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/251146.page GMT its 8:06 P.M. here right now i'm home from my church thing....Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/251356.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/251356.page GMT ok i am kinda busy right now but i will post the next chapter in like 20 minutes or so and its like 9:10 p.m here lol ~~Carly~~ ^__^

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/251368.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/251368.page GMT so wow we are only like an hour and 4 minutes apart in time lol ~~Carly~~ ^__^

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/251372.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/251372.page GMT Chapter 17 David's return T: what do you mean someone took hannah and zackary from school!! C: baby i am on my way to the labT: ok i will see you in a few( then kyle comes walking into the lab) Ky: kaylee's missing T: what H: speed i just got word that your brother david escaped from prison last night T: oh no not again Ky: dad can i talk to you for a minute alone H: yeah in a minute son T: god my 19 year old daughter getting married and then this H: speed kaylee is gonna marry kyle T: i know H he's 20 H: and he loves her a lot ( then H walks over to kyle ) H: kyle what is it Ky: we didn't tell him yet so if you could keep it a secret for a while longer H: i will try my best son ( then calleigh comes walking into the lab and ryan comes in soon after ) Ry: whats going on T: hannah zackary and kaylee were taken by david and ryan congrats on the baby Ry: uh thanks natalia is due in like 4 months now ( tim's phone rings) T: speedle D: hello little brother its nice to hear from you again T: you are one sick a** hole D: well your kids are soooo cute and did kyle and kaylee tell you T: that they are getting married yes D: but what about the other thing T: what other thing? ( david hangs up) T: ok what other thing didn't you tell me about kyle Ky: kaylee's pregnant T: what!!! my 19 year old daughter is pregnant!!!

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/251467.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/251467.page GMT pretty please continue i need more Carly i knew it i so knew it i knew she was probably pregnant please continue soon...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/251778.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/251778.page GMT Chapter 18 david's return part two T:i can't believe this C: wow how far along is she? Ky; three months C: when did you two find out Ky: about a week ago Ry: so my 19 year old niece is pregnant?Ky: yeah ( the phone rings) T: helloD: hello little brother quite a shocker isn't it T: david what do you want D: i want to chat with you and i want a million dollars T: again? ( david hangs up ) ( meanwhile where the kids are) Ka: you sick a** hole let us go!! D: shut up kaylee ( meanwhile back at the lab) H; he wants a million dollars again? T; yeah H: i've got an idea T: what is it ( horatio explains the plan) ( meanwhile where the kids are) Ka: come here hannah and zack D: your daddy will be here soon and when he gets here i will....... kill him!!!! ( meanwhile back at the lab) T: do you think it will work? H: its the only plan i've got C: lets just think of other ways T: calleigh right now it is the only way ( tim heads to the warehouse where david is keeping kaylee hannah and zack) T: david i got your money Ka: daddy watch out!! ( a gunshot goes off)

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/252440.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/252440.page GMT HeyCarry On Please!!!I Love Thia Story!!GracieCAINE GIRLS!!THERESA LIZZIE GRACIE

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/252454.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/252454.page GMT Chapter 19 david's return was short lived Ka: uncle ryan!! T: ryan!! D: timmy i told you not to bring anyone!! T; he followed me ( david reloads his gun and tim grabs his gun) T: let them go!! david!! D: not a chance!! ( an other gunshot goes off and david falls to the floor) T: ryan easy man stay with me kaylee go outside and get horatio! Ka: come on hannah and zack ( kaylee runs outside) C: oh thank god!! Ka: uncle ryan's been shot he needs help!! H: kaylee he is gonna be ok he was wearing a bulletproof vest Ka: thank god Ky: kaylee Ka: kyle Ky: oh thank god your all right ( tim and ryan walkoutside ) Ka: daddy! T: come here baby ( tim and kaylee hug) T: i hear i am gonna be a grandfather Ka: yeah you are C: congratulations kaylee Ka: thanks calleigh ( kaylee and calleigh hug) Ha: daddy mommy T: yeah hannah Ha: i love you C: we love you too sweetheart Z: me love you too ( tim calleigh zack and hannah all hug ) T: lets go home Ha: yay homey!! ( tim and calleigh laugh) ( they all head home and calleigh and tim put hannah and zack down for bed then head out to the living room) T: cal C: yeah babe T: what do you say we have a little fun C: that sounds wonderful ( tim picks calleigh up and they head to the bedroom and make love all night long ) ( the next morning ) T: hannah zack its time to get up Ha: k daddy Z; ok dad T: get in your seats for breakfast Ha: smells yummy whats for beakfast T: eggs and toast Z: yay!! ( tim laughs and calleigh comes out of the bedroom and tim gives her a kiss) T: good morning babe C: good morning Ha: morning mommy Z: morning mom C: good morning hannah and zack ( calleigh gives them a hug then the doorbell rings) T:i will get it ( tim opened the door and couldn't believe who was standing there )

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/253120.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/253120.page GMT Hey Keep Going Please!!!I Love This Story!!Gracie

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/253164.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/253164.page GMT Chapter 20 the sickness T: jake J: hey speed C: oh my god hey jake J: hey cal T: come on in man Ha: mommy me all done with beakfast C: ok hannah go brush your teeth Ka: k mommy Z: me not feeling good C: aww come here you your running a fever ( calleigh takes zack into his bedroom and lays him down for a nap ) Ha: me all done T: ok come here you hannah this is your uncle jake Ha: hi J: hi there C: hannah come on you gotta go to school Ha: k mommy C: tim i am gonna drop off zack at ryan and natalia's and take hannah to preschool i will see you at work T: ok babe J: you two are so great together T: yeah J: you better get off to work T: yeah i guess i will talk to you later man J: yeah see ya ( tim heads off to work) T: hey eric E: oh hey speed T: hey are you all right man E: yeah i'm just tired T: you sure your ok?E: yeah man i'm fine C: hey guys E: hey cal ( calleigh's phone rings )C: hello N: hey zack is really sick he is running a 102 fever C: ok i will be right there T: whats going on C: zack is running a bit of a fever i am gonna take the rest of the day off T: ok baby see you at home ( calleigh leaves the room and eric passes out) T: eric!! eric man wake up Ry: whats going on T: ryan call an ambulance ( ryan calls an ambulance) Ry: what happened T: i don't know one minute we were talking and the next minute he just passed out

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/253514.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/253514.page GMT OMG ,NOT MI ERIK .I HOPE HE'S OK N ZACH .POST MORE PLZ

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/253528.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/253528.page GMT Chapter 21 the sickness part 2 T: come on eric man wake up Ry: god dam it where is the ambulance!! H: guys whats going on T: he just passed out H: ok the ambulance is here Paramedic: he is really hot T: dude your a guy Paramedic: not like that i mean he is running a really high fever ( the paramedics load eric up into the ambulance and tim's phone rings) T: yeah cal C: i had to take zack to the hospital he is running like 105 fever T: ok i'm on my way umm H could you do me a favor and watch hannah for me zack is in the hospital H: no problem now go T: thanks H mr wolfe why don't you take the rest of the day off Ry: umm sure H ( tim and ryan head to the hospital ) T: cal whats going on C: i don't know he just started burning up all of a sudden Ry: eric passed out at the lab and he was running a really high fever do you think they could have the same thing T: its possible N: i am gonna sit down my feet are killing me ( kaylee comes walking into the hospital) Ka: whats going on T: zack and eric both have seriusly high fevers Ka: what happened T: we don't know ( the doctor comes walking out ) doctor: well it seems that they both have the flu and the fever's have gone down T: but how did they get such high fever'ss doctor: sometimes that happens with the flu but we are gonna keep them both in the hospital until they are better C: can we see zack and eric doctor: sure they are in the same room follow me ( they go to see zack and eric and breathe a sigh of relief )

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/253555.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/253555.page GMT Keep Going Please!!!Gracie

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/253576.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/253576.page GMT those were good and intense chapters please continue carly i need more pleaseeeee...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/253595.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/253595.page GMT lol i will post an other chapter right now

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/253597.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/253597.page GMT ok cool thank you Carly i'll finish writing this next chapter of my story for you girls...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/253605.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/253605.page GMT Chapter 22 new addition's once again ( 3 and a half months after the flu scare natalia is 8 and a half months pregnant and kaylee is 6 and a half months pregnant ) T: ok who wants hot dogs Ha: me daddy!! ( tim laughs ) T: here you go sweetheart Ha: thanks daddy N: god she is such a sweetie C: yeah oh my god be right back T: cal are you all right C: i am feeling sick i will be right back Ry: something tells me T: yeah i know i am getting that same feelingC: uhh i need to run to the store and pick up something i will be back in a few minutes N: ok cal i will go with you C: ok ( calleigh and natalia head off to the store) H: hey guys Ry: hey H Ha: uncle horatio H: hey hannah come here you ( horatio's phone rings) H: hello M: hey babe H: hey marisol M: hey i am on my way to the barbeque H: ok sweetheart i will see you in a few E: H you and my sister make a perfect coupleT: yeah you guys really do ( calleigh and natalia get back from the store and calleigh goes upstairs ) T: where's cal N: she felt sick again ( meanwhile where calleigh is) C: oh my god i'm pregnant ( calleigh heads downstairs) C: well i got news T: your pregnant C: yeah ( tim walks over to calleigh and kisses her then marisol comes) M: hey guys E: hey marisol Ka: i am so happy for you guys ( kaylee hugs calleigh and tim) T: thanks sweetheart Z: ouch Ka: whats wrong Z: i fell and got a boo boo Ka: come here zack lets go in the house and get a band-aid for that boo boo Z: k ( kaylee grabs zack's hand and they walk into the house) M: she is really a natural with kids Ky: yeah she is M: and kyle sir where's my hug Ky: oops ( kyle hugs marisol) E: i am so happy for you guys married so in love i just hope i can find someone like that soon M: you will eric you are such a great guy N: ummm ryan Ry: yeah nat N: i'm going into labor

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/253630.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/253630.page GMT good chapter that is so funny pleaseee more i'm posting the next chapter of my story right now Carly...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/253638.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/253638.page GMT HeyKEEP GOING PLEASE!!!GRACIEE

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/253655.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/253655.page GMT Chapter 23 new addition's once again part two Ry: what come on lets get you to the hospital ( ryan and natalia head to the hosptal) C: all right hannah its time to go inside Ha: k mommy ( everyone heads inside ) Ka: calleigh me and kyle can watch hannah and zack C: ok we will see you later Ka: bye ( tim calleigh horatio and marisol head to the hospital) ( a few hours later ) Ry: come on natalia you can do it push!! N: i can't it hurts too much Ry: come on babe you gotta push N: aaaaahhhhhh Ry: come on natalia push!! Doctor: listen natalia i need you to push as hard as you can all right the baby's head is stuck so i need you to push as hard as you can N: aaaahhhhhhh Doctor: all right the heads out come on natalia two more big pushes N: ahhhhhhhhhhhh Doctor: the baby is out and its a boy Ry: you hear that babe we gotta boy!! Doctor: whats his name gonna be N: evan ( ryan walks out into the waiting room where calleigh tim horatio and marisol are) Ry: its a boy!!! T: congratulations C: whats his name Ry: evan H: good for you ryan you have a baby boy Ry: thanks H( ryan walks back into natalia's room) Ry: hey babe N: hey you wanna hold him Ry: yeah ( ryan picks up evan) Ry: hey there little guy god natalia he's perfect N: yeah he is ( ryan hands evan over to natalia) N: he's our little boy Ry: yeah ( ryan kisses natalia on the forehead and then kisses evan on the forehead ) Ry: god he's so perfect ( tim and calleigh walk into the room) C: awwww he's soo cute T: you out did yourself ryan ( ryan laughs) Ry: god i never knew that i could love two people this much ( tim hugs ryan) T: when you have the people you love it's all that matters and you will do anything to protect them Ry: yeah

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/253707.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/253707.page GMT good chapter i loved it pleaseee continue Carly i need more please ok i'm writing the next chapter of People's Mistakes right now....Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/253755.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/253755.page GMT cool thanks theresa ~~Carly~~ ^__^

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/253757.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/253757.page GMT your welcome Carly i'm writing it right now...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/253769.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/253769.page GMT ok cool i have to go for a bit but i will be back in like 30 to 45 minutes talk to you in a bit ~~Carly~~ ^__^

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/253775.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/253775.page GMT ok bye i'm going to go take my shower so i don't miss a minute of CSI MIAMI tonight Episode 2 We Won't Get Fueled Again comes on so i'll be back soon too talk to you soon Carly, and in this chapter you find out who's Ryan's Niece...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/253805.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/253805.page GMT yeah i can't wait for the new episode tonight!! and when it is over we can talk about it!! lol ~~Carly~~ ^__^

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/253926.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/253926.page GMT yea hey do you have a email address mine is kiefersutherlandfan_1@hotmail.
com it starts in less than an hour YAY i can't wait Calleigh get's into that car wreck then gets sued, then the new M.E. comes in Tara Price...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/253973.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/253973.page GMT Chapter 24 family bonds ( a few days later evan and natalia are home and healthy) ( sound of baby crying) N: come here you awww whats the matter you hungry ( natalia grabs a bottle out of the fridge and warms it up and feeds evan) N: there you go ( meanwhile at kaylee and kyle's house) Ka: what color do you think we should paint the walls Ky: well not yellow Ka: maybe some kinda green Ky: yeah that would work Ka: its almost time for the doctor's appointment i can't wait to find out if its a boy or girl Ky: i thought we were gonna wait Ka: we changed out minds remember Ky: oh yeah (kaylee and kyle head off to the doctor's appointment) Doctor: the baby is healthy and its gonna be a girl Ky: a girl Ka: oh my god a girl ( meanwhile at tim and calleigh's house) C: tim what are you making for dinner T: i told you its a suprise C: fine then i better go wake the kids up from their nap Ha: i'm already awake mommy C: aww come here you ( calleigh hugs hannah) Ha: i hungy ( tim laughs) T: dinner will be ready in a few minutes sweetheart Ha: k daddy ( Calleigh walks into zack's room and finds he is awake so she picks him up and takes him out to the dining room) Z: dinner smell good C; yeah it does here tim let me set the table for you T: ok ( calleigh sets the table and zack and hannah sit in their chairs) T: all right dinner is ready Ha: yay foody Z: food rocks ( tim and calleigh laugh ) ( meanwhile at horatio's and marisol's house) H: soo M: babe H: yeah M: you wanna have a little fun tonight H: i sure do M: lets go up to the bedroom and have some fun H: sounds wonderful (horatio and marisol make love all night long ) ( the next morning at natalia and ryan's house) N: babe what smells good Ry: breakfast N: wow breakfast Ry: yeah breakfast N: i didn't know you could cook Ry: my sister tought me N: i see ( sound of baby crying ) N: and there is someone else who wants breakfast (meanwhile at eric's place) E: man why is there nothing good on ( the doorbell rings) E: coming!! ( he opened the door and there was a beautiful woman standing at the door ) L: hi i'm Lexie i'm tim speedle's sister

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/253976.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/253976.page GMT and yea i have an e-mail address but i don't feel safe giving it out

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/253982.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/253982.page GMT ok its ok...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/253998.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/253998.page GMT good chapter Carly i loved it pleaseee continue i'm posting my next chapter right now...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/254013.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/254013.page GMT Chapter 25 family bonds part two E: hi i'm eric delko may i help you L: uh yeah i'm looking for my brotherE: yeah here come in and i will give you his address L: thanks E: no problem can i get you a glass of water or something L: a glass of water would be greatE: and here is your brother's address L: thank you ( meanwhile at tim and calleigh's house the doorbell rings) T: i will get it!! L: hi tim T: lexie what are you doing here L: well i figured i would come to see my big bro T: how have you been L: ok i guess you know been traveling a lot C: babe who is at the door L: babe? T: uh yeah come in lexie C: tim who is this T: this is my sister lexie L: hi you must be tim's wife calleigh C: yeah its nice to meet you T: how did you L: mom and dad sent me letters Ha: daddy i had a bad dream T: come here you ( tim picks hannah up) T: god your getting heavy ( tim carries hannah back to her bedroom) L: sooo kids huh C: and an other on the way L: congratulations T: all right i got hannah down L: so hows kaylee doing i heard she is getting married and expecting a baby T: yeah and she doing great L ; i met your friend eric he gave me your address cause mom and dad messed the address up again T: yeah mom and dad tend to do that a lot ( meanwhile at eric's place) ( eric calls marisol) M: hey little brother whats up E: mari i think i finally met the one M: what E: a girl came knocking at my door and she was soo beatiful and when i looked into her eyes it was just magic (meanwhile at tim and calleighs place) T: so why are you in town L: well i figured it was about time i headed home and settled down and about you friend eric T: what about eric L: i think he's the one T: what???? L: well when he opened the door he was soo handsome and when i looked into his eyes i saw magic T: really? L: yeah C: guys its about time you head to bed T: ok honey come on lexie i will take you to the guest bedroom L: oh no you don't have to i am staying at mom and dad's C: no your not L: ok then ( tim and calleigh went to lay down and lexie couldn't sleep cause she could only think about eric) (meanwhile at eric's place eric couldn't fall asleep either cause he could only think about lexie)

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/254331.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/254331.page GMT good chapter Carly i loved it please continue soon...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/254378.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/254378.page GMT Chapter 26 true love will keep us apart?( the next morning at tim and calleigh's place) L: good morning C: morning tim had to go to work did you sleep good?L: yeah Z: me up mommy C: ok zack go sit in your chair for breakfast Z: yay beakfast Ha: morning mommy C: morning hannah Ha: mommy who is the lady over there C: that is your aunt lexie Ha: oh hi L: hi C: hannah go sit in your chair Ha: kay mommy L: they are so cute C: yeah do you wanna know where tim works L: i already know unless my parents messed that up too C: ok ( lexie goes to the lab) L: hey tim T: hey lex H: you must be lexie L: yeah and you must be horatio H: nice to meet you E: hey speed hey H hi lexie L: hi eric ( tim noticed something was wrong with lexie but he couldn't figure out what and it wasn't because eric was here) L: uhh tim can i talk to you over there T: uhh sure whats up L: i need your help T: with what L: see the reason i came back into town was well T: lexie L: i have an abusive boyfriend and T: whoa whoa wait what happened L: well when we first met and a few times after that he was a really great guy but after a while he just started hitting me and stuff T: oh my god lex ( lexie was crying and tim hugged her) T: its gonna be ok lets go talk to horatio ( lexie explains what was going on ) H: lexie don't worry you are safe now L: but he will follow me here H: don't worry about it E: whats going on ( horatio explains to eric what was going on with lexie) E: oh my god ( tim was hugging lexie trying to comfert her ) T: shhh shhh it's gonna be ok ( eric was sad he wanted sooo bad to be with lexie but he knew until they dealt with her abusive boyfriend he couldn't be with her )

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/254964.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/254964.page GMT Chapter 27 true love will keep us apart? part two H: i need you to tell me you boyfriend's name L: rick but i never found out his last name H: ok lexie its gonna be ok ( tim was still hugging lexie to try and keep her calm) L: i just can't believe it T: shhh shhh its ok its ok ( eric wanted so bad to be the one hugging her and drying her tears but he knew he couldn't be the one ) H: eric E: yeah H H: i want you to work the other case with ryan E: you got it H H: speed why don't you take lexie to the break room T: ok H ( tim and lexie went to the break room and tim and lexie sat down on the couch ) T: its gonna be ok i won't let anything happen to you L: you can't promise that he won't come after me and try and hurt me again T: no i can't promise that but i can promise that i will try my best to protect you and that i will always love you L: thanks big brother ( tim and lexie hugged ) C: whats going on T: i will be right back lex ( tim explains what is going on to calleigh ) C: oh my god lexie are you all right L: yeah ( calleigh hugged lexie) H: speed T: yeah H H: i want you to work this case with me T: ok H C: i will stay with lexie ( tim and horatio head out to where lexie was living to try and find her boyfriend) H: mdpd!! open up!! Rick: where is lexie!! H: sir come out of the buliding!! with your hands up!!Rick: not until i see lexie!!!!( S.W.A.T busts down the door ) H: get down on your knees rick! now!! ( rick gets down on his knees and horatio cuffs him) H: your under arrest for beating lexie speedle Rick: that b**ch called the cops on me!! H: you are going away for a long time T: and that b**ch is my sister! a** hole ( rick is put in a police car and sent to jail and tim and horatio head back to the lab) L: did you get him H: we did L: oh thank you so much!! ( tim hugs lexie) ( eric is still wishing he could be the one hugging lexie ) T: come on lets go home L: ok ( tim calleigh and lexie go to tim and calleigh's place) H: eric E: yeah H H: you like her don't you E: yeah H i do like her H: and you have that true love look in your eyes E: i think it is true love ( all lexie could think about on the way back to tim and calleigh's place was eric and how much she wanted to be with him)

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/255331.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/255331.page GMT KEEP GOING PLEASE GRACIE

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/255423.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/255423.page GMT Chapter 28 love bug ( the next day ) L: hey T: hey good morning calleigh already left and dropped the kids off at achool L: hey i was wondering are there any open spots at the lab T: yeah why L: cause i was thinking about applying for a job there T: you would have to talk to horatio and do you even know anything about that stuff L: i was a lab and science major in college T: ok then ( tim and lexie head off to the lab ) H: good morning speed good morning lexie L: good morning sir T: morning H H: speed you are on a case with ryan and calleigh T: you got it H L: ummm sir i was wondering H: you wanna apply for a job L: yeah ( lexie hands him her resume) H: wow you got the job L: really? thank you H: but for now you will be working in the lab L: you got it E: hey H hey lexie L: hi eric H: eric lexie is gonna be working with us in the lab E: cool ( horatio shows lexie where she will be working and explains a few things and then he leaves and eric walks in) E: hi lexie L: hi eric E: i was wondering i am going ice skating tonight do you wanna come with me L: sure E: cool anyway i better get back to work L: yeah sure see you later ( later that night tim and calleigh head home and lexie goes with eric to the ice skating rink) L: i grew up in a house full of brothers who loved hockey so of course i learned to ice skate E: yeah ( a few hours later eric drops lexie back at tim and calleigh's place and thinks about how much he loves lexie) ( lexie goes in the house and thinks about how much she loves eric) T; hey did you have fun L: yeah i had a great time i am soo tired i am gonna head to bed T: night L: night ( lexie goes into the guest bedroom and thinks about eric and dreams about him) ( eric lays in bed awake thinking about lexie and how beautiful she is and smart and funny until he finally falls asleep and dreams about her)

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/255920.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/255920.page GMT MORE PLEASE!!GRACIEE

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/255941.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/255941.page GMT Chapter 29 wedding and baby time? ( a few days after eric and lexie's first date it was time for kaylee and kyle's wedding and kaylee is 7 months pregnant)preacher: who gives this woman to this man T: i do ( a few minutes later) preacher: do you kyle harmon take kaylee speedle to be your lawfully wedded wifeKy: i do peacher: and do you kaylee speedle take kyle harmon to be you lawfully wedded husband Ka: i do peacher: i now pronouce you husband and wife you may now kiss the bride( kaylee and kyle kiss and head on home) Ka: i can't believe we are finally married Ky: me either ( kyle and kaylee sit down on the couch) Ka: umm kyle Ky: yeah babe Ka: i think my water just broke Ky: what ( kyle and kaylee rush to the hospital) doctor: mr. harmon Ky: yeah Doctor: it appears your wife's water has broke and we are trying everything we can to stop the labor Ky: can i see her doctor: yes follow me ( kyle follows the doctor to kaylee's room) Ky: kaylee Ka: oh my god i can't believe this ( kaylee was crying and kyle hugged her) Ky: its gonna be okKa: you can't promise me that

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/256044.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/256044.page GMT KEEP GOING PLEASE!!!graciee

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/256053.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/256053.page GMT those were good chapters please continue Carly i need more pleaseeee...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/256142.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/256142.page GMT Chapter 30 what happened? Ka: I just want this baby to be ok Ky: it will be Ka: you can't say that kyle cause we don't know what's gonna happen Ky; ok well i called your dad he is on his way ( the doctor walks in) doctor: ms. harmon Ka: yeah doctor: we ran a blood test and it seems that someone spiked your food or drink and that is what caused you to go into labor Ka: what doctor: i have called the police and they are investigating what happened ( the doctor leaves and tim and calleigh walk in) T: oh sweetheart( tim hugs kaylee ) Ka: dad someone spiked my food or drink T: what C: oh my god Ka: ouch!! ( kyle is holding kaylee's hand ) T: honey i am gonna find out who did this Ka: ok daddy ( tim heads off to the lab and calleigh stay's with kaylee and kyle and calleigh grabs kaylee's hand) C: its gonna be ok Ka: why does everyone keep saying that when it's not gonna be ok ( meanwhile at the lab ) T: H H: i heard speed we are on our way to the wedding place right now T: all right i am coming with you Ry: who is with kaylee T: calleigh and kyle H: ryan why don't you eric and natalia go ahead and me and speed will meet you there Ry: you got it horatio H: speed in order to have spiked kaylee's food or drink it would've had to have beed someoen who was there or someone who handeled the food and drinksT: i know H ( meanwhile at the hospital kaylee's contractions were getting stronger ) ( while horatio tim natalia ryan and eric tried to figure things out they finally got something and arrested the person who spiked kaylee's drink and tim heads back off to the hospital) Ka: daddy!! T: we got the guy baby Ka: my contractions stopped T: thank god ( tim hugged kaylee ) Doctor: now kaylee i want you on bed rest until you hit eight months got it Ka: got it ( the next day kaylee and kyle go home and everyone is healthy well for now.............) ( a week later lexie and eric are on an other date when...)L: do you see that car driving by E: yeah ( gunshots go off)

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/256425.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/256425.page GMT holy shit Carly pleaseeee continue i need more pleaseeee this is getting good...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/256448.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/256448.page GMT i will post more soon i have a few things to do i will talk to you in a bit ~~Carly~~ ^__^

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/256459.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/256459.page GMT ok cool thank you Carly...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/256466.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/256466.page GMT Chapter 31 an other loss of a loved one?L: eric eric E: aahh i've been shot L: me too E: lexie i have something to tell you L: i have something to tell you too but you go first E: i love you L: i love you too from the moment i first saw you E: yeah same here aaahhh ( ryan and natalia were passing by the resturant and saw lexie and eric laying there) Ry: eric!! lexie!! natalia call for help easy you guys stay with me ( natalia calls for help )N: the ambulance's will be here in five minutes L: i'm cold Ry: lexie stay with me all right don't fall asleep E: ryan how bad is she ( ryan looks at the gunshot wound to her chest and looks at eric's wound to his stomach) Ry: bad just take it easy man easy ( the ambulance's arrive)paramedic: come on lets get them loaded up!! ( the paramedic's take lexie and eric to the hospital and ryan calls tim) Ry: tim T: yeah ryan Ry: your sister and eric have been shot T: what!!Ry: yeah the paramedic's just took them to the hospital T: i am on my way ( meanwhile eric and lexie arrive at the hospital) paramedic: one has a gunshot wound to the chest and the other one has a gun shot wound to the stomachDoctor: all right miss what's your name L: lexieDoctor: and sir what's your name E: eric ( the two doctors take eric and lexie to different rooms and try their best to keep them alive after lexie flatlining twice they finally get her and eric up to sugery and after the surgery......) ( meanwhile tim and ryan were waiting out in the waiting room ) doctor: well it seems that they are both gonna be ok now we won't know for sure for 24 hours but you can go in and see them now and they are both in the same room Ry: thanks docT: thank you doctor ( tim and ryan go and see lexie and eric ) ( the next day eric wakes up) E: speed ryan? T: hey eric Ry: hey bud E: is lexie all rightT: she hasn't woken up yet but she made it past the 24 hour mark ( a few days later ) L: tim? T: lex hi L: hi E: hi lexie L: hi eric T: how are you feeling L: like crap E: yeah same here L: and my chest hurts T: well you were shot in the chest so yeah its gonna hurt E: lexie do you remember what we said to each other after we got shot L: yeah T: did you two finally admit that you like each other a lot L: yeah E: yup T: good for you ( tim hugs lexie ) ( a week later lexie and eric go home and are healthy and happy ) ( but wait till you see what else i have in store!! )

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/256653.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/256653.page GMT ok cool can't wait pleaseeeee continue Carly i need more please this is getting good i'm writing more of my story right now so i should have it up soon i promise but pleaseeee continue...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/256670.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/256670.page GMT lol i will post an other chapter right now but i gotta write it first lol ~~Carly~~ ^__^

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/256677.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/256677.page GMT ok cool thank you Carly i can wait a little bit...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/256700.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/256700.page GMT Chapter 32 home sweet home( two weeks after eric and lexie were shot calleigh is now five months pregnant) Ka: god i am sooo bored Ky: kaylee you are only one more week away from eight months you just gotta hang in one more week Ka: i know but sill ( meanwhile at ryan and natalia's place) Ry: hey babe N: hey Ry: i fed bathed and changed evan this morning and now i bring you breakfast in bed N: wow you are a mutitasker Ry: that i am ( natalia laughs) ( meanwhile at horatio and marisol's place) H: have the results come back yet M: no not yet ( the phone rings marisol picks it up )M: hello?doctor: hello ms. caine M: yes doctor: i have good news for you M: ok what doctor: your pregnant!! congratulations!! ( the doctor hangs up) M: we are gonna have a baby!!! ( marisol jumps into horatio's arms) (meanwhile at tim and calleigh's place) Z: me all ready for school Ha: me too L: all right you two lets get you off to school Ha: kay aunt lexie C; thank you for taking them to school L: its no problem come on you two ( lexie takes zack and hannah to school ) C: your sister is a great woman T: yeah she is C: her and eric are soo perfect for each other T: yeah ( meanwhile at horatio and marisol's place) H: we are finally having a baby!! M: yeah!! oh my god i can't wait ( the doorbell rings)H: coming!! ( horatio opens the door) H: hi eric E: hey HH: its nice to see you are feeling better E: yeah i am feeling great M: hey little brother E: hey marisol M: me and horatio have news for you E: let me guess you are pregnantM: yeah E: thats great i am so happy for you guys( eric hugs marisol) ( meanwhile at kyle and kaylee's place) Ka: i can not take this anymore Ky: babe just one more week that's all Ka: but Ky: no buts it was the doctor's order( two weeks later) Ka: kyle kyleKy: yeah Ka: my water just broke

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/256735.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/256735.page GMT good chapter i loved it that was funny how her water broke please continue soon...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/256757.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/256757.page GMT lol i will post the next chapter right now but after i post that chapter i have to go and i don't know if i will be back tonight ~~Carly~~ ^__^

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/256765.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/256765.page GMT ok cool thank you so much carly you rock and if you don't come back then i'll hopefully have another chapter of my story up for everyone to read tonight or tomorrow...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/256793.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/256793.page GMT Chapter 33 baby time!! ( kyle and kaylee go to the hospital) doctor: kaylee good job you got over the eight month mark ( kaylee gets checked in) Ky: easy babe breathe Ka: i am breathing aaaahhhhhh Ky: i called your dad he is on his way doctor: all right kaylee its time to push Ka: ahhhhhhhhhhhh Doctor: all right i can see the head Ky: come on kaylee push! you can do it push Ka: ahhhhhhhhhhhhh Doctor: one more big push and the head will be out Ka: ahhhhhhhhhh Doctor: all right heads out not give me two more big pushes kaylee Ka: i can't Ky: yes you can babe now push! Ka: ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhdoctor: its a girl!! Ky: a girl doctor: whats her name gonna be Ka: lilyana but lily for short doctor: lily is a very pretty name ( a few hours later tim and calleigh get to the hospital) T: hey Ka: hi C: awwww she is soo cute what's her name Ka: lilyana lily for short T: hey there ( tim kisses kaylee on the forehead) Ka: you wanna hold her dad?T: uhh sure( Kaylee hands lily over to tim) T: she is soo beautiful Ka: yeah she's my little girl ( tim smiles) T: yeah she's your little girl

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/256797.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/256797.page GMT lol thanks theresa you rock too anyway talk to you tomorrow or maybe later i don't know ~~Carly~~ ^__^

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/256799.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/256799.page GMT your welcome Carly, you rock too ok i'll talk to you either tomorrow or later tonight it just depends and that last chapter was good i loved it please continue soon when you can of course...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/256820.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/256820.page GMT Chapter 34 disaster waiting to happen? ( a few days later lily and kaylee are home happy and healthy...........) Ky: hey babe Ka: hey Ky: breakfast is almost ready Ka: yay ( sound of baby crying) Ka: sounds like someone else is hungry too i will get her ( meanwhile at eric's place) E: from the first moment i saw you i knew you were the one L: yeah same here ( eric and lexie kiss)E: i love you so much L: i love you too ( meanwhile at tim and calleigh's place) Ha: mommy C: yeah hannahHa: zack pushed me down C: zackary what have i told you about pushing your sister down Z: awww man C: go in time out now Z: fine Ha: i have a boo boo C: come here baby and we will take care of that boo boo T: good morning Ha: morning daddy Z: morning dad T: zack did you push your sister down again Z: yes but she pushed me down first C: hannah did you push your brother down Ha: yes C: go in time out Ha: yes mommy T: i can't believe they are gonna be five tomorrow C: i know it seems like only yesterday T: yeah C: all right kiddies time to go to school( calleigh takes the kids too school and heads off to work )T: and now i am all alone ( the doorbell rings) T: i spoke too soon coming!! ( tim opens the door) T: jake!! J: tim!! T: what are you doing here J: i came to visit you!!T; really man what's going on J; i quit the F.B.I T: really?J: yeah i need to settle down and start thinking about the future T: wow i have never heard you say that before J: yeah well new me ( meanwhile at ryan and natalia's place) Ry: natalia breakfast is ready N: i'm coming Ry: hey there little guy you hungry yeah here is your bottle ( ryan feeds evan a bottle)N: hey there my two handsome guys Ry: hi N: i need to get to work i will see you after i get home Ry: yup love you N: love you too ( at the lab) E: hey calleigh hey natalia C: hi eric N: hi eric H: good morning ladies and gentelmenE: morning H C: morning horatio N: morning T: all right i'm here H: almost late T: almost late Ry: here H: and you are late Ry: sorry ( horatio tells them about the case's they will be working today and horatio pair's them into team's ) H: all right i want ryan eric and speed you guys go to the robbery and natalia and calleigh you ladies go to the homicide at the beach house E: you got it H C: all righty then ( we start off where ryan eric and tim are) T: this is weird Ry: what is it T: that's the point i don't know ( someone walks into the place where eric ryan and tim are) T: get down!! ( gunshots go off )

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/258048.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/258048.page GMT holy shit Carly continue pleaseeeee i need more this just got so good...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/258682.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/258682.page GMT wow carly i just read your whole story its great i love how you matched calleigh and speed and eric and speeds sister very good i like it keep going

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/259328.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/259328.page GMT Chapter 35 disaster waiting to happen part twoT: eric ryan are you guys all right Ry: ahhh i got shot in the leg E: i'm fine?: everyone get down and stay down( sound of a little girl crying) ?: and you shut up!! T: man just leave her alone ?: you little girl go over there with those guys B: ok T: come here its ok i'm tim whats your name B: Bel T: what a pretty name how old are you B: 9 T: ok listen see that guy over there his name is eric i want you to go over to him all right B: ok T: ryan you ok Ry: yeah my leg really hurts though T: here man hand me your tie and let me tie the wound ( ryan hands tim his tie and tim ties the wound )E: hi there Bel come here pretty girl ?: who called the cops!!!H: sir i want you to let the hostages go ?: no way man!! ( tim see's his gun lying next to the desk and crawls over to it and hits the man over the head and the man passes out ) T: lets get out of here come here Bel its ok B: my mommy got shot T: eric go E: i already checked ( eric shakes his head no ) T: come here Bel listen i want you to go to the blond hair woman all right her name is calleigh B: ok ( bel runs for calleigh) H: where is Bel's mom T: she got shot and died J: tim eric ryan are you guys all right T: yeah we are fine jake ( jake looks at Bel) J: oh my god T: what J: that little girl is so beautiful B: hi J: hiB: did mommy die and go to heaven J: yeah Bel she did ( jake hugged Bel) B: what now J: i am gonna take you home to my place ok?B: yeah ok H: are you sure you can handle it J: yeah i have a foster care lisence so i will take her for a while H: ok then( jake takes Bel to his place and puts her to sleep)

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/259508.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/259508.page GMT good chapter Carly i need more pleaseeee i need to know if my Ryan will be ok pleaseeeee...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/259528.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/259528.page GMT oh wow that is so sweet thank you carly everyone hugged me yaya more please

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/259570.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/259570.page GMT ok come here little 9 year old Bel i'll give you a hug hehehe...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/259701.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/259701.page GMT lol theresa ryan is fine he only got shot in the leg anyway i am tired so good night theresa and Bel talk to you two tomorrow ~~Carly~~ ^__^

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/259737.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/259737.page GMT and theresa do you wanna be in my story too ~~Carly~~ ^__^

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/259743.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/259743.page GMT ok cool that's good sure if you don't mind night Carly talk to you tomorrow and oh my next chapter will be up when you wake up tomorrow...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/259771.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/259771.page GMT oh thanks theresa i really neede that hug since my mommy just died MOMMY MOMMY!!!!! BOO HOO ha eric hugged me just hold me baby even if you are like 50 years older than me and jake i went home with him well hes hott too just not as hot as eric ha i think i need mroe hugs lmao hahaha loved it theresa and carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/260186.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/260186.page GMT Chapter 36 whatever way the wind blows ( the next day) Ha: yay me five!! T: yes you five sweetheart come here ready for breakfast? Ha: yay beakfast C: god i am gonna miss her saying beakfast cause pretty soon T: she will be able to say breakfast and zack too C: yeah god our little babies are growing up Z: whoooooohoooooo i'm five i'm five ( tim calleigh and hannah laugh) Z; what are you laughing atT: go sit in your chair for breakfast Z: ok( meanwhile at jake's place) J: morning Bel B: hi J: you hungry B: no where's my sister J: your sister? B: yeah J: how old is she B: 13 J: what's her nameB: theresa J: come on get dressed and we will go talk to someone who can help find your sister all right B: ok ( after Bel gets dressed jake takes Bel to eric and lexie's and goes to the lab to talk to horatio) H: jake might i ask what you are doing here J: Bel has an older sister H: her sister wasn't there yesterday J: yeah i know she just told me this morning H: how old and what is her name J: 13 and theresa H: well we can always go check at the mother's house J: yeah ( horatio and jake go to Bel and Theresa' house) H: Theresa? Th: may i help you H: yes i am horatio caine Th: the csi guy yeah my mom told me bout you H: well theresa you mom was shot yesterday and she died Th: where's Bel H: she is staying with this man Th: can i see her J: uh yeah she is staying with someone but i can go and pick her up ( jake goes to pick up Bel from eric and lexie's)H: theresa is there anyone home with you Th: no i can stay home by myself i'm not four H: true Theresa where is your dad Th: he was in the army and was killed H: i see ( meanwhile at tim and calleigh's place) T: all right are my five year olds ready to go to school Ha: yes!!Z: i hate school T: well you are still going to school Z: fine! ( tim takes the kids to school and the doorbell rings)C: coming!! ( calleigh opens the door and someone puts cloroform over her mouth )

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/260724.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/260724.page GMT HeyKeep Going Please!!You know how much i love this storyGracie

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/260740.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/260740.page GMT Chapter 37 rick who?? ( the man takes her to a warehouse ) C: who are you and why are you doing this R: well cause i want my lexie back! C: oh my god rick stetler? R: yes now where's lexie!! C: i will never tell you you heartless a** hole R: why cause i hit a girl C: you hurt her you a** hold i will never tell you where lexie! is!! cause you hurt her!! R: you better tell me where she is or well you will see anyway guys bring them out!! C: oh my god hannah zack!! R: now you better tell me where lexie is or your kids will go bye bye C: you heartless bas***dR: tell me calleigh ( meanwhile at the lab ) L: hi horatio H: lexie rick escaped from prison last night T: know what's weird i can't get a hold of calleigh ( tim's phone rings) T: speedle what!!H: speed T: hannah and zack were taken from school L: oh no he's got them i shouldn't have come back to miami ( lexie is crying) T: lexie it's all right E: it's gonna be all right babe (meanwhile at the warehouse) C: fine i will tell you she is at work right now R: where does she work C: the same lab i work at R: i will have to wear a disguse release them thank you calleigh C: come here babies ( meanwhile at the lab rick shows up ) R: hi lexie H: hello rick R: dam it H: your under arrest for the kiddnapping of a police officer and kiddnapping of hannah and zackary speedle ( rick is put in a maxiam security prison and sentenced to life in prison) T: calleigh are you all right C: yeah T: come here zack ( tim picks zack up and holds him and calleigh is holding hannah ) H: don't you four take the rest of the day offT: thanks H E: thank you H L: thanks ( tim calleigh eric and lexie all go to tim and calleigh's place thankful that it is all over )

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/260786.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/260786.page GMT HeyKeep Going Please!!I Love This Story!!Gracie

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/261050.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/261050.page GMT LUV THE STORIE .POST MORE PLZ

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/261370.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/261370.page GMT those two chapters were awesome Carly please continue YAY i'm Bel's older sister YAY that will be fun to tell her...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/261378.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/261378.page GMT Chapter 38 sisterly love ( the day after calleigh zack and hannah were kiddnapped)J: theresa Bel come on girls you gotta get to schoolTh: coming! B: we are ready J: all right lets go ( jake takes the girls to school then heads off to the lab to start his new job) J: morning guys T: morning H: jake i would like you to meet our new M.EK: hi i'm kayla J: hi i'm jake C: hey kayla K: hi big sister J: sister? C: yup ( later that day) J: it's time for me to pick up theresa and Bel from school T: yeah man i gotta go pick up zack and hannah ( jake and tim pick up hannah zack theresa and bel from school then head over to tim and calleigh's place)Ha: i'm tired Z: i hate school Th: don't we all B: i don't hate school Th: i know bel but that's cause you are still in the easy stuff in school B: i still don't hate schoolZ: who can ever like school it's soo dumb T: zack Z: i know i know time out J: he acts way older then he is T: yeah he does J: anyway i better get these girls back to my place to do homework Th: oh man ( jake takes theresa and bel back to his place and someone rings the doorbell) K: hi jake J; hi kayla what are you doing here K: well i was wondering if maybe you wanted to have coffee sometime J: sure that sounds nice K: say around 7:00 tomorrow morning J: sure K: cool Th: jake has gotta girl friend J: theresa i just met her today Th: whatever J: go do your homework Th: yes sir!! ( jake laughs )B: theresa can be a trouble maker sometimes and so can i J: thanks for the warning ( jake thinks about how much he wants to adopt the girls but he know he can't cause the court won't let him for some odd reason so he has talked with eric and lexie and ryan and natalia they both said they would take one of the girls but not both he wanted to adopt the girls so they wouldn't be separtated but there was also a part of him that knew the girls would be able to see each other a lot but he was gonna have to give the girls to different parents even though he didn't want too)

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/261600.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/261600.page GMT awww that's so sweet of Jake even though i don't normally like him but he is good looking but i like my Ryan Wolfe better, that will be good and sad to read when they find them a home please continue Carly i need more i need to know what will happen next...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/261663.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/261663.page GMT Chapter 39 finding a home ( the next day ) J: girls come on you need to hurry up or you are gonna be late B: we are coming ( jake takes the girls to school and heads off at meet kayla at the coffe place) J: hi sorry i'm late K: its fine i know you have theresa and bel to look after J: until i can find them a real home K: i know it's hard i do foster care too J: really this is my second time K: yeah it never gets any easier ( after coffee jake goes to meet eric lexie ryan and natalia) J: hey guys E: hey jake ( they talk for a while about theresa and bel ( E: i mean me and lexie would love to take both the girls but we can't take both N: yeah and me and ryan would love to take both the girls too but the court won't let us J: so that means they are gonna have to be split up unless i can adopt both of them ( jake goes to pick both of the girls up from school and eric natalia eric and lexie are all at jakes place waiting for them to get home and eric lexie natalia and ryan watch the girls while jake goes to court to try and get custdy of both the girls )Will jake get custdy of both the girls or will the girls have to be split up find out in my next chapter ~~Carly~~ ^__^

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/261734.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/261734.page GMT LOVED THE CHAPT. I DON'T LIKE JAKE AT ALL ,BUT IN HERE I DO .KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK CSIRULES45 .POST MORE WHEN U CAN

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/261755.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/261755.page GMT good chapter Carly i bet that both girls will be split up pleaseeeeee continue Carly i need more pleaseeeeeeeeeee...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/261832.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/261832.page GMT Chapter 40 jake's fight Judge: well mr berkley you have put up a good fight about this J ; i just don't want theresa and bel to be spilt up i mean they just lost their mother judge: well mr berkely i will grant you tempory custudy for an other week and i will review your case and i want the girls to come in at our next hearing at the end of this week J: yes sir ( jake goes home ) E: hey man how did it go J: i don't know i mean i have to wait an other week and the judge wants me to bring the girls in at the end of the week and i just don't want them to be spilt up E: i know man ( after a while eric lexie ryan and natalia go home)J: come on girls it's time to get ready for bed B: jake are me and theresa gonna be spilt upJ: i don't know bel Th: but we can't be spilt up its not right ( a few days later) J: come on girls we gotta go to the hearing Th: we are coming J: oh you girls look so beautiful( jake theresa and bel head to the courthouse and find horatio tim calleigh eric natalia lexie and ryan there)E: hey there beautiful girls ( eric hugs theresa and bel )Ry: hey girls ( ryan hugs theresa and bel)( an hour later the judge makes his choice )judge: i hereby say that i award full custudy of theresa and bel to jake berkley( the next day.....)J: all right girls time to go B: ok we are ready( jake takes the girls to school and heads off to work and while on his way to work he gets in a car accident)( jake is taken to the hospital and is in serius condition)

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/262106.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/262106.page GMT AWW MAN ,THAT SUCKS .I HOPE JAKE IS OK ,GREAT STORIE .WRITE MORE SOON

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/262113.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/262113.page GMT man right when it gets good again especially when he gets both of us pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee continue Carly i need to know if he'll be ok...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/262245.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/262245.page GMT oh my god you making me cry our mom just died we have no parents and jake may only just get us then you are going to split us up and now our temp dad is in an accident do we have no luck or what theresa? please more i need more !!!!

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/262973.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/262973.page GMT yea we are bad luck...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/263113.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/263113.page GMT Chapter 41 Jake's reason to live ( we go back to before jake got in the car accident but after he takes the girls to school) ( jake is listening to music and he stops at a red light and when the light turns green he goes and someone hits him from the left side the other driver drives off and doesn't even turn around to make sure jake is all right he just keeps going kayla saw what happened and ran over to jake )K: jake jake! J: kayla? K: someone call an ambulance! ( then alexx while on her way to the lab see's what's going on alexx calls for the ambulance )A: jake honey what hurts J: my stomach my chest my leg my arm and my head A: so pretty much everything J: yeah A: just hang in there help is on the way ( a few minutes later the ambulance arrives and takes jake to the hospital and he flatlines twice but the doctors bring him back and they get him up to surgery )(meanwhile at the lab) A: horatio H: alexx E: alexx kayla what's wrong K: jake was in a really bad car accident C: oh my god T: what happened K: i saw the whole thing he stopped at the red light and then when the light went green he went and someone hit him and just kept going N: oh no were the girls with him K: no they are at school but school lets out early today L and N: we will get them H: ryan eric i want you to get the girls with them E: ok H ( eric ryan natalia and lexie go to pick theresa and bel up from school ) ( horatio calleigh and tim go to where jake was hit to see if they can find the guy that did this )(meanwhile after eric ryan natalia and lexie pick theresa and bel up from school they head to the hospital)Th: why are we at the hospital Ry: jake was in a really bad car accident B: what no ( bel starts crying and eric picks her up and holds her) Th: bel stop being a crybaby Ry: theresa! Th: what i have always had to act older then how old i am Ry: still say sorry to bel Th: sorry bel ( eric was still trying to comfort bel and lexie was rubbing bel's back ) E: shhhhh shhh its ok its ok ( the doctor walks out) E: how is he doc Doctor: well right now all we can do is hope and pray he will make it and i think you guys should go talk to him even though he is unconsis he can still hear you ) Th: i will go first Ry: you sure Th: yeah B: i wanna go with you ( theresa and bel go into jake's room ) B: jake wake up me and theresa need you Th: me and bel love you jake now please wake up ( jake wakes up) J: theresa? bel? B: jake! ( an hour later lexie and natalia take the girls home and ryan and eric go to visit jake and talk to him )Ry: hey man E: jake how you feeling they got the guy that hit you Ry: we thought we were gonna lose you J: no cause i have a reason to live E: theresa and bel J: yeah

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/263681.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/263681.page GMT THAT WAS A CUTE CHAP .THERESA IS MEAN .BEL IS NICE .GOOD CHAPT ,POST MORE PLZ

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/264053.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/264053.page GMT Chapter 42 jake theresa and bel a family at last???( a few weeks after jake's car accident jake is home and healthy ) Th: jake breakfast is ready J: coming smells good theresa Th: thanks B: oh man eggs and bacon and toast again J; bel Th: bel come on it's the only thing i know how to make for breaktfast well except cereal B: i know but still J: all right girls what do ya wanna do today B: park J: the park Th: the park is fine with me ( jake theresa and bel head off to the park where they bump into tim and with hannah and zack and tim and jake talk while the kids play) T: theresa has changed J: yeah she is not a trouble maker anymore and she made breakfast this morning T: wow J: yeah T: so when is the next hearing to find out if you get to adopt the girls J: two days T: yikes man J: yeah i know ( a few hours later theresa bel and jake go home ) ( two days later) J: girls come on or we are gonna be late Th: coming jake B: ready Th: lets go ( they head to the courthouse) judge: i hereby say that jake berkley you.... are now the proud father of theresa and bel

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/264174.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/264174.page GMT good chapter Carly pleaseeeeeeee continue YAY Jake's our dad now YAY please continue...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/264219.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/264219.page GMT More Please!!!I love this story!!Gracie

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/264225.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/264225.page GMT YAY .IM SO HAPPI 4 BEL N THERESA .GREAT CHAPT .KEEP UUP THE GOOD WRITING

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/264244.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/264244.page GMT Chapter 43 back to normal?????? ( a few months later bel and theresa and jake are doing great and calleigh is now 8 months pregnant and marisol is 5 months pregnant and kayla calleigh's sister left town and the new M.E was gonna come in today)J: hey horatio H: jake i would like you to meet our new M.E D: hi i'm dana J: hi i'm jake T: good morning H: hey speed how is calleigh T: great how is marisol H: great also ( later that day tim heads home to calleigh) T: hey babe where are hannah and zack C: they are at eric and lexie's T: and what are we gonna do tonight C: watch a movie head to bed T: sounds like fun ( tim kisses calleigh )( meanwhile at jake's place) Th: man i don't get this J: what is it Th: we have to study for a test and i don't get anything B; maybe cause your dumb J: bel B: sorry Th: whatever bel just wait till you are my age and have to learn this stuff (meanwhile at ryan and natalia's) Ry: hey come here big guy Ev: dada Ry: yeah N: awwww he can say dada now and mama Ry: he is almost one natalia N: i know(later that night at tim and calleigh's) C: tim T: yeah babe C: i'm having contractions they are really strong babe T: come on lets get you to the hospital C: i don't think the baby is gonna wait till we get to the hospital i think i can feel the head starting to come out T: all right babe just let me grab some towels ( thirty minutes later) T: push calleigh push C:ahhhhhhhhhhhh ( sound of baby crying) T: it's a boy C: boy T: yeah a boy C: nathan ( tim calls an ambulance and they take calleigh and the baby to the hospital and they are both healthy and happy)T: hey nathan C: give me him ( tim hands nathan to calleigh) C: our little boy T: yup our little boy

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/264699.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/264699.page GMT awwwwwwwww good chapter pleaseeeeeeeeee continue Carly i need more please....Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/264705.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/264705.page GMT oh carly you had me crying for those chaoters seriuosly theresa why you mena to me an dha eric was rubbing my back yay even if iam 9 hahaha and jakes our dad yay hot dad hahaha carly brilliant brilliant more please do we get a mommy soon too please? theresa thanks for breakfast shitty bacon and eggs hahaahah just kidding

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/265106.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/265106.page GMT yep and i'm glad to be your older sister YAY i'm mean well i was before it happened but i'm nice now YAY, your so welcome Bel what you like pancakes with those eggs and bacon...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/265309.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/265309.page GMT SOOO CUTEEEEEEEE .I LOVED IT .KEEP GOING

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/266199.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/266199.page GMT Chapter 44 new girl in town ( a few days after that calleigh and nathan are home happy and healthy) ( meanwhile at the lab)Car: Hi uncle horatio! H: carly what are you doing here Car: i got a job offer and i'm here to check it out H: what job offer Car: i got a job offer to work at the zoo down here H: that's great T: H whose this H: this is my niece carly T: hi i'm tim nice to meet you Car: nice to meet you too H; how is your father Car: he's great i just talked to him last night Ry: carly! Car: ryan! Ry: long time no see Car: yeah H: you two know each other?Ry: yeah we went to high school together H; i see Car: i better get going to the job interview i will see you later H: bye sweetheart T: since when do you have a niece H: i never told you i had a sister she died in 9/11 T: wow H: yeah and carly's father is mac taylor T: really H: yup ( tim's phone rings) T: hey cal what's up ok ok calm down i will be right there H: speed go ( tim rushes to the hospital) T: cal what's going on C: nathan he wasn't breathing doctor: mr and ms speedle i am so sorry for your loss T: wait no what he's not dead doctor: i am so sorry C; noo! ( a week later) C: tim T: yeah calC: i want a divorce T: what C: we can do spilt custudy of hannah and zack i just i want a divorce T: but cal C: tim just please T: but i love C: don't tim ( a few weeks later tim and calleigh are now divorced and lexie and eric broke up also) T: it's just hard being without herE: i know how you feel man i mean i thought me and lexie had the real thing but i guess not ( meanwhile lexie and calleigh are talking )L: i loved him but after a while my love for eric just kinda went away C: yeah i know so i heard you gotta new guy friend L: yeah jake berkley his girls are fantastic C: yeah ( a few weeks later) E: hi cal C: hi eric would you like to go out with me tonight E: ummm sure ( meanwhile in horatio's office) Car: hi uncle horatio H: hi carly Car: what's wrong aren't you supposed to be happy you are gonna have a baby soon H: yeah well Car: well what H: long story Car: did you and marisol get into a fight H: yeah we did Car: must have been big to have you this glum H: i'm just tired i haven't been getting much sleep lately T: hey H hey carly Car: hi tim ( horatio and carly talked for a while and while carly was walking out to go home) T: bye carly Car: bye

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/268488.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/268488.page GMT HI .LOVED IT .LET'S C HOW LONG TIM N CARLY LAST .AND HERE WE GO WIT CAL N ERIK .DIEN 2 NO WAT HAPPENZ

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/268514.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/268514.page GMT good chapter more Carly please i'm posting my next chapter now...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/268568.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/268568.page GMT Chapter 45 new love for everyone?? we start off at jake and lexie's date)L: sooo how are theresa and bel J: great really greatL: cool do you like being a single father?J: it's hard but i get threw it L: good J: what about you L: i don't have any kids J: oh ( meanwhile at eric and calleigh's date)E: so C: yeah so ( yeah i know not so exceiting )( the next day ) J: calleigh would you be my girlfriend C: oh my god yes!! ( meanwhile lexie and eric are in the break room) E: lexie babe i'm so sorry will you forgive me L: no babe i'm the one who should be sorry E: how about we are both sorry L: that works E: so will you be mine again L: yes ( eric and lexie kiss) ( meanwhile at horatio and marisol's place) H: marisol M: what do you want H: babe what are you doing M: i'm going to stay with my brother H: babe please just listen to me i'm sorry M: i don't wanna hear it horatio H: marisol please M: horatio i'm six months pregnant and you couldn't think to tell me until now!!!!!!H: babe please just listen i'm sorry i didn't tell you about my father M: that fact that you didn't tell me you had an abusive father until now and then all of a sudden you have a niece and a sister!!! and oh lets not forget about your thing with julia H: wait what i didn't do anything with julia M: you didn't?H: no babe i would never cheat on you M: oh god horatio i'm sooo sorry H: it's all right babe

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/268734.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/268734.page GMT heykeep going please please please pleasei love ths story so much pleasegracie

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/268739.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/268739.page GMT SO CTE.UD SOON PLZ

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/268953.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/268953.page GMT good chapter Carly more please this is good...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/269402.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/269402.page GMT Chapter 46 a family once broken ( a few days later ) H: hey carly Car: hi uncle horatio M: hi carly Car: hi marisol ( marisol hugs carly) ( horatio carly and marisol talk for a while then carly heads off to work )( meanwhile at the lab) E: so tim how are you T: ok i heard you and lex are back together E: yeah man we are T: i could always tell you had feelings for her E: i never knew H had a niece or a sister T: me either N: hi guys E: hi nat T: hi natalia N: oh eric i'm so happy to hear you and lexie are back together (later that day at carly's place )( the doorbell rings) Car: oh my god hi daddy what are you doing here Mac: i came to see my only daughter is that a problem Car: no i missed you Mac: i missed you too sweetheart Car: how is reed Mac: he's good he misses you like crazy though Car: i miss him like crazy too ( mac hugs carly)

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/270196.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/270196.page GMT HEYKEEP GOING PLEASE PLEASE PLEASEGRACIEP.SPLEASE PLEASE PLEASE

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/270299.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/270299.page GMT good chapter Carly i loved it more please...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/270727.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/270727.page GMT Chapter 47 a family once broken part two ( the next day horatio heads over to carly's place ) Car: hi uncle horatio H: hi carly Mac: hi horatio H: mac? Mac: yeah i came into town for a few days H: nice to see you again Mac: you too Car: well i have to be going to work so i will see you two later Mac: bye carly H: bye carly ( carly leaves and mac and horatio talk) H: mac what is the real reason you came into town Mac: i think claire may still be alive H: me too i think that she was put into a safe place to keep her safe from our father Mac: probablyH: he called me the other day Mac: your abusive father i thought he was still in jail H: he got let out Mac: why H: i don't know but he knows about me and claire having kids and i'm worried that he will go after kyle or carly Mac: yeah wait would he do that H: as far as i see it he is capable of anything Mac: i should call carly and ask her to take the day off H: let her work i already told her about me and claire's father and if she see's him she will call me Mac: you sure H: yes i am sure

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/270853.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/270853.page GMT HEY CARLYKEEP GOING PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASEYOUR STORY IS WAY MUCH BETTER THAN MINEPLEASE PLEASE PLEASE KEEP GOING PLEASEGRACIEP.SPLEASE PLEASE PLEASE

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/270900.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/270900.page GMT good chapter Carly more pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee this is good....Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/270913.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/270913.page GMT Chapter 48 a shocker for everyone ( carly got home from work and saw a note from her father on her counter and it said carly i am gonna stay with your uncle for the night i love you from dad and then the doorbell rings) Coming!! ( carly opens the door) Re: hi sis Car: hi bro ( reed and carly hug each other) Car: so what brings you to miami Re: i got a job offer here as a reporter Car: cool you are staying here Re: No i'm not i'm staying at a hotel till i can find an aparment Car: no you are staying here Re: sis Car: reed don't fight me on this Re: fine ( later that night carly and reed went to bed ) ( the next day everyone was at the one of the biggest parties of the year when all of a sudden the building blows up and an hour later) Car: hello can anyone hear me Mac: carly are you ok! Car: I'm fine just a few scratches are you ok??Mac: yeah i'm fine ( a few hours later everyone is found and not hurt when......) Cl: hello is everyone ok Mac & H: claire????? Car & Re: mom???

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/271415.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/271415.page GMT AWESOME STORI .LUV IT .PLZ CONT

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/271558.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/271558.page GMT wow what a good chapter more Carly please...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/271859.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/271859.page GMT HEY CARLYKEEP GOING PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASEI LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH PLEASEGRACIEP.SPLEASE PLEASE PLEASEYOUR STORY IS BETTER THAN MINEPLEASE PLEASE PLEASE

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/272024.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/272024.page GMT great chapters yay i loved them whos calleigh to to love no one oh my heart is brokern more please i loved it

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/272229.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/272229.page GMT hi carlykeep going i love this story so muchthis story is better than mine trust mekeep going please please pleaseGracie

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/272660.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/272660.page GMT Chapter 49 a shocker for everyone part two Cl: mac reed carly horatio? H: clarie your supposed to be dead Cl: i well i H: you were in the protection program to protec you from our father weren't you Cl: yes G: same as me Ka: mom!!T: gina?? Ry: oh my god ( a few hours later) H: so you were both put in the protection program Cl & G: yes Ka: but mom why didn't you tell me and dad G: i couldn't they wouldn't let me tell anyone Cl: they wouldn't let ,me tell anyone either Re: so this whole thing was only to protec you guys G&Cl: yes Ky: man when are they gonna get us out of here H: soon hopefully Ka: i just wanna get home to lily G: lily? Ka: yeah J: i need to get home to theresa and bel C: and i need to get home to hannah and zack Car: ummm tim can i talk to you over there T: sure Car: i T: i know you want me and calleigh back together Car: i know you still love calleigh and i know she still loves you T: i know Car: i'm sorry T: it's ok ( calleigh walks over to where carly and tim are talking) C: tim i'm sorry T: i forgive you ( tim and calleigh kiss) Car: hey i'm still right here T: sorry Car: it's ok ( carly walks back over to the others and reed hugs her) Car: what was that for Re: i just felt like it Car: sure you did ( the next day all of them finally get out of the buliding and go home )

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/272787.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/272787.page GMT Hey CarlyKeep Going please please please pleaseGraciep.splease please i love ths story

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/272808.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/272808.page GMT thanks gracie i love your story caine girls!! and i will post an other chapter of Together Again when i think of what to do next today is my birthday so i'm kinda taking it slow ~~Carly~~ ^__^

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/272816.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/272816.page GMT HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAA
AAAAAAAPP - PPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPYYYYYYYYYYYYY YYYYY BBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBII IIIIIIIII - IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIRRRRRRRRRRRRRTT TTTTTTTTT - TTTHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHDDDDDDDDDDDD DDDDDDAAA - AAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!! - HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!!)GRACIETAKE YOUR TIME I'LL HAVE MIRE CAINE GIRLS UP SOONJUST FOR YOU

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/272861.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/272861.page GMT thank you gracie ~~Carly~~ ^__^

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/273090.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/273090.page GMT good chapter Carly more please...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/273335.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/273335.page GMT Chapter 50 family will tear us apart?? ( a few weeks later ) E: so tim when are you and cal getting remarried T: soon hopefully E: tim can i ask you something T: sure what is it E: do you still have feelings for gina i mean now that she is back from the dead T: eric i love calleigh and nothing can change that E: yeah i won't let anythin come between me and lexie either i love her so much T: good cause if you break her heart i will break you E: i got ya hey tim did you know carly before she came into town T: yeah we met a few years back you know before i came back here we are like best friends E: cool man her and her brother are real close T: yeah they are Ry: hey guys T: hey ryan E: so see you tonight T: yup ( meanwhile elsewhere) A: so cal when are you and tim getting remarried C: as soon as possible alexx hopefully N: you two are so great together Ka; yup you make my dad so happy T; yes she does Ka: hi daddy T: hey sweetheart ( tim hugs kaylee) Ka: yup well i better get home kyle has to go to work soon C&T: all right love you Ka: love you guys too A: i need to get back to work myself N: me too T: hey beautiful C: hi handsome ( tim and calleigh kiss) Z: get a room Ha: zack!! Z: what hannah Ha: your mean Z: whatever ( tim and calleigh laugh) H: hi guys Ha: hi uncle horatio Z: hi T: hey H how is marisol H: great C: how far alone is she now H: seven and a half months Ha: zack stop it Z: stop what Ha: i can hear you wispering a bad word Z: darn it! ( tim and calleigh head home with hannah and zack and everyone is healthy and happy)

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/273464.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/273464.page GMT good chapter more please i'm loving it Carly...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/273489.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/273489.page GMT HEY BIRTHDAY GIRLKEEP GOING PLEASE PLEASEPLEASEGRACIEP.SHOPE YOU HAD A GREAT DAY

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/273573.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/273573.page GMT today's your birthday Carly if so then Happy Birthday...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/273592.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/273592.page GMT Chapter 51 family will tear us apart part two ( the next day at the lab tim and calleigh walk in and carly and reed are talking to horatio) T: hey guys what's going on H: nothing they just came by to see me Car: yup i better get to work Re: yeah me too H: bye and be careful Car: yup T: H is something wrong H: no nothing is wrong J&Ry: hey guys E: hey ryan hey jake hey tim hey calleigh C: hi guys T: hi J: so how is everyone's kids doing T&C&Ry: great E: how are theresa and bel J: great (later that night at carly's place) H: you two need to keep low and be careful Re: we will H: promise Car: promise Re: but why wouldn't dad tell us about this H: he felt it was best for me to tell you two Re: that our abusive grandfather is out of jail and me and carly need to be careful H: yes Car: We will be careful uncle horatio H: good (meanwhile at clarie's place the doorbell rings and she opens the door and someone cloroforms her)

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/276003.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/276003.page GMT holy shit more Carly pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee this is getting good i think its their dad more please...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/276015.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/276015.page GMT hey carlykeep going please please pleasei love this story please pleasegracie

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/276046.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/276046.page GMT gracie theresa and bel i am gonna do a bit of changing to the story cause i thought of something today that i wanted to do to the story and the changes i gotta go a few chapters back to do so the changes will be in the chapter the new girl in town chapter and the chapters after that chapter so i hope you like the changes ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/276321.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/276321.page GMT and you will find out why i made changes in the next chapter or two the changes i made in the new girl in town chapter and the chapters after that are small and i will post the next chapter soon ~~Carly~~ *__*

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/276334.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/276334.page GMT OK CARLYI'M LEAVING THE BOARD BUT I'LL COME ON AND READ YOUR STORY AND A FEW OTHERSI'M STOPPING CAINE GIRLS ASWELLSORRYGRACIEP.SI'M REALLY REALLY SORRY

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/276337.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/276337.page GMT it's ok gracie i love your story caine girls but it's ok i left the boards for a while after they changed the boards so i understand i will miss you ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/276350.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/276350.page GMT Chapter 52 the truth must be told( a few hours later we begin where claire is being held) ?: i've missed you claire now if i could just get your brother to come we could be a family again Cl: dad? ( meanwhile horatio goes to clarie's place and can't find and and she left her cell phone so horatio goes to the lab and calls speed and tim heads to the lab) T: all right H what should we do H: tell the truth T: yeah ( a few hours later ) E: H why did you want us to come here at this time of night H: my sister was kidnapped and well the truth must be told E: what truth T: carly is not horatio's niece or mac taylor's daughter she is my niece C: by who T: david is carly's father and carly is three years younger then kaylee E: so she is 16 T: yeah and the reason she came to town was to find her sisters and brother J: did she find them T: she found her sisters but not her brother Ry: who are her sisters T: theresa and bel J: what?? Ry: who is her brother T: he is only four and his name is brett H; point is mac and claire are only carly's adopted parents and reed T: is her half brother H: now we need to find claire and find brett before my father does something bad to them ( meanwhile where claire is) ?: yes it's me your father and look i have someone to keep you company right brett D: what are you doing i thought we were gonna get her together ?: chill a little david!D: fine hello clarie ( meanwhile at the lab ) E: does calleigh know C: of course i knew E: wait so how was carly able to get her own place Re: she wasn't she helped get it but i bought it and came here H: we need to stop arguing and find claire and brett Car: daddy has him i know it T: david is dead Car: no he isn't T: wait a minute what!

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/276449.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/276449.page GMT HEY CARLY KEEP GOING PLEASEPLEASE PLEASEPLEASEGRACIE

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/276462.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/276462.page GMT good chapter Carly sorry to say but i'm going on STRIKE no more People's Mistakes sorry...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/276463.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/276463.page GMT oh my god theresa why are you going on strike!! ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/276512.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/276512.page GMT because of what's going on with my sister Graciee sorry Calry i might post one more then i might end it, i'll think it over sorry...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/276533.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/276533.page GMT Chapter 53 everyone's worst enemies Re: i got a call a few days ago and it was him T: why didn't you tell anyone reed Re: he said if i told anyone he would kill me Gri: hi Car: grissom?H: good you came Gri: of course i came clarie is a good friend of mine ( meanwhile where clarie and brett are) Br: i wanna go home D: be quiet Cl: shhhhh shhh brett you are gonna be home soon Br: i want my sister's and brother Cl: i know shhhhh ?: clarie would you shut him up Cl: i'm trying would you just let him go he has nothing to do with this D: he is my son! of course he has something to do with this Cl: he's your son?? ( meanwhile at the lab) Th: carly reed! Car: theresa Bel thank god you two are all right Bel: we missed you guys Re: we missed you too ( carly theresa reed and bel all hugged) H: all right now we need to find claire and brett ( horatio's phone rings) H; caine ?: hello son i missed you tell ya what i will let your sister and brett go if you and speed come to the warehouse (horatio's dad hangs up ) T: what does he want H H: speed he wants you and me to go to the warehouse T: then lets go C: no babe T: cal i will be all right H: speed are you sure T: yeah Car: uncle tim ( horatio and speed go to the warehouse) ?: it's so nice of you to finally join usD: hi little bro ?: clarie get you and that little piece of S*** out of here D: hey don't call my son a piece of S*** ?: i'm the one running this so shut it!! ( horatio's dad and david get their guns out as do horatio and speed) ( gunshots go off)

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/277706.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/277706.page GMT hey carlymore please please please pleaseGracie

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/277837.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/277837.page GMT hey gracie whats up lol i will post an other chapter in a while and i have a question would you like to be in my story ~~Carly~~ ^__^

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/277839.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/277839.page GMT OK CARLY CAN'T WAIT TO READ ITYOU WANNA PUT ME IN YOUR STORY???YEAH SURE GRACIEP.STHANKS

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/278067.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/278067.page GMT your welcome gracie you will come in the next chapter or two i will post the next chapter right now ~~Carly~~ ^__^

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/278078.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/278078.page GMT OK CARLY CAN'T WAITGRACIEP.SCAN I JUST SAY I LOVE YOUR NAME

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/278093.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/278093.page GMT Chapter 54 speedle family reuinion H: speed! D: omg you idiot! you shot my brother! ?: well if it makes you feel any better i got shot too! (david kicks horatio's father) H: speed stay with me ( S.W.A.T busts in and eric see's speed lying on the floor) E: speed easy man stay with me ( speed was unconsions ) ( the paramedics took speed to the hospital and a few days later he was able to go home) C: you gave me a scare Car: don't do that again uncle tim ( tim laughed) ( a few weeks later there was a speedle family reuinion) Car: gracie theresa bel you are on my team! Gr: all right speedle sister's!!Car: well gracie you are our sister Gr: true Th: lets show those boys what we are made of Bel: lets kick their butt's ( gracie theresa and carly laugh) Bel: what? Gr: nothing Bel: gracie theresa carly just cause you girls are older then me does not mean you get to laugh at me Th: i'm only 13 Car&Gr: and we are only 16 Bel: so! Th: bel just stop and lets beat these boy's in baseball Gr&Car&bel: yeah!! ( an hour later the girl's beat the boy's in baseball) Gr&Car&Th&Bel: yes!! Bel: we showed those boys! ( gracie carly theresa and bel laugh)

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/278113.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/278113.page GMT HEYCOOLKEEP GOING PLEASE PLEASE PLEASEI LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCHGRACIE

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/278133.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/278133.page GMT lol you theresa and bel are my sisters ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/278135.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/278135.page GMT OK COOLCAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENSI WONDER WHAT GRACIE WILL BE LIKE GOODY GIRL OR NAUGHTY GIRL??? GRACIEP.SPLEASE PLEASE PLEASE KEEP GOING PLEASE

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/278194.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/278194.page GMT this is good so far more Carly pleaseeeeeee...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/278390.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/278390.page GMT Chapter 55 an other wedding Re: hey girls come on hurry up or your gonna be late Car; coming reed Re: you better be coming Gr: we are so chill Re: all right have a good day at school Br: have a good day at work big brother ( carly theresa gracie bel and brett go to school and reed goes to work) (meanwhile at the lab) E: hey speed how are your niece's and nephew's T: great E: man i'm getting nervous T: yup you got pre wedding jitters E: hey i bet you do too T: kinda but not so much and eric like i said you break my sister's heart i break you even though you are my best friend got it E: got it H: morning gentelmen E: morning H T: morning horatio how's marisol H: great Ry: hey guys E: ryan you look beat Ry: yeah i am i didn't get much sleep last night T: why Ry: natalia's pregnant T: congradulations man Ry: thanks ( a few days later it was time for eric and lexie's wedding) preacher: do you eric delko take lexie speedle to be your lawful wedded wife E: i do preacher: and do you lexie speedle take eric delko to be your lawful wedded husband L: i do preacher: i now pronuce you husband and wife you may now kiss the bride( eric and lexie kiss)

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/278725.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/278725.page GMT HEY CARLYMORE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASEGRACIE

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/278743.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/278743.page GMT awwwwww good chapter more Carly pleaseeeeeeee this is good i loved it, i'll have more of my story up soon...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/278747.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/278747.page GMT CARLY VERY WELL DONE VERY WELL AND HOW OLD AM I? WHY DO I ALWAYS GET TAKEN BACK HEAPS OF YEARS IS IT COS IM SO MUCH OLDER NOW? HEHEHE I LOVED IT IT WAS REALLY GREAT I CANT WAIT FOR MORE AND YAY WE ARE ALL SISTERS BRILKINAT MORE MORE MORE MORE LOVE BEL

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/279943.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/279943.page GMT Chapter 56 hurt ( a few days later) T: hannah zack come on you two you gotta get going for your last day of school Z: finally! Ha: oh man T; come on lets get into the car ( tim takes the kids to school then heads to the lab and see's horatio and lexie talking and lexie is crying) T: what's going on H: speed eric was shot and is in the hospital T: what what happened L: I don't know H: speed i want you on this case with me ryan and jake ok T: all right ( tim hugs lexie ) C: come on lexie let's go to the break room L: ok ( horatio tim ryan and jake go to the place where eric was shot and they hear a noise) H: mdpd whose there ?: your worst nightmare ( gunshots go off) ( the man runs ) H: speed J: ryan ( both ryan and tim were shot and are losing a lot of blood)

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/280693.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/280693.page GMT HEY CARLYKEEP GOING PLEASE PLEASE PLEASEPLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASEGRACIE

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/280784.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/280784.page GMT om g Carly you have to continue pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee this is getting good more pleaseeeeeeee...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/281339.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/281339.page GMT Chapter 57 hurt part two H: speed! ?: look who i have T: lexie L: tim! ?: shut it lexie ( all of a sudden the buliding blows up) (an hour later) H: speed! jake ryan lexie!! J: here! Ry:oww here H: speed lexie! L: help H: lexie ( horatio follows lexie's voice and finds she is under a bunch of stuff) L: it hurts H:I know just stay with me i gotta find your brother J: horatio ryan only has a gunshot wound to his arm Ry: yeah i will help you find speed ( a half hour later rescue shows up and they are still looking for speed and still trying to get lexie out) Ry: H i found him!!! he's going into shock!! H: speed stay with me T: i can't ahh it hurts a lot i'm starting to get cold H: easy speed breathe easy stay with me ( they finally get lexie out and she is ok but she has a broken arm ) J: speed come on man stay with us T: it hurt's to breathe H: i know just stay with me T: i don't think i can H: speed you gotta hang in there you got three kids who need their father ( speed passes out) H: speed!!

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/281562.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/281562.page GMT Gracie Theresa Gen and Bel i won't be on till tomorrow night because my uncle by marriage is gonna be in a cookoff and me and my grandmother are gonna go to where my aunt lives and come back after we are done there ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/281573.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/281573.page GMT HEY CARLYOK HAVE FUN I CAN'T POST ANY OF CAINE GIRLSSOZ EVERYONEI HAVE BURNT MY HAND BUT I'M GONNA TRYGRACIE

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/281585.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/281585.page GMT aww i am sorry you burnt your hand i have burnt myself but only like a finger or something that sucks and it's ok you can't post any of caine girls i can wait till your hand gets better hope your hand feels better soon ~~Carly~`~ ^__^

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/281589.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/281589.page GMT that was a good chapter Carly loved it can't wait for more tomorrow have fun Carly talk to you tomorrow bye...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/281673.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/281673.page GMT oops lol i said i won't be on till tomorrow lol i meant to say i wasn't going be on tomorrow haha sorry lol ~~Carly~~ ^__^

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/281850.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/281850.page GMT its ok...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/281855.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/281855.page GMT and i will post the next chapter soon ~~Carly~~ ^__^

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/281862.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/281862.page GMT ok cool thank you...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/281873.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/281873.page GMT how was your day ~~Carly~~ ^__^

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/281878.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/281878.page GMT ok and yours...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/281880.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/281880.page GMT all right kinda boring though ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/281883.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/281883.page GMT that sucks i'm sorry mine was too...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/281891.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/281891.page GMT yeah boring days suck a lot lol well at least supernanny will be on soon hahaha i love that show man my computer is running soooo slow today it's annoying me a lot grrrr lol ~~Carly~~ ^__^

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/281898.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/281898.page GMT yea, that's cool, i'm sorry your computer is running slow tonight...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/281912.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/281912.page GMT it's only cause of the internet thing we have it make's the computer's run slow and my bro can't play his x-box live while i'm on here and yeah he get's in a bad mood when he can't play his x-box live hahaha lol oh and i will post the next chapter right now ~~Carly~~ ^__^

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/281923.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/281923.page GMT Chapter 58 two lives at stake H: speed wake up stay with me L: tim! ( speed is unconsis and finally the paramedic's get there) paramedic: we need to get him to the hospital fast he's lot a lot of blood ( the paramedic's take speed to the hospital and he flatlines twice but the doctor's bring him back ) Doctor: ms speedle C: yes Doctor: your husband is out of surgery but we had to put him into a medicly induced coma C: what doctor: and ms delko we also had to put your husband into a coma and there's no telling when they will wake up but i think that it would be best if your two went in there and talked to your husbands ( the doctor takes lexie and calleigh to eric and tim's room and calleigh sit's on the chair next to tim's bed and lexie sit's on the chair next to eric's bed ) C: tim baby don't give up i need you your kids need you i love you L: eric i love you so much now please stay with me ( an hour later calleigh and lexie left and they hugged each other ) Ry: you two can come stay at mine and natalia's place C: we will be fine N: you sure cause we would love to have you two as house guests L: we're fine ( calleigh and lexie go to tim's and calleigh's place ) L: where are the kids C: they are with horatio and marisol ( two weeks pass and lexie and calleigh are at the hospital at their husband's bedside's ) E: lexie? T: cal? L: eric! C: tim oh thank god T: what happened C: you got shot T: yeah owww i know that but how long has it been C: two weeks L: two weeks also eric T: hey i want a kiss E: yeah i want a kiss too ( tim and calleigh kiss and eric and lexie kiss)

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/281964.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/281964.page GMT awwwwwwwww good chapter more please if you can Carly that was good loved it...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/281988.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/281988.page GMT hey carlymore please pleasegracieakaburnt hand

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/282036.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/282036.page GMT awww that was sweet although i was sad whne he got shot not my eric hahaha loved it more please

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/282950.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/282950.page GMT SORRI BEL BUT ERIK IS MINE .BACK OFF .LOL .VERY CUTE STORI ,CANT WAIT 4 MORE

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/283398.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/283398.page GMT Chapter 59 sorry doesn't cut it ( a week later tim and eric are out of the hospital and home and at tim's place the doorbell rings and tim answers it) T: what are you doing here D: i came to say sorry T: aren't you supposed to be in jail D: i got out i gotta do community service and go to a theripist T: well david sorry doesn't cut it and it won't cut it for your kids either D: i know but i'm trying to turn my life around T: good for you now bye ( tim slams the door in david's face) C: babe who was that T: david C: what he got out T: yeah he's got community service and he has to go to a theripist he claims he's trying to turn his life around C: maybe he is for his kids T: i don't know but i don't want him going anywhere near those kids C: i know how much you care about gracie carly reed bel theresa and brett T: i love them a lot C: me too ( meanwhile at reed's place the doorbell rings and reed answers it ) Re: dad?? D: hi son ( reed slams the door in david's face) Gr&Car: was that dad Re: yeah Gr: what did he want Re: i don't know i slammed the door in his face Car: wow Bel: why did i hear a door slam Gr: go back to bed bel it's late Bel: why do i have to go to bed early and you guys don'tRe: because we are older Bel now go back to bed Bel: fine! Th: whew she's cranky Bel: be quiet! Re: bel Bel; i'm going i'm going ( theresa reed carly and gracie laugh)

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/285115.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/285115.page GMT LOVED THE CHAPT .CANT WAIT 4 MORE .PLZ CONTINUE

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/285126.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/285126.page GMT HEY CARLYKEEP GOING PLEASE PLEASE PLEASEGRACIE

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/285137.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/285137.page GMT good chapter Carly i loved it more please...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/285161.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/285161.page GMT FINE THEN IM GOING HEHEHE LOVED IT AND TIERRA IM NOT GOING INTO DISPUTES OEVR ERIC EVERYONE KNOWS HES MINE AND CLARAS AH HAHAHA BUT I CAN NEGOTIATE ITS TOUGH BUT MAYBE AH HAHAHAH CARLY LOVED THE CHAPTER CANT WAIT FOR MORE HEHEHE I LOVED IT MORE PLEASE

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/285337.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/285337.page GMT Hey Bel thanks i love your story too did you get a good night's sleep oh and my real name is carlynn but carly is short for my name ~~Carly~~ ^__^

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/285386.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/285386.page GMT and i will post the next chapter as soon as i can lol i got writers block haha ~~Carly~~ ^__^

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/285389.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/285389.page GMT BEL UR RIGHT .NO NEED 2 GET INTO A DISPUTE BCUZ I KNOW ERIK IS MINE .SORRI CLARA .HE ALWAYS HAS BEEN N ALWAYS WILL B

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/285406.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/285406.page GMT ok girls eric can be all of yours no reason to fight or get mad at each other or anything ok so just share him dang lol ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/285419.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/285419.page GMT OK CARLY .SINCE THIS IS UR FANFIC ,ILL SURRENDER

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/285431.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/285431.page GMT my point is that we don't have to fight over guys in csi miami we can all share them lol i mean i like ryan and eric too but i like tim speedle more haha just there's no reason so fight over ryan eric or tim we can all share them ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/285437.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/285437.page GMT THERES 1 PROBLEM .I DONT LIKE SHARING

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/285448.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/285448.page GMT hey carly no i had shit sleep friggin kids one was scared the other was uncomfortable and as soon as we got one asleep the next would wake up and it was ll the boys too little shits thank god my little girl stayed asleep so i only got like 4 hours sleep buggers tonight fingers crossed hope so cos im having serious writers block here i have ideas but as soon as i go to write them blank it shits me i dont get blocked well first time for everything anyways better get back TO MY ERIC HES WAITING FOR ME GUESS HE CANT GET ENOUGH OF ME OOPS SORRY TIERAA HAHAHAHHAH OH IM SORRY THAT WAS SLACK GUESS A CUBAN MAN CANT GET ENOUGH OF THIS AUSSIED BEAUTY AH HAHAHAHAA OH IM SLACK SORRY BEL

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/285450.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/285450.page GMT BEL BEL BEL .UGH I DONT EVEN NO WAT 2 SAY EXCEPT ERIK IS NOT URS HUN .SORRI .HE IS PROPERTY OF TIERRA

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/285457.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/285457.page GMT i'm sorry you didn't get a lot of sleep Bel i didn't either i had to get up early and i went to bed late haha and still we all will have to share Eric Ryan and Tim i mean i like all three of them hahaha so we all just need to share Eric Ryan and Tim ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/285460.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/285460.page GMT CRALY SMART WOMAN SMART VERY SMART AND IM NOT SAYING ANYMORE OH MY OH DEAR ERIC STOP IT STOP IT OK BABY IF YA WANT ME THAT BAD THEN OK TEIRRA GOTTA GO THIS MAN IS DRAGGING EM AWAY IM NOT COMPLAINING OH MY OH GOD ERIC HAHAHAHAHA SORRY IM SO BAD

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/285465.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/285465.page GMT OMG .I CANT BELIEVE U .BUT HOW CAN ERIK B THERE WITH U WHEN HES RIGHT HERE WITH ME?~~?~~ERIK STOP IT ,WE JUST FINISHED FOOLING AROUND .OOPS THAT MUST'VE SLIPPED OUT

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/285499.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/285499.page GMT oh my dear you have an imposter and over here the real eric theres no slipping hes all mine ahahahaah hang and hour or so cos oh wow gotta go hes grabbing me aaaaaaaaaaaaa eric heheh

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/285525.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/285525.page GMT ok that's enough stop it you two ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/285624.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/285624.page GMT SHE STARTED IT .U MUST HAVE DA IMPOSTER SWEETIE BCUZ I NO ONLI DA REAL ERIK CAN DO WAT HEZ DOING TO ME .OH MY GOD

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/285699.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/285699.page GMT OH ME AND ERIC ARE STILL GOING SO IF YA DONT MIND ID LIKE TO GET BACK TO HIS ROCKING BOD AND HE WANTS MINE TOO HAHAHAHA OK OK CARLY IM SORRY NO MORE I PROMISE BUT TIERRA IN MY STORY IM CALLEIGH AHHAAHAH OK OK IM SORRY CARLY THATS ENOUGH WHITE FLAG WHITE FLAG

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/285739.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/285739.page GMT NOT FAIR BEL

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/285785.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/285785.page GMT that's enough now stop it i'm not in the mood for this stuff today so just stop ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/285837.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/285837.page GMT I DID I STOPPED FOR YOU CARLY IM NOT TRASHING ON YOUR STORY ANYMORE IM SORRY IM SORRY NO MORE PROMISE STILL COOL?

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/285845.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/285845.page GMT lol we are still cool Bel your my friend lol ~~Carly~~ I Love Tim Speedle

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/285854.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/285854.page GMT phew thank god i thought i ticked you off big time but thank god great lol

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/285964.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/285964.page GMT OK OK WE STOPPED .GOSH CARLY ,SORRI

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/285977.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/285977.page GMT Chapter 60 anger is a waste of time ( the next day) Re: gracie carly brett bel theresa come on Gr: me and carly and ready for work Re: all right theresa bel brett come on we gotta get you guys to summer camp Th: coming ( reed takes theresa bel and brett to summer camp then drops gracie and carly at the zoo they work at and a lot of 16 years olds work at the zoo) ( meanwhile at the lab) T: hey H H: hi speed T: how's marisol H: great hows calleigh i heard she got the flu T: yeah she did and i heard marisol had the baby H: yeah a girl T: congradulations what's her name H: jaylyn T: jaylyn? H: yup jay or lyn for short T: are you expecting her to be a tomboy when she gets older H: well you never know T: true ( david walks into the lab) H: well look what the cat dragged in T: david what are you doing here D: tim i T: what your sorry i told you already sorry doesn't cut it D: i'm leaving miami T: you said that last time but ya didn't now bye D: tim anger is a waste of time T: whatever ( tim walks away and david leaves ) H: speed he's right anger is a waste of time T: i know i just H: just what T: i don't know H: why don't you go home and spend time with your kids and your wife T: you sure H: yes now go T: thanks H ( tim leaves and david comes back into the lab) D: he still won't listen H: just give him time D: he just doesn't believe i'm trying to turn my life around for my kids H: it will take time to show him that D: yeah i just hope not to much time because of the thing that i still have to tell him H: you better tell him soon D: he won't listen to me H: david your gonna have to make sure he listens when you tell him D: i know but it's gonna be hard to tell him that..

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/287004.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/287004.page GMT those were good chapter I'll finish reading later ok .

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/287383.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/287383.page GMT ok i probably won't post an other chapter today one of my friends on an other website left the website forever so i'm sad ~~Carly~~ Speedle sisters Theresa Bel Gracie Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/287390.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/287390.page GMT sorry about your friend im writing my next chapter right now but i dont know if it will be fininsh before i go to work if i dont i'll post it tonight.

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/287396.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/287396.page GMT ok Genevieve and would you like to be in my story ~~Carly~~ Speedle Sisters Theresa Bel Gracie Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/287401.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/287401.page GMT yeah sure why not it's up too you Bel is supposed to put me in hers too but im not pushing like i said it's up too you.

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/287404.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/287404.page GMT i will put you in my story you will come in the next chapter or two ~~Carly~~ Speedle sisters Theresa Bel Gracie Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/287408.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/287408.page GMT ok thanks

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/287411.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/287411.page GMT your welcome Genevieve ~~Carly~~ Speedle Sisters Theresa Bel Gracie Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/287415.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/287415.page GMT good chapter Carly loved it more soon please this is getting good...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/287682.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/287682.page GMT hey theresa how was school oh and lol my name well my full first name is carlynn but everyone calls me carly haha~~Carly~~ Speedle Sisters Theresa Bel Gracie Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/287698.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/287698.page GMT hey Carly my day was ok boring and the first half went pretty fast, i like your name i hate my name...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/287722.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/287722.page GMT lol i hate my name i like your name Theresa my name i hate it i want it to be a name that fits me!! carlynn is to girly for me haha i'm such a tomboy haha ohh i'm thinking of tim speedle again haha i'm happy now haha ~~Carly~~ Speedle Sisters Theresa Bel Gracie Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/287730.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/287730.page GMT i like it my name sounds to weird for me, i use to be a major tomboy but now i'm in between but not too much of a tomboy like i use too but i do love action shows and movies...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/287742.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/287742.page GMT yeah lol i'm becoming a little bit girly which is scaring me haha but yeah i love action shows and movies and horror shows and movies haha i still wanna learn to skateboard haha but yeah i'm coming into that kinda girly phase haha which i don't want to haha man i wanna watch jurassic park haha ~~Carly~~ Speedle Sisters Theresa Bel Gracie Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/287762.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/287762.page GMT that's funny i can't wait till tonight's Episode even though its about a cannibal....Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/287778.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/287778.page GMT yeah lol i love csi miami whats ya favorite episode mine is bang bang your debt cause they had speed come back and help eric i hope they have speed come back this season too ~~Carly~~ Speedle Sisters Theresa Bel Gracie Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/287944.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/287944.page GMT oh and i will post the next chapter soon i've kinda been slow today lol omg yay little people big world is gonna be on at eight yay! lol ~~Carly~~ Speedle Sisters Theresa Bel Gracie Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/287954.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/287954.page GMT ok i will post the next chapter now but after that i'm gonna go watch jurassic park hahahaha~~Carly~~ Speedle sisters Theresa Bel Gracie Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/287963.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/287963.page GMT hi .cant wait 4 4 more .sorri about yest.

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/287977.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/287977.page GMT Chapter 61 hard to tell him that.. D: that our younger brother was almost killed H: i know but your gonna have to tell tim about what happened with jason soon D: i know ( Later that night david goes to tim's house and rings the doorbell) T: what do you want this time david D: i need to talk to you about something Ka: daddy whose at the door oh my god you! T: david now's not the time ?: david's here? T: yeah dad davids here ?: let him in Ka: what i'm not letting him anywhere near lily!?: we need to tell you all something L: about what daddy ( tim lets david in and kaylee grabs lily and holds her) ?: lexie tim your younger brother jason was almost murdered T: what? L; oh my god Ka: whose jason T: your other uncle Ka: oh you never told me i had an other uncle Re: i never knew about him either kaylee ?: there's more Car: what more ?: reed carly gracie bel theresa brett you all have an other sister and she was with him she is ok but i think it's time you six meet her ( jason walks in) Jas: hi guys Car: how old is she ?: she is theresa's twin Re: so she's 13 D: yeah ( genevieve walks in ) Gen: hi ( tim looks at genevieve and see's she looks just like gina and tim pulls david over to the side) T: why does genevive look like gina! D: because gina had an affair with me T: is she the mother of all of them D: she is only the mother of carly gracie theresa and genevieve T: four of them D: yes tim i'm sorry T: you a** hole get out of my house D: all right i will go but tim there's something else.. T: what ?: would you two stop fighting and get over here D: coming dad ( david walks over to where the other's are and tim stays where he is and tries to calm down before he goes back over to the other's )

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/288019.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/288019.page GMT YAY LOVED IT .MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/288045.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/288045.page GMT good chapter i loved it wow i got a twin i love more please if you can Carly i loved it, my favorite Episode is Nailed Season 4 Episode 8 Nailed i'm crazy...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/288054.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/288054.page GMT wow really good story and im Theresa twin yayyyy lol

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/290389.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/290389.page GMT Chapter 62 Hard To tell him that part two( tim calms himself down and walks over to the others ) Ka: dad you ok T: fine sweetheart ( kaylee carly gracie theresa genevieve and bel go to bed and the adults talk) G: tim i'm sorry T: i can't believe you would do that gina i mean i can believe david would but you C: babe i think we should talk about this tomorrow G: calleigh i will go you don't have to worry about me i got over tim a long time ago T: i got over you when i thought you died ( gina leaves) C: babe maybe you should go calm down T: i'm fine D: i'm sorry timmy T: get out of my house D: tim H: david i think it's best you go D: fine ( david leaves) T: did you know H H: he told me after he got out T: god i mean me and gina were only 18 when we had kaylee C: i know babe Ry: i was upset you know i was only 12 but i just wanted to punch you as hard as i could but i knew how much you and gina loved each other and i knew you were 18 and C: i think maybe we should continue this conversation tomorrow H: speed calleigh's right T: ok ( kaylee gracie carly theresa and genevieve were listening in on their conversation) Ka: wow i never knew my mom cheated on dad Gr: and and me carly theresa and genevieve are what happened Ka: gracie you are carly are twins and theresa and genevieve you two are twins i mean if you four were all twins then maybe i have a twin T: you do have a twin kaylee Ka: what dad

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/291060.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/291060.page GMT my god they keep having twins what in their water lol

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/291086.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/291086.page GMT Chapter 63 finding the truth behind the lies Ka: what do you mean i have a twin T: come on into the living room and i will explain ( tim and kaylee go into the living room) T: your twin me and your mom gave up for adoption and he he got into a lot of problems and well we lost track of him Ka: so i have a twin T: yeah Ka: why didn't you tell me G: because we couldn't find him T: yeah Ka: so i have a twin brother that could be alive or dead T: he's a alive see jason isn't me and david's brother Ka: jason's my twin? G: yes J: i got into a lot of trouble and i was in jail for a while then when i got out someone tried to kill me Ka: who?T: see that's why we didn't want to tell you cause we don't know who tried to kill your brother and we didn't want the same person going after you Ka: ohhh so me and lily are now in danger H: kinda T: you just gotta stay low till we find the people who tried to kill your brother ( gracie carly theresa and genevieve were listening in on their conversation and fell out the door) Gr&Car&Th&Gen: ouch T: you girls are busted Gr: you know were not kids Bel: yeah Gr: bel your a kid Bel: you don't have to keep reminding me for crying out loud Car: bel you can't do everything me gracie theresa and genevieve do Bel: i know! sheesh T: get back into bed Th&Gen&Bel: fine T: gracie and carly you girls can be in this conversation Gr&car: ok Th: oh my god that's no fair! T: they are older then you girls Gen: so T: go to bed Gen: fine ( genevieve theresa and bel go to bed) H: now we need to find the truth behind other lies T: yeah but what's the truth H: that's what need to find out

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/291145.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/291145.page GMT omg Carly's got a twin more [pleaseeeee Caely this is getting good no fair me, and Genevieve can't be on the conversation that stinks were what 13 i remember that age it sucked big time pleaseeeeeeeeee continue i need to know what will happen next...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/291327.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/291327.page GMT poor me i get all the shit hey carly loved and yeah gen womsething in that water more i loved it nice turn of events

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/291359.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/291359.page GMT i think you mean kaylee's got a twin hahaha but gracie's my twin and genevieve is your twin theresa here is our ages in the story in case you forgot haha kaylee and her twin jason are 20 me and gracie are 16 and theresa you and genevieve are 13 and bel your 9 ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/291526.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/291526.page GMT hey carly uou made me and nevl among the youngest when were the oldest of all of you commom lol

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/291528.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/291528.page GMT well in the story Genevieve we do have a 4 year old brother and reed is our oldest brother he is 22 so you and theresa are in the middle at 13 ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/291534.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/291534.page GMT that is funny i forgot sorry, that is funny Gen i'm so not thinking tonight i'm losing it pleaseeeeeeee continue that is funny though that were the third and second youngest you girls crack me up and hehehehe Bel's the youngest out of us all hehhehe that's so funny, i'm what the third in real life in between all of us...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/291543.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/291543.page GMT i don't know haha i don't even know how old you are in real life i'm 13 so ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/291558.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/291558.page GMT i'm almost 18 in real life but i don't mind being 13 again its better than being 9 again keep up the good work Carly your doing a good job...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/291580.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/291580.page GMT wow your almost 18 haha i still got a good 5 years before i hit 18 but my brother he is 17 so he only has a year before he turns 18 i'm probably the youngest out of all of you in real life haha man that kinda stinks but i'm use to having friends that are older then me ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/291587.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/291587.page GMT and i better go to bed now so i don't wake up at one in the afternoon again haha night theresa bel and gen talk to you girls tomorrow ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/291593.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/291593.page GMT yea well it won't be till January so that's not till the new year but i'm almost there, yea its kind of fun and kind of not, i don't think your the youngest on here Graciee is 14 i think if i get it wrong then sorry sis love ya, i'm use in having friends younger than me almost all my friends at school are at least the same age just different times, or are a year younger than i am...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/291600.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/291600.page GMT ok bye Carly talk to you tomorrow...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/291604.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/291604.page GMT yeah i kinda like having friends that are either 13 you know my age or older i don't really like having younger friends but some of them are ok yeah good night theresa talk to u tomorrow ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/291647.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/291647.page GMT and my best friend in real life there is only like a two week age difference between us haha she is two weeks older then me haha good night i better go now haha ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/291654.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/291654.page GMT night Carly talk to you tomorrow...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/291657.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/291657.page GMT HEY GIRLS WELL IM 26 YEARS OLD BUT I HAVE HEAPS OF YOUNGER FRIENDS AND A HELLUVA LOTTA MALE FRIENDS NOT VERY MANY FEMALES I DONT HAVE I JUST FIND THEM HARD TO READ AND YEAH IM A TOMBOY TOO TWO BROTHERS 1 YEAR AND 2 YEARS OLDER THAN ME SO YEAH GROWING UP PLAYING WITH ALL BOYS AND NOW MY LITTLE GIRL IS THE SAME 3 BROTHERS NO SISTERS BUT LOTS OF COUSINS TOO IM MORE A GUYS MATE THEN A CHICKS MATE I THINK ME AND GEN ARE THE OLDEST ON HERE AND PALESA? AND NANCY? BUT ANYWHO ENOUGH RAMBLING GOTS TO GO I MIGHT ACTUALLY GET TO BED BEFORE 1130 TONIGHT I KNWO OH MY GOD ANYWAYS BYE

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/292096.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/292096.page GMT yeah i have a few guy friends and a lot of girl friends i prefer to hang out with boys rather then girls but i only have like one guy friend in real life and a few on a kids chat website thing haha and like three girl friends in real life but like a bunch on the same kids website chat thing haha yeah i like to hang out with guys more cause i kinda fit in cause i'm a tomboy and like my best girl friend in real life is religus so she doesn't watch csi miami and stuff which kinda stinks but well i'm not religus and my mom doesn't really care what i watch or what time i go to bed or what music i listen too so yeah ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/293121.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/293121.page GMT Chapter 64 Finding the truth behind the lies part two T: what more is there to find out horatio H: well one thing is to find out who tried to kill jason and i don't know what else jason do you have any idea of who would try to kill you Jas: no i don't Car: i might have an idea who H: carly what do you mean Car: there's this guy he went after mom and bel and he killed mom he might have gone after jason T: what make you think that Gr: well he said to my mom well my stepmom that he would go after the family if she didn't keep quiet about something H: keep quiet about what Gr&Car: we don't know D: i think i might know what that guy means Ka: what D: if she didn't keep quiet about him going after tim the guy was gonna go after the familyT: going after all of us D: yeah all of us ( all of a sudden they hear glass breaking and a scream coming from the room where theresa genevieve bel and brett are sleeping and they run for the door) T: BEl Theresa GEn! Brett! ( when they enter the room bel and theresa and genevieve and brett are missing ) D: he took them! ( they see a note that says if you want them back then follow my orders) Re: what are we gonna do H: we are gonna do what their kidnapper says

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/293838.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/293838.page GMT omg Carly you have to continue pleaseeeeeeeee this is getting good i had a feeling something was about to go down more pleaseeeee...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/293847.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/293847.page GMT yeah well haha i had to have something go down haha after all that stuff about finding out about kaylee having a twin and gina cheating on tim i had to have something go down haha ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/293858.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/293858.page GMT ok cool it was good i loved it i'm like that on my story too keep up the good work love the story...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/293862.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/293862.page GMT i gotta go for a while i have been on the computer for a while and my mom doesn't want me spending a lot of time on the computer at one time so talk to you later ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/293863.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/293863.page GMT ok bye that's the same way with my parents but i don't care i been on since after school...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/293869.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/293869.page GMT Chapter 65 loved ones at stake H: speed who took them T: H this is the reason why i played dead for those few years there is someone after me and he is dangerus H: how dangerus T: H you know him H: who is he T: ron saris H: ron saris? T: yeah Car: uncle tim ron is after you? H: carly do you know him Car: he and my stepmom dated for a while Gr; yeah and our stepmom found out about him wanting to go after tim so she called it off and ron killed her and almost killed bel L: tim why is this ron saris guy after you T: it's a long story H: speed you need to tell us T: well all right i was going home one day and i saw him beating up some guy so i went to stop him but he threw me against the wall and said that if i told anyone he would go after me and my family G: and that is why i was in the witness protection program Cl: and me well i was actully put in the witness protection program cause of dad but ron saris works with him H: so now we are up against two of our worst enemies T: what are we gonna do H H: well first we need to figure out where those kids are T: and then H: then speed then we get revenge

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/296684.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/296684.page GMT Carly pleaseeeeee continue i need to know if were going to be ok pleaseeeeeeeeee this is getting good...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/296695.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/296695.page GMT HOLY SHIT MAN THAT WAS GOOD LOVED IT AND PLEASE DONT HURT US!!! MAN I LOVED IT MORE PLEASE MORE MORE MORE

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/296707.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/296707.page GMT lol don't worry i won't hurt you girls and that is like the only chapter i can post tonight cause i am having computer problems grrrrrrr ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/296726.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/296726.page GMT DAMN IT!!!!!!!!

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/296741.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/296741.page GMT lol sorry my computer has been giving me a lot of trouble lately grrrr it's been freezing and stuff on me and it runs really slow sometimes grrr ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/296745.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/296745.page GMT DAMMIT THAT SUCKS...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/296751.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/296751.page GMT yeah it does sorry girls i will post an other chapter maybe later tonight but more then likely tomorrow when i can get on my moms computer cause my mom is trying to go to sleep now so i can't use her computer sorry ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/296762.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/296762.page GMT its ok Carly...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/296772.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/296772.page GMT thanks god i hate stupid verzion fios its the reason for my computer problems you should have heard me cursing out my computer all day haha seriusly i was cursing at my computer hahaha ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/296780.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/296780.page GMT yea that's how my computer is sometimes...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/296803.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/296803.page GMT my computer is giving me trouble i better go talk to you later ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/296804.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/296804.page GMT Chapter 66 loved ones at stake part twoT: revenge H:revenge T: H i don't think i've ever heard you say that word before H: well this time calls for it ( meanwhile where the kids are) Gen: let us go a** hole! Br: gen don't curse ron: you shoud listen to your little brother Th: shut it ron ?: all of you stop Th: oh my god ( meanwhile at the lab) H: so we know ron and my father have them but who else J: who knows T: jake i thought you were in new york J: i got back this morning and heard about whats going on i wanna help H: good we could use you ( meanwhile where the kids are) ?: what why oh my god Th: nothing ?: like he** its nothing now tell me why you said oh my god ( meanwhile at the lab) C: tim are you ok T: yeah H: speed you don't look ok T: H three of my nieces and one of my nephews just got kiddnapped am i supposed to be all right Car: he does make a point T: thank you carly ( meanwhile where the kids are) Th: well ummm who you are ?: and who am i Th: ummmmmm

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/297832.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/297832.page GMT HEY CARLYI'M HERE IN THE UKOFF SCHOOLCAUSE I'M ILLSO KEEP ON WRITING PLEASE FOR MEPLEASE PLEASE GRACIEAKASICKY

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/297890.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/297890.page GMT hey gracie sorry your sick Bel is sick too hope you feel better soon ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/297891.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/297891.page GMT Chapter 67 saving loved ones ?: come on tell me my name Th: rick stetler Rick> you got it right and can you guess who our other kiddnapped people ae GR: Ray Jr and cooper?( meanwhile at the lab horatio gets a phone call and answers it) Ron: hey horatio long time no see oh and we have two other people here you know them H: who Ron" well besides theresa gen bel and brett we also have cooper and ray jr and well if you follow my commands they will come out of this unharmed H: what do you want ron Ron: i want you and speedle to come to the warehouse by the docks H: fine Ron: see you soon T: what did he want H H: he wants me and you to go to the warehouse by the docks T: ok C: what tim M: horatio your just gonna go like that H: marisol calleigh me and tim have no other choice C: what there's always an other choice H: not this time ( horatio and tim go to the warehouse) Ron: well well well look who finally showed up kids you can go now Rayjr: i'm not a kid i'm 20 H: ray theresa gen bel brett cooper go ( the kids leave) Rick: hi horatio hi speedy T: you a* hole you hurt my sister you heartless ba**** Rick: wow you got a lot of mouth ( rick punches speed in the stomach hard and speed falls to the ground) T: ouch Ron: well now horatio and speed your our prisoners Rick: this should be fun

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/298016.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/298016.page GMT hey Carlykeep going please please pleasei love this storygracie

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/298129.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/298129.page GMT good chapter Carly more pleaseeeeeeee this is getting good i loved it more pleaseeeeeeee...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/298234.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/298234.page GMT hey theresa u off school again? ~~Carly~~ Speedle girls Gracie. Carly. Theresa. Gen. Bel.

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/298266.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/298266.page GMT yea, you...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/298274.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/298274.page GMT lol i'm home schooled and my mom is at college till 3 so i can be on her computer till she gets home yay! lol ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/298277.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/298277.page GMT oh ok cool do you like being home schooled...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/298284.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/298284.page GMT ummmmmm not really but i can stay up late and sleep in haha and watch whatever i want and listen to whatever music i want well ok i can't watch whatever i gotta ask my mom sometimes depending on what it is haha ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/298288.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/298288.page GMT Chapter 68 saving loved ones part two T: what do you mean this should be fun Rick: i mean it should be fun because we can do this ( Rick punches speed in chest and cracks a rib and speed falls on his knees )T: aaaahhh! H: speed ( horatio's father punches horatio in the stomach and horatio punches him back) HF: you will regret that son ( horatio's father punches horatio in the stomach and then in the chest) H: ahh! ( rick kicks speed in the head and speed falls over and then rick stomps on speed's chest and breaks a rib) T: ahhhhhh H: speed! HF: your not going anywhere son ( horatio's father knocks horatio to the ground and spits on him ) ( rick keeps punching and kicking speed and speed gets knocked unconsis ) H: speed ( rick ties horatio and speed up and then rick ron and horatio's father leave) H: speed can you hear me ( horatio looks over to one of the corners and sees a bomb) H: speed wake up there's a bomb ( horatio gets loose and unties speed and drags him to cover and the bomb goes off)

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/298400.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/298400.page GMT good chapter Carly i was on the edge of my seat more pleaseeeeee this is getting good...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/298478.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/298478.page GMT yay i like it when people are on the edge of their seat when they read a chapter lol ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/298485.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/298485.page GMT yea me too, it was good keep up the good work this story is getting good...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/298527.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/298527.page GMT Chapter 69 lets all go boom!H: speed speed speed talk to me ( speed is still unconsis and horatio finds him and speed's head is bleeding ) H: speed C: horatio! Tim!! H: calleigh! C: horatio where are you H: in here! ( calleigh tries to open the door but it won't open ) C: the door won't open E: here let me try to kick it down ( eric kicks the door down) E: speed H: call for an ambulance ( calleigh calls for an ambulance) H: he's losing a lot of blood C: here take this hankerchif and put it on his wound the ambulance is on its way E: come on speed stay with me ( speed opens his eyes) T: are the kids ok C: their fine T: calleigh C: yeah babe T: i love you C: i love you too E; speed stay awake man T: i'm cold C: oh god no H: natalia take calleigh away C: what no E: calleigh go H: speed stay with me T: i don't think i can Ry: come on tim you gotta stay with us ( speed passes out and an other bomb goes off)

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/298536.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/298536.page GMT omg you have to continue Carly more pleaseeeeeeee this is good i loved it oh man i'm so on the edge of my seat now...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/298550.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/298550.page GMT hahaha i gotta go for a while i will post more later talk to you later ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/298555.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/298555.page GMT ok bye Carly talk to you later....Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/298573.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/298573.page GMT please keep going this is very good

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/298624.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/298624.page GMT Chapter 70 staying alive could be hard when your at death's door H: speed ryan eric E: i'm fine H where are speed and ryan Ry: ouch i'm here E: wolfe u all right Ry: i think i broke my leg and cracked a rib ahh E: speed ( they hear someone say help me ) H: speed Coop: no not speed E: coop where are you Coop: over here ( meanwhile tim is having some sort of dream) ?: hi tim T: huh where am i ?: well this is where you can chose T: chose what ?: if you wanna live or die T: what i'm in between ?: yes and i think you should go back to calleigh and hannah and zack and the new little one you got on the way T: calleigh's pregnant ?: yes T: i can't see your face who are you ?: you wanna know T: kinda yeah ( the woman walks out of the light so tim can see her face) T: oh my god ( meanwhile back in the warehouse) E: easy coop i'm coming Coop: Oww you stepped on my hand E: sorry H: eric is coop all right E: he's trapped under a bunch of stuff really heavy stuff oh no.. ( meanwhile back in tim's dream..) ?: remember me T: yeah i remember you ?: then whats my name T: dana ?: so you do remember me brother in law T: yeah Dana: tim you need to listen to me you need to go back T: why Dana: to be with the people that love you and your kids they need you T: but Dana: tim go back T: fine ( meanwhile back in the warehouse) H: oh no what E: H something cut into his artery in his leg if i move this stuff he is gonna die the beam is keeping enough pressure on his leg to control the bleeding ( they hear someone moan) H: speed speed T: H C: oh my god are you guys ok N: we called for rescue Coop: owww E: take it easy coop ( rescue arrives and takes coop and tim to the hospital)

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/299447.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/299447.page GMT HEY CARLYMORE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASEGRACIEAKASICKY

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/299458.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/299458.page GMT good chapter Carly more pleaseeeeeeeee this is getting good..Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/299465.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/299465.page GMT Chapter 71 loved ones saved ( at the hospital ) C: doctor are they ok Doctor: well tim has four broken ribs a fractured arm and a a conncusin because of the headwound he recived and dan cooper? we repaired the artery and he has a broken leg but he will be fine both of them wil be fine C: can we see them Doctor: they are still unconsis so its better if you come back in the morning and they will probably be awake then E: H you ok H: yeah i just got two cracked ribs and a sprained wrist Ry: turned out my leg wasnt broken it was a sprain but i do have a broken arm and a cracked rib oww L: calleigh you and the kids are staying with me and eric tonight H: how about calleigh you hannah and zack and eric and lexie go to my place okE: all right H C: don't i have a say in this H: no C: ok then Car: is uncle tim ok C: he will be fine E: where's the rest GR: brett is with dad and the rest are here H: ok then why dont you all some to my place its a really big place RE: you sure Mr. caine H: please call me horatio H: and yes i'm sure ( Bel goes with calleigh to pick up hannah and zack then they go to horatio's place E: shhhh Bel fell asleep ( eric picks Bel from the car up and takes her inside and puts her in one of the guest bedrooms) C: come on zack you gotta go to bed too Z: i'm not tiredC: your still going to bed you got that mister Z: fine H: you all right RayJR Rayjr: yeah i'm fine Th&Gr&Car&Gen: thank you for letting us stay here for the night mr. caine H: your welcome girls ( the next morning everyone goes to the hospital and tim and cooper are awake ) T: hey babe C: hi tim i have something to tell you T: your pregnant C: how did you know T: well when i was unconsis in the warehouse i had a weird dream and my sister-in-law dana told me that you were pregnant C: really T: yup now give me a kiss ( calleigh kisses tim)

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/301734.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/301734.page GMT good chapter Carly i loved it please continue soon this is getting good...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/302144.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/302144.page GMT aww how sweet and very good few chapters loved them more please

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/302517.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/302517.page GMT yeah sorry i haven't been posting much lately i've kinda had writers block and i have been busy and my mom has been making me go to bed early for the last two or three nights grrrr ~~Carly~~ Speedle Girls Gracie. Carly. Theresa. GEn. Bel

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/302803.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/302803.page GMT Chapter 72 will our lives ever be normal ( a month and a half later tim was out of the hospital he had all his reablation stuff in the hospial and thats why he was there for a month and a half ok enough explaining haha) Ha: daddy!T: sweetheart!Z: mom hannah pushed me down Ha: no i didn't liar Z: see i have the cut to prove it C: hannah Ha: sorry zack Z: whatever Ka: hi dad T: hey kaylee ( tim and kaylee hug ) Lily; grandpa T: she can say grandpa now??Ka: dad she's a year old and she's really smart come here you ( kaylee picks up lily) T: hey there you ( tim tickles lily and lily laughs ) Ka: she's a happy one T: yeah where are reed gracie carly theresa gen bel and brett C: they will be here later theresa gen bel and brett are at something for their' school and reed is with them and gracie and carly are at work T: i see D: hey little brother T: hi david ( david and tim hug) C: oh and lexie's sick so she won't be able to make it T: sick??? C: yeah i'm thinking the exact same thing ( later the night reed carly gracie theresa gen bel brett ryan evan natalia horatio marisol and jaylyn are at tim and calleigh's house and everyone is talking and having a good time...) Well for now

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/303736.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/303736.page GMT Hi Carlymore please please please please please please pleasegracie

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/303743.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/303743.page GMT good chapter loved it more please if you can Carly if not then i can wait as long as it takes it takes me forever to write, and i always get write blocks...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/303744.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/303744.page GMT yeah well i also got stuff going on i've been busy lately and my brother is now sick so i gotta take care of him when my mom is at school =( ahhh that was a sad face lol and omg yay there is a new episode of csi miami tomorrow =) now i can do the happy face lol ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/303756.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/303756.page GMT ok i hope your brother gets better soonnot for we;re on season 6 and i gotta wait until next summer to watch season 7no liegracie

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/303764.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/303764.page GMT that sucks i'm sorry Carly, yea it will be good too...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/303765.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/303765.page GMT oh man that sucks graice it will be good it's only like what 3 or 4 or 5 episodes in and its already good lol i haven't been keeping track of the episodes hah i gotta keep track of the first csi show episodes cause i gotta know when grissom is leaving =( that will be a sad episode but i hope they bring tim speedle back like they did last season that would be awesome he should come back to the show for good so they can kill horatio off he's really annoying me ahhh ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/303776.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/303776.page GMT I like Horatio so there Graciep.skeep going

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/303839.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/303839.page GMT hey csirules .defitnentli lovin the stori .keep goin ,cant wait 2 read more

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/304144.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/304144.page GMT CARLY GREAT CHAPTER AND I DID HAVE WRITERS BLOCK TODAY BUT CLARA MY LITTLE MUSE SAID ONE THING AND KABLAMMO INSTANT IDEAS MAN SHES GOOD LIKE THAT AHHAAHA I LOVED THE CHAPTERS THEY WERE VERY GOOD I LOVE THIS STORY AND IM WITH GRACIEE WE ONLY JUST GETTING SEASON 6 WE UP TO EP 13 BUT I BOUGHT THE SEASON AS SOON AS IT CAME OUT SO I HAVE SEEN THEM ALL PROBABLY THE ONLY ONE IN OZ WHOS THAT DESPERATE TO WATCH IT THAT BAD HAHAHA BUT I YOUTUBE EVERYTHING NEW OR CLARA AND THERESA TELL ME WHAT HAPPENES ANYWYAS GOTTA GO GREAT MORE PLEASE

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/304151.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/304151.page GMT Chapter 73 yet an other disaster ( ok where we left off everyone was talking and having a good time and it was storming outside yeah i know that wasn't in the last chapter and all of a sudden the tornado sirens start going off) Bel: whats that Gen: its a tornado siren Gr; that's not good T: oh no everyone into the basement ( reed picks up brett and ryan picks up bel and everyone goes into the basement) Ha: mommy daddy what's going on T: it's ok hannah Ha: i'm scared Z: me too ( reed was holding onto brett and gracie and carly were holding onto bel and ryan was holding evan and horatio was holding marisol who was holding jaylyn and all of a sudden it got really quiet but the sirens were still going off then all of a sudden the tornado hits!)

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/304235.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/304235.page GMT Hey CarlyMore Please please please please please please pleasegracie

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/304399.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/304399.page GMT omg Carly you have to continue please please this is getting good i love it...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/304932.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/304932.page GMT Chapter 74 tornado town ( an hour later) T: calleigh? hannah zack?Car: owww T: carly are you ok Car: yeah i'm fine gracie theresa gen bel brett?GR: oww here Th&Gen: here GR: Bel Bel : yeah here ( tim carly gracie bel theresa and gen find reed brett ryan natalia evan marisol horatio and jaylyn and then they find calleigh hannah and zack and calleigh has a head wound and zack is buried under rubble and hannah is trying to lift the rubble off zack)GR: hannah come here Ha: no i gotta help zack ( gracie picks up hannah and tim and ryan lift the rubble off zack and he's not breathing) T: zack zack ( ryan does CPR and zack coughs) RY: good boy T: calleigh calleigh babe answer me Cal: tim??T: yeah babe its me Cal: oww i gotta headache ( a few hours later everyone is taken to the hospital and bel has a broken arm, calleigh has a conncusen. zack has a fractured leg, reed has a big cut on his arm that had to have 10 stitches and everyone else is fine)

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/305708.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/305708.page GMT good chapter Carly i loved it more please pleaseeeeeeeeeee this is getting good loved it...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/305724.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/305724.page GMT HOLY MACARONI I LOVED IT MORE PLEASE THIS IS TOO GOOD AND THANKDS THERESA FOR HELPING ME KNOW WHO EVERYONE IS NOW HEHEEH SORRY I GOT A BIT LOST BUT IM GOOD NOW

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/305733.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/305733.page GMT thanks theresa haha now i'm at a complete blank lol i don't feel like thinking now omg yay a new episode of csi miami is on tonight yay! ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/305735.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/305735.page GMT I FEEL BAD 4 THEM .I HOPE THEY ALL MAKE IT OUT OK .GREAT STORIE ,FINISH WRITIN MORE ,PLZ YAYYYYYYYY .I CANT WAIT 4 ANYMORE

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/305744.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/305744.page GMT your welcome girls, YAY can't wait to watch it...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/305746.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/305746.page GMT yeah i can't wait to watch it either cause julia is going crazy now haha ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/305766.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/305766.page GMT I DONT LIKE HER ,NEVA DID

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/305776.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/305776.page GMT yeah i don't like julia either she's just i don't know i just don't like her ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/305782.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/305782.page GMT yeah girls i agree i never like her charcetr shes too shonky for my liking and she is a seduvtress and shes nsaty vindictive and OH HELL I DONT LIKE HER SHES NOT NICE!!!!

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/305790.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/305790.page GMT lol i agree with you Bel ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/305793.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/305793.page GMT HAHAHAHA .SHES SNEAKY N KANIVIN

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/305796.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/305796.page GMT yes that too lol ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/305799.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/305799.page GMT A FEW MORE MIN. THEN IT COMES ON .YAYYYYYYYY

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/305869.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/305869.page GMT Chapter 75 feeling musical ( a few weeks later gracie and carly are on their way to work when their favorite song by demi lovato comes on) Car: oh my gosh gracie this is me is on! by demi lovato and feturing joe jonas! lets sing along Gr: no yo know i dont like singing Car: come on please Gr: no Car: fine pleaseGr: lip sync Car ok GR: oh my god i love that songCar: me too GR: yeah haha ok were at work now

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/308886.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/308886.page GMT HEY HEY WAS MY STORY AN INSPRIATION FOR A BIT OF MUSIC SINCE WE ROCKED OUT TODAY HAHAHA LOVED IT MORE PLEASE GREAT

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/308897.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/308897.page GMT haha i don't know that song was going threw my head and i know all the words so i just put it in my story and your story was probly an inspriation haha i was gonna put a different song but i can't remember all the words so i just did this is me by demi lovato and featuring joe jonas cause i mesmorised the song haha ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/308900.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/308900.page GMT good chapter Carly i loved it more please...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/308923.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/308923.page GMT haha morning theresa did you get a good nights sleep ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/308925.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/308925.page GMT yea but i kept thinking about Bel's last few chapters....Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/308929.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/308929.page GMT yeah i just got caught up with her story a while ago cause i couldn't fall back to sleep after my mom left for college so i just came on here ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/308932.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/308932.page GMT oh ok cool well i have to go to school talk to you later bye...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/308937.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/308937.page GMT talk to you later bye have a good day at school ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/308939.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/308939.page GMT Chapter 76 an enemy becomes a friend? ( while gracie and carly are at work) ?: all right girls and guys lets get to work oh and we have a new staff member today please meet clavo cruz Car: that's the guy that shot eric GR: whats he doing outta jail Car:i dont know i better call horatio GR: no we will tell him later lets just keep an eye on mr. cruz Car: you got it KY: carly gracie isnt that the guy that shot uncle eric Gr: yes kyle it is KY: whats he doing outta jail GR: i asked the same question ( the next day clavo is at the lab in innteragation) H: clavo how did you get outta jail Clavo: i didn't shoot your guy caine i didn't do any of that stuff H: clavo how do you expect me to believe you Clavo: listen caine i work with the F.B.I and i was framed for those crimes H: really Clavo: yes T: H he's tellign the truth he worked with me when i was in the F.B.I H: speed? T: its true H H: speed who is after you guys T: we still don't know H: that's not good T: no you think KA: dad!T: yeah kaylee KA: lily was kiddnapped

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/310078.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/310078.page GMT omg more Carly pleaseeeeeeeeee this is getting good pleaseeeeeeeeeee...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/310088.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/310088.page GMT thanks theresa i will continue as soon as i can my computer is giving me problems and there's something going on and i'm really tired and my mind doesnt wanna think so i will continue as soon as i can

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/310149.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/310149.page GMT your welcome Carly this story is getting good, its ok i can wait as long as it takes i'm not rushing you...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/310157.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/310157.page GMT thanks for your understanding it's just well my house is getting foreclosed on so i don't really wanna even have to think ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/310165.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/310165.page GMT your welcome, that sucks i'm sorry i got my braces tightened today so hopefully my mouth won't hurt i took medicine before i went thank god but yea i understand and your welcome again...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/310169.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/310169.page GMT you have braces i might need them for my bottom teeth my brother had braces but he got them taken off a few months ago i hope your mouth doesn't hurt ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/310175.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/310175.page GMT yea i got them its been almost a year since i got them on then 1 year ago from today my grandma passed away, that sucks i'm sorry that you have to get them for your bottom teeth they take forever to get use to, that's good that he got them off a few months ago, yea me too...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/310186.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/310186.page GMT i said i might need them for my botton teeth i don't know my mom says i might we don't know yet cause i still need to go to the dentist ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/310192.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/310192.page GMT oh ok well good luck i hope you don't need them there killers i hate them...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/310198.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/310198.page GMT yeah well i'm gonna go play a video game and try to get my mind off things for a while talk to you later ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/310199.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/310199.page GMT ok bye Carly talk to you later i'll pray for you and your family god bless you and your family Carly...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/310208.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/310208.page GMT SAME HERE CARLYI'M SO SO SO SO SO SORRYGRACIEAKASTITCHES

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/310214.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/310214.page GMT GREAT CHAPTERS GIMME MORE WOMAN!!!! PLEASE

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/310328.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/310328.page GMT LOVE THE STORIE ,COTINUE WHEN U CAN

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/313163.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/313163.page GMT wow clavos a good guy, and he works for the F.B.I. never saw that one coming great twist but if he was framed then who really commited those crimes?

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/313307.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/313307.page GMT you will all find out soon enough maybe haha i can't post an other chapter tonight cause my computer is messing up but i wll post one tomorrow when i can get on my moms computer ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/313318.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/313318.page GMT Chapter 77 the lovers lies T: what Clavo: speed we need to find who is after you and your family T: i know clavo Ka: dad who took her T: we don't know H: kaylee where's kyle KA: umm he's at work he got fired from his last job so now he works at the zoo where carly and gracie work at ( meanwhile gracie and carly pick up theresa gen bel and brett from school and they get a call from tim )Gr: hey uncle timmy what's up T: listen you need to get down to the lab Gr: why T: cause all of you are in danger just get down here to the lab GR: Ok ( tim hangs up and the girls and boy go to the lab) Car: Mac Mac: hey carly ( carly and mac hug) T: come on lets get inside ( meanwhile elsewhere) ?: babe are you sure you wanna do this ?: yes i'm sure i've been wanting to kill horatio caine since day one ?: hey don't forget i get to kill speedle ?: yes i know rick Rick: so antonio your gonna kill the caine Anto: yes i am ?: come on guys lets just think about how we are gonna do this Rick: shut up natalia Nat: hey you aren't supposed to say my name Anto: shut up ( natalia's phone rings) Nat: hey ryan Ry: natalia where are you Nat: hanging out with some friends Ry: you need to get down to the lab asap Nat: ok see you in a few minutes ( natalia hangs up)Nat: well i better get down to the lab ( natalia kisses antonio and she goes to the lab) Nat: hey guys what's up H: natalia we know you are working with the guys who wanna kill me and tim Nat: what are you talkign about Ry: natalia stop with the games we know you are workign with them now who are they and is evan even my son Nat: of course evan is your son and i will never tell you who i am working with Ry: i thought you loved me but it was all a lie Nat: yeah it was i love antonio H: antonio riaz? Nat: yes H: book her ( natalia is put under arrest) RY: i thought she was nice and i thought she loved me and our son Alexx: i know honey it's gonna be ok ( meanwhile outside the lab) Rick: lets kill these a** holes i want lexie back Anto: chill a little will ya ( Anotonio and rick get their guns out and aim them and gunshots go off)

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/314389.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/314389.page GMT HOLY SHIT WHY WHY? MORE WOMAN MORE DESPERATLEY NOW PLEASE

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/314408.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/314408.page GMT hey Bel what are you doing up this late haha it's gotta be really late over there haha ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/314411.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/314411.page GMT HEY CARLYNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOO!! !!!!!!!! - I NEED MORE PLEASE PLEASEI'M BEGGING YOU( WELL YOU CAN'T SEE ME BUT I AM)GRACIEAKAI'M FINALLY HOME

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/314788.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/314788.page GMT hahaha just wait till you see what else is gonna happen and someone else is gonna be involved in this you will find out in the next chapter or two i am talking about haha oh and an other shocker will soon be to come ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/314791.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/314791.page GMT oh my freaking god woman how could you make nat the bad girl lol i love it really good

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/314798.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/314798.page GMT well i was thinking abotu a new shocker last night and i thought why not make natalia be one of the bad guys oh and someone else on the inside might be working with the bad guys also i wonder who?? ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/314806.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/314806.page GMT ohhhh your so bad lol

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/314811.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/314811.page GMT i know i am haha i will post the next chapter now ok lol ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/314814.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/314814.page GMT ok cant wait

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/314816.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/314816.page GMT Chapter 78 lovers lies part two T: Calleigh!! Cal: i'm fine T: H E: horatio's been hit H: i'm fine i only got hit in the arm E: ryan T: ryan GR: he's over here he's been shot ( eric and tim run over to where ryan is and he has a gunshot wound to the stomach ) RY: i can't breath T: gracie here take my phone and call an ambulance Gr: you got it T: where's carly and gen and theresa ( outside) Car: you two said you weren't gonna do that Anto: shut up and get in the car and lets get outta here ( theresa gen and carly get into the car) ( meanwhile back in the lab the aumbalance arrives and takes ryan to the hospital) H: there's no sign of theresa gen or carly T: H: you don't think they got kidnapped by them do you H: speed i think they are working with them T: but why H: maybe to protect people T: but H H: speed is there something you need to tell me T: ok fine carly and gracie and theresa and gen and bel are my daughter's and they are only brett and reed's half sister's H: carly and gracie and theresa and gen and bel are your daughter's T ;yes

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/314837.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/314837.page GMT very good keep going.

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/314844.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/314844.page GMT haha Gen me you and theresa are working with the bad guys but you will find out why soon ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/314847.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/314847.page GMT ohhh your getting badder lolol.

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/314850.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/314850.page GMT i know i am bad haha ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/314854.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/314854.page GMT ok you want to play hardball lol wait until im finish with my chapter on mhl and you,ll see how bad i can be lol muhahhaha

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/314860.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/314860.page GMT ummmmm hahaha i will post the next chapter right now and you will find out why me you and theresa are working with the bad guys ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/314862.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/314862.page GMT Chapter 79 lovers lies part 3 ( meanwhile where carly theresa and gen are) Car: let us go now they will suspect something is up Gen: carly we can explain why we are working with them Th: yeah we are only working with these guys to proctec dad and our siblings and our whole family ( meanwhile at the lab tim gets phone call) T: hello Car: uncle tim are you ok T: carly where are you theresa and gen Car: uncle tim listen we are only working with antonio and rick to protec you and bel and gracie and reed and brett and everyone else around us T: your working with rick and antonio Car: yeah but it's only T: listen ryan was shot Car: what T: listen to me you theresa and gen need to get to the lab and tell us everything Car: ok ( carly theresa and gen go to the lab) H: girls why are you working with antonio and rick Car: to protec you guys from them TH: and they said that if we tell anyone they will kill us and you guys Gen: yeah that is the only reason why we are workign with them H: girls you are still gonna have to be put in a holding cell until we can get this whole thign sorted out Car: don' do that to them just to me i've played the biggest part in it all H: all right then ( carly is taken down to a holding cell) T: theresa gen are you two all right Gen: yeah uncle tim we played a part too H: but not as big a part as your sister Th: is she gonna go to jail she was only trying to protec us all T: i don't know weither she is going to jail or not and i now she was trying to protec us all H: what now T: i don't know H: well we need to fidn out soon

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/314892.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/314892.page GMT very good

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/314895.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/314895.page GMT haha see we were only working with those guys to protec our family and you will find out the bigger part i have in this in the next chapter or two ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/314899.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/314899.page GMT CARLY YOU YOU AND GEN AND THERESAI CAN'T BELIEVE YOU GUYS(WALKS AWAY FROM THEM)LOVED ITKEEP GOING PLEASEGRACIE

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/314902.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/314902.page GMT ok cant wait

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/314905.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/314905.page GMT hey gracie whats up

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/314908.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/314908.page GMT theresa and gen didn't do much i did the biggest part gracie and you will find out what i did soon haha ~~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/314909.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/314909.page GMT hey Genyou ok?I'M FINALLY PUT OF THE HOSPITALGRACIE

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/314918.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/314918.page GMT hey cracie i could be better and what do you mean you finnaly put of the hospital

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/314923.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/314923.page GMT HA HA HA YOUR IN HOLDING CARLY I'M GONNA GO TALK TO NATALIA THEN I'M GONNA GO FIND RIAZ AND STETLERAND THERE IS NUTHING YOU CAN DO ABOUT ITAND NO ONE CAN STOP ME!!!GRACIE

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/314925.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/314925.page GMT huh???? gracie your one of the good guys in my story ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/314930.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/314930.page GMT GOOD GIRL TURNED BAD!!!!!GRACIEP.SI'M GONNA GET YOU OUT OF HOLDING

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/314955.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/314955.page GMT haha no your not gonna go bad in my story i'm the bad one haha ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/314960.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/314960.page GMT LOVED DA STORIE .GREATTTTTTTTTT .PLZ CONTINUE

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315193.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315193.page GMT loved it Carly more pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeee i so loved it Graciee your comments are so funny...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315219.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315219.page GMT hey theresa hey Tierra how was your girl's day ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315262.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315262.page GMT not good...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315281.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315281.page GMT awww that sucks sorry to hear that did you see the argument me and gracie were having on Caine Girls ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315284.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315284.page GMT yea it sucked thanks Carly, yea i was telling her a while back don't kill Gracie off or i'll kill Theresa off...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315289.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315289.page GMT yeah well i told her that i was gonna stop Together Again if she killed herself in Caine Girls so we said we would keep going with our stories if the other person kept going so yeah ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315298.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315298.page GMT yea i don't think she, or you should kill your characters off unlike mine my story is starting to suck, i think i might kill Theresa off for the heck of it and focus on everyone else...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315333.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315333.page GMT don't you even dare Theresa ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315336.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315336.page GMT and your story does not suck ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315340.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315340.page GMT why not, yes it does...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315346.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315346.page GMT don't kill yourself in your story or i will kill myself in Together Again and your story doesn't suck now stop saying that ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315353.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315353.page GMT ok i won't kill her, don't kill your character off, and ok but still its true...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315423.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315423.page GMT your story doesn't suck theresa it rocks my story is the one that sucks half the time ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315426.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315426.page GMT no it does, and nope yours is good its better than mine, mine is always about the team, yours has more action than mine does...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315443.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315443.page GMT your story is better then mine theresa and yes there is a bit of action in my story but your story is way better then mine ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315562.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315562.page GMT nope yours, i rather have more action than barely any...TheresaAKA SMALL TRIPLET CAINE

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315598.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315598.page GMT ok can we stop arguing both of our stories rock ok ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315636.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315636.page GMT ok deal...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315644.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315644.page GMT i'm sad...... ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315651.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315651.page GMT why you sad...TheresaAKASMALL CAINE TRIPLET

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315658.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315658.page GMT cause my parents might be getting a divorce ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315672.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315672.page GMT Oh i am so sorry Carly i hope not that's so sad i'll pray for you that is sad...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315702.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315702.page GMT thanks anyway i need cheering up haha must think happy thoughts and guess what i am going as for trick or treating this halloween ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315709.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315709.page GMT your welcome, yea that's true happy thoughts, what i'm going as what i was maybe last year or going to a friends house i don't know yet...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315719.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315719.page GMT i'm going as a high school musical cheerleader yay i love the movie high school musical my mom is gonna make the costume for me yay ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315724.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315724.page GMT that sounds fun have fun next Friday, yea i kind of like it i didn't like the second movie i thought it was stupid sorry i liked the first one and this new one looks somewhat good...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315740.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315740.page GMT lol thanks and yeah me and my mom might go see the third on monday yay i hope we do cause i wanna go see it bad haha~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315751.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315751.page GMT your welcome, have fun i might see it somehow don't know yet though, tell me if its better than the other two put together...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315755.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315755.page GMT idk if we are gonna go see it but if we do i will tell you how it was ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315765.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315765.page GMT ok thanks Carly hope you can see it i know how that is with movies i want to see but have to wait to see them...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315783.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315783.page GMT yeah it costs soo much money to go to teh moves these days ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315792.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315792.page GMT i gotta go for a while talk to you later ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315797.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315797.page GMT i know it sucks...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315801.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315801.page GMT WOW THAT WAS REALLY GOOD I OVED THEM WAY TO GO ON MAKING NAT A BAD GIRL NICE TWIST LOVED IT MORE PLEASE I DONT THINK ANY OF YOU HAV A BIG A TWIST AS I DO HAHAHAHA YOULL HAVE TO WAIT AND SEE NA NA NA NA NA NA

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315811.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/315811.page GMT yeah well i'm working with the bad guys and you will find out why i took the blame for everything and you will find out what i did soon haha prepare for it haha it's gonna be a shocker haha ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/316001.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/316001.page GMT YAY can't wait to read it...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/316011.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/316011.page GMT Chapter 80 lovers lies part 4 H: speed when did you find out theresa gen gracie carly and bel were your daughters T: a while back when i first saw carly i knew she wasn't david's she looked to much like and there might be an other H: who T: i don't know yet but i do know that Bel had a twin H: really ( meanwhile down in holding) Nat: how could you tell them Car: i didn't Nat: you know when we get outta here i am telling them what you did Car: i only did it to protec my family Nat: well considering the fact that you helped them plan the hit on horatio and tim Car: i didn't load the guns Nat: well someone did GR: carly i know what you did we gotta tell them Car: gracie what are you doing down here and i didn't load teh guns i made sure they didn't have bullets in them GR: i know i'm gonna bust you outta here Car: what are you crazy GR: listen ok i work with them too but i keep a low profile Car: what GR: yeah now come on just let me get the lock and got it Car: thank sis Clavo: we gotta get you girls outta here Car: clavo!H: where do you think your going carly Car: ummm back in the holding cell ( they hear glass break and someone scream) T: carly what did you do Car; i helped them plan the hit on you guys but i made sure teh guns weren't loaded when we took them with us Anto: hello girls ( natalia grabs the gun's carly and gracie have and points them at gracie and carly) RicK: hey speedy Anto: i work with teh mala noches now its time for some mala noche justice T; sh** carly gracie i have something to tell you girls GR&Car: yeah T: i'm your father not david Car: what ( rick and antonio have their guns aimed at horatio and speed's heads and gunshots go off)

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/316762.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/316762.page GMT HEY CARLYKEEP GOING PLEASE PLEASE PLEASEGRACIEAKAYOU'RE MY FATHER?!?!?!?!

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/316771.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/316771.page GMT Tim speedle is our father gracie hahaha ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/316776.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/316776.page GMT haha you busted me out of the holding cell good girl gone bad no haha you work with the mala noches like me theresa and gen though but you keep a low profile haha and just wait til you see the shocker i have in store hhahaha~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/316780.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/316780.page GMT AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!
!!!!!!!!! - !!!!!!!I'M GONNA GO UP OFF THE LAB ROOF SEE YA(runs away to the roof)GRACIEAKASUIDCAL

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/316783.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/316783.page GMT hey lol yeah just wait till you find out what one of the insiders in the lab did hahaha ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/316785.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/316785.page GMT WHILE ON THE LAB ROOFBYE CARLY I CAN'T TAKE THIS( GRACIE TAKES A STEP OFF THE LAB ROOF AND FALLS)GRACIEAKADEAD

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/316793.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/316793.page GMT nooooo gracie what the H***( SAVES GRACIE) ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/316798.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/316798.page GMT HORATIO AND TIM RUN TO THE GIRLSGRACIE: WHY YOU DO THAT FOR???GRACIEAKASAVED BY CARLY

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/316804.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/316804.page GMT Carly: cause your my sister why did you try to jump off the lab roof? ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/316806.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/316806.page GMT Gracie i gotta go for a while i gotta go take a bath and stuff talk to you later ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/316810.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/316810.page GMT CAUSETHE MALO NOCHES KNOW ABOUT US KNOWTHEY'LL KILL US I WAS JUST SAVING THEM TIMEHORATIO AND TIM STAND BEHIND THE GIRLSGRACIEAKASPEEDLE SISTER

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/316811.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/316811.page GMT good chapter Carly it was good wonder who the person is in that lab can't wait for more...TheresaAKASPEEDLE SISTERS

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/316842.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/316842.page GMT oh my god Gracie you just gave me an idea for my next chapter thank you you will find out what i am talking about in the next chapter ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/316891.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/316891.page GMT OK THENI'M GOOD AT GIVING PEOPLE IDEA'S FOR THEIR FANFICTSGRACIEAKASPEEDS MY DAD?!?!?!!?

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/316895.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/316895.page GMT lol speeds our dad in Together Again were not his brother's kids haha and i will post the next chapter as soon as i can i gotta go beg my mom to let me go over to my friends house talk to you later ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/316896.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/316896.page GMT Oh Carly good story,but I can't read itTalleigh...You know...It just make me sad.Bu-huuuuuu No seriosly,they were good couple.Uuuuuuh,I want Tim back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/316914.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/316914.page GMT luved it carly .please continue

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/317102.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/317102.page GMT Chapter 81 family lies and ties Rick: ahh i've been shot ok i onyl get hit in the arm i'll live Anto: come with me girls ( antonio and rick grab gracie and carly) Rick: you follow us and we will kill them ( they take the girls up to the roof) Car: what are you gonna do to us Rick: you'll see ( antonio throws gracie off the roof but she grabs onto the side and carly breaks free of rick and grabs gracie's hand and eric goes onto the roof and see's carly trying to pull gracie up ) Er: come on guys don't hurt the girls Rick: you should be helpign us eric ER: not anymore let them go ( eric gets his gun out) Anto: are you done working with the mala noches eric Er: yes i am now let the girls go before i shoot the both of you ( antonio and rick get their guns out ) ( gunshots go off and rick and antonio fall to the ground) Car: uncle eric help gracie's slipping ( eric grabs gracie's other hand and helps carly pull her up once they pull gracie up carly and gracie hug) T: girls are you two all right Car: we're fine dad T: how did you know Gr: me and carly overheard you and horatio talking ( tim carly and gracie hug) ER: they were gonna kill me and the girls H: eric were you working with them ER: yeah but i didn't do anythign i swear H: i know Car: am i going to jail H: we won't tell anyone what you did if you don't Car: deal H: deal T: come on lets go back inside ( tim and eric horatio carly and gracie go back inside )

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/318016.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/318016.page GMT HEY CARLY GREAT CHAPTERLIKE ALWAYSWHY DID YOU CATCH ME????KEEP GOING PLEASEGRACIE

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/318036.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/318036.page GMT because your my sister gracie that is why i caught u ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/318055.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/318055.page GMT OK THENNOW WHAT WE GONNA DO??I NEED SOME TIME TO LET THIS SINK IN(GRACIE WALKS AWAY FROM TIM CARLY HORATIO AND ERIC)GRACIE

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/318063.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/318063.page GMT ok lol let me say something the mala noches won't come after us they will be taken care of in teh next chapter lol antonio and rick are already dead so we don't have to worry about them ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/318071.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/318071.page GMT GRACIE: CARLY SISERM I DUNNO HOW TO SAY THISBUT I'M GONNA GO AWAY FOR A FEW WEEKSSO YOU AND DAD CAN SPEND TIME TOGETHERAND GET TO KNOW EACH OTHERGRACIE

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/318136.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/318136.page GMT ok gracie stop please you are not going anywhere got it ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/318178.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/318178.page GMT GRACIE: I'M SORRY CARLY IT'S FOR THE BEST 4 WEEKSI'M SORRY(GRACIE RUNS CRYING STRAIGHT INTO HORATIO'S ARMS)GRACIE

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/318183.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/318183.page GMT Carly: gracie no we don't have to worry about the mala noches anymore ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/318193.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/318193.page GMT GRACIE: I KNOW CARLY BUT I NEED TO GO SEE SOMEONE IN NEW YORKI'LL BE 4 WEEKS OK SPEND SOME TIME WITH TIM OK!!(GRACIE WALKS AND GETS INTO HER CAR AND DRIVES AWAY)GRACIE

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/318203.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/318203.page GMT Carly: gracie nooooooooooooooooooooooooo ( carly cries her eyes out ) you can spend time with tim and me please please don't go ( carly cries) ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/318209.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/318209.page GMT HORATIO: CARLY SWEETIE WHATS WRONG?(HORATIO HUGS CARLY)GRACIE

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/318215.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/318215.page GMT ok gracie lol i gotta go talk to you later ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/318225.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/318225.page GMT OK SEE YAGRACIEAKARUNAWAY

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/318227.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/318227.page GMT HEY CARLT THAT WAS REALLY GOOOD I ALWAYS LIKE YOUR STORY MORE PLEASE LITTLE CHICKEN MORE

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/318373.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/318373.page GMT hey i am gonna have two new people in the story and Bel you have a twin haha you will find out who she is in teh next chapter and my friend amaireni from one of my chat websites i asked her if she wanted to be in my story she said yes and she might sign up here yay ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/318497.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/318497.page GMT ok there are gonna be a few new people in teh story hahaha a few of my other friends wanna be in it haha ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/318565.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/318565.page GMT good chapter Carly i loved it more please...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/318598.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/318598.page GMT Chapter 82 family lies and ties part two GR: so wait your our dad and not david T: yeah and Bel has a twin and you might have an other sibling besides her Bel: whats my twin's name T: samantha ER: we still gotta find terry's kids Mari: yeah i can't believe terry's dead she was an awesome sister H: what are terry's kids names ER: jackie and brenda they are twins their 15 Mari: yeah H: whoelse are we looking for Ry: my niece amaireni T: and kaelyn my other daughter H: how old are kaelyn and amaireni RY: amaireni's 14 T: kaelyn's 16 she is gracie's and carly's triplet sister wait who is amaireni's mom Ry: gina she had amaireni with david after you left ER: umm might wanna be careful though RY: why ER: cause jackie hates amaireni they have never gotten along they go to the same school RY: i see H: lets focus on finding these kids all right RY: yeah T: yeah got it ER: yeah we need to find them

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/319310.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/319310.page GMT I know I said I can't read it,but I can't stop...Keeeeeeep ooon!!!!!!!!!

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/319322.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/319322.page GMT lol yeah kaelyn amaireni jackie and brenda are my friends on an other website and i asked them if they wanted to be in my story and they said yes so that is why i added new people and my friends amaireni and jackie really do hate each other yeah ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/319329.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/319329.page GMT Why they hate each other??????

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/319335.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/319335.page GMT they just do i gotta go for a while me and my mom gotta go to the store be back in a bit ~~Carly~~

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/319338.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/319338.page GMT Without reason?Well we all have someone who we don't like without reason I guess so

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/319346.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/319346.page GMT good chapter Carly loved it please continue soon...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/319380.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/319380.page GMT hey buddy ^^ i luv you!! and ur story!! =DDD

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/319544.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/319544.page GMT hi Amaireni welcome to the boards buddy i like this place better then the n lol ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/319551.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/319551.page GMT hey carly you are a great writer, yay im in your story (SHE HAS A BIG SMILE ON HER FACE) and you said your parents might be getting a divorce, mine did it was scary at first but it gets better i promise.XXXXSamAKA Samantha Bels twin hahahahah

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/319558.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/319558.page GMT oh kool why do u like it better? loland thanks 4 welcomening (a=cant spell lol) me

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/319566.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/319566.page GMT hey Samantha how are you and yeah my parents are probably gonna get a divorce and your welcome amaireni lol and i like it better here lol ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/319569.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/319569.page GMT im good carly you? im watching the music channels what you doing.xxxxSamantha

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/319573.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/319573.page GMT i'm good sam just on an other website while i'm on here the girl called MeLovesChris on here is one of my friends from the other website i am on ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/319595.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/319595.page GMT sounds cool is it a csi website, if so what is the address

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/319642.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/319642.page GMT no its not a csi website sorry lol ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/319972.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/319972.page GMT Chapter 83 lets find those kids ER: wait there's more thoughH: yeah ER: speed were theresa and gen triplets T: yeah Er: was their triplet named maris T: yeah ER: does she have a boyfriend named matt T: ummm yeah ER: they are in with the mala noches T: great H:ok so we need to find brenda matt maris jackie kaelyn and amaireni T: yeah H: lets get to it carly eric we are gonna need your help Car: you got it ER: yeah sure ( carly and eric go to he mala noches hiding place) Car: sam kaelyn matt maris brenda jackie amaireni come on we need to get outta here Kaelyn: aahhh why Car: just come on ama: i hate jackie do i gotta ride in the same car with her ER: yeah now come on ( they all get into the car and head back to the lab ) T: how did you do that so fast ER: they were there by theirselfs Kaelyn: gracie!GR: kaely thank god maris are you ok Mar: fine sheesh ( all of them head inside and and they sitting in the break room and glass breaks and someone screams )

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/320147.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/320147.page GMT OMG CARLY MORE PLEASE PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE THIS IS GETTING GOOD I LOVED IT...THERESA

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/320160.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/320160.page GMT Ay,I miss Spped!!!!!!!!!!!

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/321436.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/321436.page GMT GREAT CHAPTER IM HAVING TROUBEL KEEPING UP LUCKY THERESA GAVE A ME A LOW DOEN LOL MOR EPLEASE LOVE IT AND WELCOME Amaireni IM BEL IM FROM AUS AND I HAVE A FEW STORIES WELCOME AND HAVE FUN CARLY GREAT CHAPTERS CANT WAIT FOR MORE

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/321503.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/321503.page GMT keep going Carly if great

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/321622.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/321622.page GMT good story keep going

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/323196.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/323196.page GMT Chapter 84 finding a way to love and hate H: that sounds like it was coming from holding girls and boys stay here eric speed come with me ( horatio eric and tim go down to holding and they find natalia is gone)T: oh no ( they go back upstairs) Kaelyn: i like monkey's Matt: be quiet kaelyn u always say u like monkeys GR: what's wrong with liking monkeys matt stop being a jerk Matt: whatever Jackie: keep amaireni away from me i hate her Amaireni" i hate u too jackie Sam" would you two stop for one night Brenda: yeah your fighting is annoying Jackie" shut it brenda Brenda: you shut it ER: all of you be quiet Jackie&Brenda: yes unclie ericCar: what's going on H: natalia escaped Kaelyn: unicorn Car: what the kaelyn for the millionth time unicorn's don't exist Kaelyn: yes they do Car: no they dont T: enough girls ( a bunch of gunshots go off)

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/324894.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/324894.page GMT HEY ''icarly'' .UR STORY IZ AWESOME .KEEP DOING A GREAT JOB .PLZ CONTINUE

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/324939.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/324939.page GMT OH MY GOD CARLY PLEASE CONTINUE I NEED MORE PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE... THERESA

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/324940.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/324940.page GMT HEY CARLYMORE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASEGRACIEAKASPEEDLE GIRLCAINE GIRL

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/324958.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/324958.page GMT Chapter 85 will this be the end for the mala noches Car: owww T: carly are you ok Car: fine the bullet grazed my arm Matt: great now natalia will tell the rest and they will come after us Maris: you don't think we know that matt Kaelyn: unicorn's rock Matt: kaelyn shut it unicorns don't exist Kaelyn: yes they do Matt: no they don't ER: enough GR: what are we gonna do H: we need to find a safe place for you all Matt: ummmmm might be a little to late for that ER: what ( eric horatio and tim look out the window and see the mala noches) ER: oh SH** Cal: whats going on T: the mala noches are outsideCar: oh no ?: give us carly matt maris amaireni jackie and brenda and we won't hurt the rest of you ( carly says something in spanish to the guy) ?: you little Bi*** Car: right back at ya A** hole Matt: nice carly Jackie: carly keep your trap shut ?: ok a little deal breaker u just give us carly T: like H*** ?: well fine then( the guy gets his gun out and a gunshot goes off)

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/326207.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/326207.page GMT Yay keep on!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I've done with mine story,so let me read and boring to you a little bit ;D

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/326225.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/326225.page GMT CARLY THIS KEEPS GETTING GOOD MORE PLEASE IF YOU NEED ANY IDEAS ME AND GRACIEE CAN HELPITS UP TO YOU PLEASE PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEE CONTINUE SOON...THERESA

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/326853.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/326853.page GMT Chapter 86 will this be the end for the mala noches part two ?: ahhhhh T: carly where did you get that gun Car: hey i shot the guy in self defence H: yeah you did now what should we do about the others Car: i could figure out some way to make something to blow them up T: you know how to bulid a bombCar: no but i am good at science and Lab and stuff like that Jackie" smartA** Car: look whose talkingJackie" whatever Kaelyn: unicorn's and monkeys Car: kaelyn stop with the monkey and unicorn S*** Kaelyn: no reason to be mean Matt: nice one carlyCar: shut it matt Matt: no! Maris: matt be quiet Matt: yes sweetheart Bel: i'm scared TH: it will be ok Bel Gen: yeah we will all be fine Bel: but those guys wanna kill us like they killed mommy GR: it will be ok Bel we won't let anything happen to you ( grace and bel hug) Car: ok stop with the love stuff we gotta work out a plan here Matt: i got an ideaCar: matt the last time we used one of your idea's we almost got killed Brenda: yeah so keep your mouth shut matt Matt: whateverJackie: i have a plan Car; i'm kinda scared to know ( jackie explains the plan to everyone ) H: now that just might work Jackie: i know i'm brillient Amaireni: stop thinking your better then everyone else Jackie: i don't think that you do ER: enough you two lets put this plan in motion

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/326860.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/326860.page GMT GOOD CHAPTER CARLY LOVED IT PLEASE CONTINUE PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE IF YOU CAN...THERESA

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/326889.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/326889.page GMT yeah i will continue tomorrow cause i gotta go in a few for the night and i won't be on on halloween ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/326894.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/326894.page GMT HEY CARLYMORE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASEGRACIEAKASPEEDLE GIRLS

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/326921.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/326921.page GMT HEY THAT WAS GOD I LIKE RIGHT BACK AT YA ASS HOLE FUNNY AS HAHAH LOVED IT ILL BE WAITING FOR YOUR NEXT ONE LOL MORE BEL

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/326923.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/326923.page GMT OK I WILL WAIT THANKS CARLY I WON'T BE ON FOR A LITTLE BIT BUT I WILL BE ON LATE THAT NIGHT THOUGH...THERESA

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/326930.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/326930.page GMT yeah i will only be on till like 4 maybe cause my grandma is gonna pick me up at like 4;15 cause i can only go trick or treating in her community cause people in mine don't give out candy and my cousin and my aunt and my friend jessie is gonna be there jessie lives out where my aunt lives which is an hour away and they are gonna spend the night at my grandma's so i am gonna spend the night too and yay halloween is tomorrow i cant wait ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/327526.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/327526.page GMT Chapter 87 the end for the mala noches( Carly and jackie walk outside) ?: there you two are you little smarta****( jackie says something in spanish to the guy) ?: you little you told them you little B****Jacki: so what if we did your end is about to come ( jackie and carly duck and something get thrown out the window and carly and jackie run inside and an explosion goes off) ER: it worked Jackie: yes!Car: finallyMatt: nice jackie Amaireni: i still don't like you jackie Jackie: and i still hate you amaireniKaelyn: go jackie go jackie woot woot Jackie: what the F*** kaelyn Kaelyn: what i'm happy ( carly jackie brenda matt maris amaireni bel sam gracie theresa and gen all laugh) Kaelyn: what's so funny H: finally the end for the mala noches T: and all of us can be a family again ( calleigh and tim kiss)

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/327628.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/327628.page GMT YAYSPEAKING OF FAMILIES I'M LEAVING SEE YAGRACIEAKASPEEDLE GIRL

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/327768.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/327768.page GMT ummm ok lol later then ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/327769.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/327769.page GMT GREAT I JUST GOT GROUNDEDGRACIEAKALOCKED UP

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/327790.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/327790.page GMT that sucks big time ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/327827.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/327827.page GMT YEAH TOTALLYI BETTER GO BEFORE I GET INTO MORE TROUBLEBYEGRACIEI'M GROUNDED FOR A FEW WEEKS SO NO CAINE GIRLS SORRYAKALOCKED UP

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/327871.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/327871.page GMT GOOD CHAPTER CARLY MORE PLEASE PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE LOVED IT...THERESA

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/328266.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/328266.page GMT i will post an other chapter or two before i gotta leave tomorrow ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/328644.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/328644.page GMT OK COOL THANKS CARLY I'LL BE IN SCHOOL BUT I'LL LEAVE A COMMENT FOR IT...THERESA

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/328653.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/328653.page GMT ok thanks yeah i will post one or two more tomorrow when your at school probably cause i gotta leave at 4 my time tomorrow so yeah ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/328659.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/328659.page GMT fantast keep going carly, you guys are in school haha i have the holidays haha, jokeslove as alwaysxxxSam

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/328672.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/328672.page GMT i'm home schooled sam lol ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/328683.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/328683.page GMT chapter 88 finally a family again ( a month later tim and calleigh had gotten a new house that was big enough for theresa gen maris kaelyn carly grace sam and bel and hannah and zack of course themselfs lol) T: all right come on we gotta get going here GR: coming today's the last day of school don't wanna miss it ZacK; i wanna miss it Kaelyn: i love school Car: weirdo ( the kids head off to school and tim goes to work) T: hey eric ER: hey man how are the kids T: great how's lexie and the baby ER: great its a girl her name is tylee T: tylee? ER: yeah i don't kno where lexie came up wit the name Ry: hey guys ER: hey ryan hows evan RY: great H: ok gentelmen i would like you too meet our new Csi Nicki Ricki: hi guys RY: hi girl i mean Nicki ( nicki laughs) Ricki: yeah a lot of people thing i'm a guy cause of my name T: i bet ryan stop drooling RY: ah what ( ryan wipes his mouth) ( eric and tim laugh) ( ryan's thought's she is really pretty and smart too ah she probaly has a boyfriendd or husband but those beautiful brown eyes and brown hair ) ( nicki's thought's i like ryan but he proably has a girlfriend or wife but he's really cute with those eyes and tht brown hair oh i want him so bad) H: so lets get to work T&ER&RY&Nicki: yeah

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/329990.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/329990.page GMT and just so everyone knows i am thinking about ending Together Again soon and starting a new story and it probably won't be a sequal to Together Again just so everyone who reads my story knows ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/329992.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/329992.page GMT HEY CARLYHOW ARE YOU??I JUST POSTED A CHAPTER OF CAINE GIRLS IF YOU WANNA READ ITGRACIE HAPPY HALLOWEEN!!!!

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/330059.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/330059.page GMT I'M GOOD GRACIE I'M SOO HAPPY IT'S HALLOWEEN HOW ARE YOU ~~CARLY AKA HALLOWEEN LOVER

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/330152.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/330152.page GMT I'm Happy Have A Good Halloween CarleyDo You Want A Caine Girl Halloween Special??GracieHappy Halloween

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/330326.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/330326.page GMT GOOD CHAPTER CARLY I LOVED IT PLEASE CONTINUE SOON THIS IS GOOD...THERESA

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/330707.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/330707.page GMT keep going carly, its really really good.xxxlove always Sam

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/332556.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/332556.page GMT Chapter 89 finally a family again part two ( later that day at tim and calleigh's place) Car: dang it T: whats the matter Car: math is the matter T: here let me help i was a math genuis in school Car: lucky you ( tim helps carly with her homework and everyone goes to bed) ( meanwhile at ryan's place) Evan: daddy where's mommy RY: mommy had to go away for a while evan but she loves you very much Evan: when will i see her again RY: i don't know evan i don't know ( meanwhile at horatio and marisol's place)H: hun are you all right Marisol: yeah i'm just tired H: why don't you go to sleep and i will put jaylyn to bed Marisol: thank you H: no problem ( marisol goes to bed and horatio picks up jaylyn and puts her into bed) ( meanwhile at ryan's place the doorbell rings) RY: coming ( he opens the door and can't believe who is standing there)

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/334003.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/334003.page GMT WONDER WHO IT IS I LIKED IT CARLY MORE PLEASE PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE... THERESA

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/334139.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/334139.page GMT WHO?WHO?Who stands there?Sorry bout my reactions this night,but I'M READY TO KILL!!!!!!!!!!!OK not to kill.But I'm SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/334516.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/334516.page GMT hey Tamara why you so madTheresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/334523.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/334523.page GMT Tamara why are you mad and hi theresa how are ya ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/334527.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/334527.page GMT hi Carly i'm good, you...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/334535.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/334535.page GMT Just go at Formual1 site or read my answer in 'Bring me to life'.I'M M,AD CAUSE OF PEOPLEW WHO DON'T DESERVE TO BE IN FORMULA1 CAUSE UNFAIR DRIVING!LIKE TIMO GLOCK IS!CAUSE OF HIM MASSA HAS LOST!HE LET HAMILTON AND NOW HAMILTON IS CHAMPION!MASA IS IN F1 SINCE 2002 I THINK AND HE'S ALWAYS SECOND DRIVER!

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/334548.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/334548.page GMT Chapter 90 how bout that RY: Natalia aren't you suppossed to be in jail Natalia: i'm out on bond i came to see evanRY: YOUR NOT GOING ANYWHERE NEAR MY SON YOU HEAR ME STAY AWAY FROM HIM!! ( ryan slams the door in natalia;s face and locks it) Evan: daddy why the yelling RY: i'm sorry come here( ryan picks up evan and takes evan into his bedroom and reads him a story and evan falls asleep in ryan's arms and ryan falls asleep also ) ( the next day) RY: come on evan we are gonna be late Evan: coming daddy Ry: all right come on lets get into the car( ryan picks up evan and takes him out to the car and puts him in his car seat and takes him to daycare and goes to work) ( meanwhile at eric and lexie's place) Eric: brenda jackie come on you two time to go to school Brenda&Jackie: coming Lexie: someone wants her daddy Eric: hey there tylee come here you ( eric picks up tylee and he heads to the car and takes brenda and jackie to school and drops tylee off at daycare and goes to work) ( at the lab)T: hey eric hey ryan hey nicki Nicki: hi guys RY: hi nicki ER: hey nicki ( ryan's thought's man i really wanna ask her out should i or shouldn't it ) ( Nicki's thoughts man i wish he would just ask me out already i really wanna go out with him )

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/334553.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/334553.page GMT i'm all right theresa ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/334555.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/334555.page GMT Hey I didn't get notifications few days.What about Natalia?

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/334559.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/334559.page GMT what do you mean what about natalia ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/334565.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/334565.page GMT YOUR NOT GOING ANYWHERE NEAR MYSON YOU HEAR ME STAY AWAY FROM HIMNot MY son,Ryan's son

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/334576.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/334576.page GMT it was natalia who was at the door and ryan was telling her to stay away from evan cause she was a part of the mala noches and she helped to get him shot and all that stuff she is bad and ryan doesn't want her near evan ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/334585.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/334585.page GMT Oh thank you Carly.Keep on!!!!!!U,I should go.It's 22:18 here I have to go to scholl.you are home schooled.Do you have tests?

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/334598.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/334598.page GMT uhh i have to take a home schooling test every year to see if i have learned enough or not and if i fail then i could get put in public school but other then that i don't have tests ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/334603.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/334603.page GMT Au,lucky.I have Germany test!I hate Germany!Chemistry is easy,I'll do it good.BUT I REALLY HATE GERMANY!

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/334607.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/334607.page GMT lol i am good at science when it comes to school i love learning about science and learning about animals lol and i have a csi kit thing that i got yay its like an actual csi kit kinda its cool but the night i got it it was recalled for abostes in the figerprint power i am just glad i didn't use the figerprint powder but yeah its cool ~~Carlu

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/334611.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/334611.page GMT THAT COMMENT WAS FUNNY WITH THE KIT CUTE VERY CUTE BUT HEY LOVED THE CHAPTER JUST SIMPLY GREAT I LOVED IT MORE PLEASE!!!!!!

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/334617.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/334617.page GMT lol hey Bel i missed u while i was gone god when i got back today i had a lot to read lol anyway how are you and the kids Bel ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/334620.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/334620.page GMT HYE CARLY YEAH I KNOW I WROTE LIKE 12 CHAPTERS OR SO WHILST YOU WERE GONE PLUS I STARTED A NEW ONE IN THE PAST TOO HEHE IM GOOD I SLEPT GOOD STILL COULD DO WITH SOME MORE AND ONE KID IS AWAKE AND THE REST ARE ASLEEP THANK GOD LAST NIGHT WAS THE ONYL NIGHT I WASNT AWOKEN BY HEARING MOMMA MOMMA BY BAYDON LOL HOW WAS YOUR HALLOWEEN AND YOUR WEEKEND????!!!!!!

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/334626.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/334626.page GMT lol my halloween was good i got a lot of candy trick or treating and i went to a party yesterday and i'm sore from it lol my friend jessie and me and her friends were messing around on the bounce house's and stuff and i won a cake and me and my grandma left it at my aunts dumb us lol and i left my camara also lol ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/334631.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/334631.page GMT DAMN THATS NOT GOOD YOU LEFT YOUR STUFF BEHIND I HAD TOO MUCH CANDY SATURDAY MORNING I WAS A BIT FRAZZELED ON SARURDAY EVENING I WAS LOOKING AT MY BROTHER WHO CAME DOWN FORM SYDNEY AND I WAS LAUGHING TA HIM FOR NOE REASON HE SAID I WAS MENTAL BUT I HAD LIKE 12 TOFFEES IN A ROW AND WELL YOU CAN GUESS SUGAR HIGH LOL

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/334851.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/334851.page GMT yeah lol i had this thing called a pixystick its a thing full of sugar and it was a big one and i lost it hahaha i have no idea how i lost it but the last time i had one i got a major headache lol ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/334948.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/334948.page GMT HAD A FEW TOFFEES YESTERDAY TOO AND I I GOT A LITTLE DIZZY THEN MY BRO AND I WERE MUCKING AROUND AND HES A COP AND HE DID A DEFENSE MOVE ON ME AND I MOVED AND HE ELBOWED ME IN THE CHIN GAVE ME AN INSTANT HEADACHE AND I HAD TO SPEND 3 OR 4 HOURS LAYING DOWN REALLY GOT ME GGOOD IT WAS AN ACCIDENT BUT YEAH OOOWEEE

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/334957.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/334957.page GMT yeah i bet that hurt my grandfather was a cop he died when i was 3 or 4 of a heart attack i didn't really get to know him sigh ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/334966.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/334966.page GMT OH DAMN I NEVER GOT TO MEET ANY OF MINE EITHER MY MUMS DAD DIES WHEN SHE WAS YOUNG DONT KNOW IF MY NAN DID IT OR HE KILLED HIMSELF THEY COULD NEVER TELL AND MY DADS DAD HE WAS HIT BY A TRUCK RIDING TO WORK SO YEAH KINDA SAD I NEVER GOT TO MEET ANY OF MY POPS EITHER OR MY HUBBYS DAD HE DIED LIKE 8 YEARS BEFORE I WAS EVEN ON THE SCENE FROM SKOKING BUT ANYWAYS ENOUGH ABOUT DEATH HEHEE BETTER GET TO WRITE SOME CHAPTERS

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/335002.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/335002.page GMT Uuuuuuuuuuuuuuhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!
!!!!!!!I hate my memory!!!!!!!!!!What black Memory?????I don't have it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336107.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336107.page GMT Chapter 91 Eric's past part one ( later that day) RY: hey nicki Nicki: hi ryan RY: i was wondering would you like to have dinner tonight Nicki: sure that sounds nice ( nicki's thoughts finally he asked me out on a date) ( then natalia walks in) Natalia: ryan i have a right to see my son Nicki: who is that ryan Ryan: my EX wife and i am not letting you anywhere near evan natalia Natalia: i am suing you for costudy ryan Ryan: what ( natalia leaves) Nicki: you have a son Ryan: yeah ( meanwhile in horatio's office) Horatio: ok eric speed you nicki and ryan are gonna work our next case Eric: what's the case ( nicki and ryan walk into the room) Ryan: here Horatio: ok you four are gonna work the case of a mother murdered in front of her daughter here's the address now go( ryan tim nicki and eric go to teh crime scene ) Frank: hey guys Tim: hi frank ( they walk inside) Eric: oh my god i can't work this case Ryan: why Eric: the victom use to be my girlfriend Riley: daddy! Eric: Riley sweetheart are you ok Riley: i'm fine daddy Tim: eric you most deffenitly have a lot of explain to horatio

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336266.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336266.page GMT Hey CarlyWHOAMore Please Please Please Please PleaseGracieAKAReally Bad Headache

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336332.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336332.page GMT ahh i had a bad headache yesterday probably cause i hit my head so many times the day before lol and yeah i am gonna have lots more shockers to come hehe ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336343.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336343.page GMT I'M CRYING CAUSE IT HURTS SO MUCHOK CAN'T WAITBAD HEADACHE

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336400.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336400.page GMT awwww that sucks do u want me to post the next chapter for you ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336407.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336407.page GMT Please Please Please Please Pleasei love your story and you know i doBad Headache

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336422.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336422.page GMT lol ok and just so you know for the next i don't know how many chapters there will be flashbacks of some of the careitters and you will find out more about them and someone might die ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336430.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336430.page GMT ok SweetBring It OnKill Gracie Gracie In Pain Gracie Got Really Bad HeadacheBad Headache

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336439.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336439.page GMT Chapter 92 Eric's past part two Eric: i know speed ( 6 years ago) Eric: hey baby Maybelle: hey babe ( eric and maybelle kiss) Eric: ready for our date tonight maybelle: i sure am eric i have something to tell you Eric: what is it Maybelle: i'm pregnant( back to the present) Tim: eric eric snap out of it Eric: what Ryan: you were daydreaming Alexx: oh poor baby what was her name eric Eric: maybelle ( alexx goes to put a liver thermomiter in maybelle and maybelle gasps for air) Alexx: oh my god she's alive ( tim calls an ambulance and eric goes over to maybelle) ( 6 years ago) eric: your what Maybelle: yeah we are gonna have a baby Eric: i am gonna be father Maybelle: yeah Eric: wow i can't believe it and i have something to ask you Maybelle: what is it Eric: will you marry me ( back to the present) Eric: maybelle stay with me you hear me Riley: mommy ( ryan takes riley outside ) Maybelle: eric it hurts to breathe Eric: i know just stay with me maybelle ( 6 years ago)Maybelle: oh eric i i Eric: maybelle i love you with all my heart Maybelle: i know eric but i can't

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336450.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336450.page GMT Keep Going GirlPlease Please Please Plesae Please PleaseBad Headache

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336461.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336461.page GMT i will post the next chapter in a little bit ~~Carly AKASad Girl

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336486.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336486.page GMT OkCarly Why You Sad??Bad Headache

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336500.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336500.page GMT one of my friends on an other website left forever she said she would visit every now and then ~~Carly AKA Sad Girl

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336505.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336505.page GMT OMG Keeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeep oooooooooooon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!I - ve added more at 'Never again'But I'm BIG MORON.Almost whole cahpter is on Spanish and I didn't put translate.

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336573.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336573.page GMT Chapter 93 Eric's Past Part three ( where we left off 6 years ago) Eric: what do you mean you can't Maybelle: you know my dad won't let us get married let alone have a child Eric: then lets run away together Maybelle: i can't i can't leave everything behind Eric: so you are gonna have an abortion Maybelle: no i would never have an abortion Eric: then please run away with me Maybelle: eric i..( back to the present) ( the ambulance arrives and takes maybelle to the hospital) Horatio: eric you had a relasionship with this womanEric: yeah she was the love of my life ( 6 year's ago )Maybelle: eric where would we go Eric: come to miami with me it's beautiful there like you Maybelle: eric i don't know if i can i mean ?: maybelle! i told you to stay away from her eric Maybelle: daddy leave him alone i love him!?: your coming home with me maybelle and your getting an abortion Maybelle: never! let me go ( maybelle breaks free of her dad and her and eric run to eric's car and drive off ) ?: i will find you maybelle!! ( the present) Eric: her dad was abusive and we ran away together i think her dad did this horatio Horatio: well we will find out and eric is that little girl yours Eric: yes Riley is my daughter Riley: daddy is mommy gonna be ok Eric: i am sure she will be fine Riley ( horatio gets a call he answer's it and a few minutes later he hangs up) Horatio: eric speed Lexie was killed

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336625.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336625.page GMT Who's Lexie?Theres's so many names!!!!!!I get 3 from Germany test!!

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336643.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336643.page GMT lol Lexie is tim speedle's sister and i know there is a lot of names lol ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336653.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336653.page GMT I FOUND A CARROT!!

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336666.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336666.page GMT A I get it.WHAT TARROT???????????????????????? ????????? - ?????????????????????????????? ????????? - ?????????????????????????????? ????????? - ?????????????????????????????? ????????? - ?????????????????????????????? ????????

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336668.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336668.page GMT I FOUND A CARROT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!! - !!!!

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336671.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336671.page GMT CARROT???????????R U OK??????

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336682.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336682.page GMT I FOUND A CARROT!!!!!!

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336684.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336684.page GMT ok Delkobaby you can stop saying you found a carrot now are you ok ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336689.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336689.page GMT I LIKE CHOCOLATE MILK

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336690.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336690.page GMT omg i know who says i love chocolate milk Cheese from fosters home for imaginariy friends i love that show ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336694.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336694.page GMT And now era of chocholate milk...Where is Theresa?

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336696.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336696.page GMT ummm i don't know she should be on in a while ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336699.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336699.page GMT I FOUND A CARROT!!!!

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336704.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336704.page GMT YES IT'S WEIRD TO SEWE THERESA OFFLINEAND GRACIE??

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336705.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336705.page GMT Gracie was on earlier i don't know if she will be on again today but i think theresa is still at school or doing homework or something like that ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336709.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336709.page GMT I FOUND A CARROT! I FOUND A CARROT! I FOUND A CARROT! I FOUND A CARROT! I FOUND A CARROT !I FOUND A CARROT! I FOUND A CARROT! I FOUND A CARROT! I FOUND A CARROT

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336723.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336723.page GMT ok Delkobaby Enough with the i found a carrot stuff please ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336725.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336725.page GMT I'll have to go soon.Sorry cause uI don't put smileys,I use quick answer

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336727.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336727.page GMT ...ok

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336728.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336728.page GMT WHAT OK??????

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336731.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336731.page GMT she asked me 2 stop so I said ok

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336734.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336734.page GMT I said OK too.Long live Carly!You shout her mouth!!!!!!!

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336751.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336751.page GMT lol thank you for stopping Delkobaby and lol Tamara ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336753.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336753.page GMT You're welcome!Hey I se taht you're online!At Cold Csae board it was some changes.Myabe they are doing same thing here.

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336765.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336765.page GMT tehy just changed the boards two months ago here why would they be changing them again ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336776.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336776.page GMT Not board.It looks little different.Go and check if you want

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336783.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336783.page GMT i don't watch cold case ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336786.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336786.page GMT I.... Like.... Ceeeerrriiiaalll

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336788.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336788.page GMT I watch it sometimes.But it's no more at TV here.Yo don't have to watch it.Just go and see how board looks like now.IF YOU WANT

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336802.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336802.page GMT my sister pooted

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336804.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336804.page GMT Ok CarlyBad Stomach & Head ache

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336814.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336814.page GMT what taht means?????i can't find it in dicontary????????But i think I know.Just tell how old she is?????

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336816.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336816.page GMT GRACIE HEY!!!TALK LITTLE WITH DELKOBABY SHE'S CRAZY TONIGHT!!!!MAYBE YOU'LL FEEL BETTER!!!!!!!!!

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336819.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336819.page GMT 10

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336821.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336821.page GMT OK it's not taht what I thought.Sewe ya tomorrowBYE!!!!!!!!!ALL OF YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336874.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336874.page GMT TAMRA WOAH WHATA SURPRISE THAT WAS I LOVED IT MORE PLEASE

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336923.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/336923.page GMT glad you liked the chapters Bel there will be more shockers to come hehe ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/337032.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/337032.page GMT I FOUND A CARROT!

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/337098.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/337098.page GMT OMG OMG CARLY PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE CONTINUE I LOVED THE CHAPTERS HEY IS TAMARA STILL ON OR IS SHE OFFLINE PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE...THER ESA

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/337246.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/337246.page GMT i have no idea is tamara is still on and just wait there willl be more shockers and everything lol i will post the next chapter tomorrow ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/337251.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/337251.page GMT I'M NOT SURE EITHER IF NOT THEN I GUESS I'LL TALK TO HER TOMORROW ANYWAYS THE SERVER WOULDN'T LET ME OR GRACIEE ON FOR A WHILE, OK I WILL WAIT FOR MORE TOMORROW...THERESA

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/337258.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/337258.page GMT it wouldnt let me on for a while either the boards are messed up right now i gotta go talk to u tomorrow bye ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/337271.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/337271.page GMT YEA, BYE CARLY TALK TO YOU TOMORROW...THERESA

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/337279.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/337279.page GMT I'm here!!Now!!!!!!!!!!!I have history test and ...6 season of CSI:Miami on DVD!!!!!!!!!I'm happy!!!!!!!So i'm going to learn(I get 4 from physics BTW)and watch it(when Carrot is at bad).Then I'll come here.Or I'll watch it tmr.Anyway I'll sent more at 'Never again'' if you want...

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/337899.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/337899.page GMT HEY TAMARA I BOUGHT SEASON SIX THE WEEK AFTER IT CAME OUT WE HEER IN SHITTY AUS ARE ONYLHALF WAY THROUGH SEASON SIX ON TV I KNOW IT BLOWS BIG TIME BUT AS SSSON AS I GOT MINE I LOCKED MYSELF IN MY ROOM AND I WATCHED EACH EPISODE AND THE SPECIAL FEATURES AND I GOT IT ALL DONE IN LIKE 3 DAYS I KNOW IM SO DESPERATE AND YOU KNOW WHAT THE SOONER IT FINISHES ON YOUR TV THE SOONER I CAN BUY IT AND WATCH IT IN A FLASH AHHAAHA AND I KNOW ITS ONLY LIKE 6 EPS IN BUT I LOVE IT !!!!!!!!

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/337903.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/337903.page GMT (\_/)( '.') (")(") BUNNY!!!

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/337970.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/337970.page GMT Chapter 94 Eric's Past Part four Tim&Eric: What Horatio: i just got a call that there was a robbery where she worked and she was shot and killed Eric&Tim: oh god no ( Eric and Tim started crying ) Horatio: do you two need to take the day off Tim&Eric: no ( 6 years ago) Maybelle: eric where are we gonna go he will find me where ever we go Eric: i won't let anything happen to you or our baby maybelle i promise ( they drive to miami and go to eric's parents house) Ericsmom: eric it's so good to see you again son who is this Eric: mom this is maybelle my fiance Marisol: fiance oh that's great little brother EricsDad: well it's good you two are here cause maybelle's father is here and looking for her Maybelle: what no maybellesDad: hi mybelle ( back in the present a day later) Horatio: speed eric we found the guy who killed lexie he is going away for good Eric: how am i gonna raise three kids on my own Marisol: eric you know you can come to me for help Maybelle: or me Eric: maybelle? Riley: hi daddy ( Riley runs up to eric and eric picks her up and holds her) Eric: maybelle what are you doing here aren't you supposed to be in the hospital Maybelle: i got discharged and i know who it was that attacked me Horatio: who maybelle: my father Ryan: maybelle! Maybelle: oh thank god has he found you yet Ryan: no he hasn' Horatio: Mr wolfe Ryan: maybelle is my sister

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/338300.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/338300.page GMT Uh,is end of this near?I've added more at 'Never again''Oh Carly don't be mad cause i use your story as comercial,feel free to use mine

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/338333.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/338333.page GMT ummm you used my story as a commercal what and there will be more flashbacks cause we will find out stuff about the people such as ryan and calleigh and tim and other people so i don't know lol ~~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/338365.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/338365.page GMT I can't waitHow was your day?

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/338563.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/338563.page GMT Ok my 2day sugar rush has past!!!!but I need this(\_/)('.')(")(")BUN NY - !!AND THIS WILL B MY CATCH PHRASE"I FOUND A CARROT!"

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/338892.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/338892.page GMT ok then Delkobaby lol ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/338915.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/338915.page GMT Yay! But I ate like 2 bars of chocolateBUNNIES!(\_/) ('.')(")(")

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/338929.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/338929.page GMT MORE PLEASE THIS WAS GOOD CARLY PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEE... - THERESA

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/339130.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/339130.page GMT lol thank you theresa how are you ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/339133.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/339133.page GMT your welcome Carly, i'm good and you...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/339241.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/339241.page GMT WHOEVER IS WRITIN THIZ STORIE ,UR DOIN GREAT .PLZ KEEP GOIN

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/339247.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/339247.page GMT Chapter 95 Eric's Past part Five and Ryan's past Part one Ryan: yeah maybelle is my older sister i'm 28 she's 30 Eric: Ryan how many sister's do you have two sisters and one brother ( 14 years ago in ryan's past) ( ryan was on his way home from school he had gotten detention so he was kept after school) Ryansdad: RYAN WHERE WERE YOU Ryan: I GOT KEPT AFTER SCHOOL DAD I GOT INTO AN OTHER FIGHT Ryansdad: WHAT DID I TELL YOU I WOULD DO IF YOU GOT INTO AN OTHER FIGHT AT SCHOOL RYAN Ryan: dad please don't hurt me dad i'm sorry please don't Ryansdad: SORRY DOESN'T CUT IT RYAN YOU NEED TO BE TAUGHT A LESSON( back in the present) Eric: you never said anything about a brother Ryan: i know it's complacatied ( 6 years ago in eric's past) Maybelle: no daddy please don't hurt me or the baby Maybellesdad: BABY!! WHAT BABY!Ericsmom: oh my god ( back in the present) Horatio: maybelle do you remember meMaybelle: yes you were the man who put my father behind bars Horatio: yes i was Eric: what are we gonna do H Horatio: well first we need to find a safe place for maybelle ryan riley evan gina and you ericEric: me?Horatio: yes you were maybelle;s fiance ( 14 years ago in ryan's past) Ryan: dad please nooo!!( ryans's dad punches ryan and kicks him ) Ryansdad: next time you chose to get into a fight think about your punishment ( ryan was crying) Ryansdad: GOT IT!! Ryan: i got it i got it Maybelle: daddy what did you do to him ( maybelle goes into the kitchen and gets ryan some ice and tehy go up to maybelle's bedroom) Maybelle: are you ok little brother( ryan was still crying) Ryan: maybelle when you and eric run away please take me with you i don't wanna be here anymore Maybelle: i know ryan i will try to get you outta here i love you little brother Ryan: i love you too maybelle ( ryan and maybelle hug)

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/339415.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/339415.page GMT WWO THAT WAS A GREAT CHAPTER LOVED IT WOW MAYBELLE IS RYANS SISTER LOVED IT MROE PLEASE SORRY IT TOK ME A WHILE TO GET TO IT MY APOLOGIES

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/339428.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/339428.page GMT it's ok don't worry about it glad you liked it just wait till you see what else i have in store hehe ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/339431.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/339431.page GMT SO SAD.LUV HOW UR DOIN THE PAST AND PRESENT .CONTINUE PLZ

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/339470.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/339470.page GMT AWWWWWWW THAT IS SO SAD MORE CARLY PLEASE PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEE THAT WAS A GOOD CHAPTER LOVED IT...THERESA

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/339949.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/339949.page GMT yeah well eric and maybelle knew each other when they were teenagers and you are gonna find out something about them in the next chapter which will be posted tomorrow lol ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/339953.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/339953.page GMT ok i will wait thanks Carly...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/339958.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/339958.page GMT so ggod keep going

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/339994.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/339994.page GMT haha glad you liked the chapters Gen ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/340152.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/340152.page GMT Chapter 96 Eric's and maybelle's past part one ( back in the present) Eric: but H what about jackie brenda and tylee Horatio: they are gonna need to go with you Marisol: Eric Just do what Horatio says please Eric: all right mari ( 14 years ago in maybelle's and eric's past) Maybelle: Eric we need to get Ryan outta there we have to take him with us Eric: but what's gonna happen to ryan if your dad catches us Maybelle: i never thought about that your right Eric: we need to make sure that us and the babies can get as far away from here as possible Maybelle: my dad is gonna kill me when he finds out i'm pregnant Eric: maybelle you have me and plus it doesn't matter how old we are as long as we have each other Maybelle: eric i'm 16 your 18 i wanna give the babies up for adoption Eric: ok fine ( back in the present) Brenda: what's going on Jackie: yeah i was studying Eric: we need to go somewhere for a while girls Jackie: uhhh where uncle eric Eric: someplace safe Brenda: aren't we safe here Eric: no Carly: so whats the whole point of this Tim: carly aren't you supposed to be in school Carly: uhhhhh i got suspendid Jackie: yeah me to Tim: what did you girls do Jackie: well me and kaelyn and carly picked a fight with amaireni Tim: girls Kaelyn: unicorn they made me Carly: no we didn't you liar ( 14 years ago in eric's and maybelle's past 9 months later) Eric: you did a great job sweetheart Maybelle: are the girls ok Eric: their fine Terry: we have decied to name them Jackie and Brenda

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/340882.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/340882.page GMT GGGGGGGGGREAT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/340884.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/340884.page GMT thanks Tamara How are You ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/340892.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/340892.page GMT GOOD.You?I'm tired

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/340899.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/340899.page GMT i'm good just kinda taking it slow today ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/340904.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/340904.page GMT I didn't even wrote anymore chapters in my story.Than you know what I am.But I'll wrote laterJust this:If Eric knew Ryan before why didn't he just ask him where is Maybellene?Oh if this will help(my invice)why don't you put H's father in story?Like H killed him but he wasn't really dead and H's mother.If you want I think it would be interestingBut first solve all this

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/340912.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/340912.page GMT well see ryan didn't know where Maybelle was and eric did ask him which i didn't tell in the story and there was gonna be a flashback soon of eric asking ryan where maybelle was and yeah i was thinking about bringing H's dad back to life and i just gave you spoliers hehe ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/340924.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/340924.page GMT Spoiler CarlyYou can put Raymond Sr. and Yelina too.Just my opinion

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/340936.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/340936.page GMT yeah i have raymond Jr. i might bring yelina in but i dont know about raymond Sr i might but i'm not sure yet ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/340938.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/340938.page GMT I'm assisting

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/340950.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/340950.page GMT hahaha yeah i will post the next chapter soon i gotta think for a little bit talk to you later ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/340952.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/340952.page GMT Me too.

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/340955.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/340955.page GMT WOW CARLY THAT WAS A GOOD CHAPTER PLEASE PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE CONTINUE, HEY TAMARA HOW YOU...THERESA

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/341638.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/341638.page GMT THANK YOU THERESA AND FOR MY UPCOMING 100TH CHAPTER I MIGHT DO SOMETHIGN SPECIAL AND BY SPECIAL I MEAN MAYBE A SHOCKER OR SOMETHING EXEITING YAY ~~CARLY AKA MIGHT BE GETTING SICK

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/341643.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/341643.page GMT YOUR WELCOME CARLY, OK COOL CAN'T WAIT YAY...THERESA

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/341670.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/341670.page GMT @(-_-)@

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/341782.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/341782.page GMT i am gonna give you a little spolier ok Carly may or may not be tim's daughter and we are gonna find out who her real dad is when chapter 100 comes i wonder who it could be ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/341806.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/341806.page GMT GREATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT.LOVE THE STORY

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/341816.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/341816.page GMT HEY CARLY GREAT CHAPTER LOVED IT AND CONGRATS ON REACHING 100 YIPEE I LOVE REACHING 100 AND THEN I WAS LIE HELL YEHA IM GOING TO 200 AND NOW IM LIKE WOO HOO UIM GOIGN TO 300 LOLMORE PLEASE

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/341966.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/341966.page GMT yeah well 4 more chapters and i will reach 100 i will try to do something special for my 100th chapter but i don't know what i'm gonna do yet but Carly may or may not be tim's daughter is she or isn't she muhaha ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/342124.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/342124.page GMT Hm,I'm guessing who might be her father

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/343026.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/343026.page GMT Who you guessing Tamara Private messge me who you are thinking is Carly's father ~~CarlyAKA SLEEPY

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/343123.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/343123.page GMT Chapter 97 the past might solve a mistery part one ( back in the present) Kaelyn: yes you two did make me Carly: kaelyn stop lying god your so annoying Tim: enough girls ( Meanwhile maybelle pulls ryan to a corner) Maybelle: why did you lie about your age your my twin Ryan: ok fine i will tell them the truth ( they go back out ) Ryan: ok i lied i'm not 28 i'm 31 like maybelle Maybelle: yesterday was our birthday Horato: Mr. Wolfe why did you lie Ryan: its a long story ( meanwhile marisol pulls horatio over and whispers something in his ear and they go back out) Carly: what is this make-out central or something Jackie: yeah seriusly Gracie: kaelyn carly what did you 2 do at school Carly: got into a fight with the mean guy at school Tim" i thought you said u got into a fight with amaireni Carly: that was jackie and kaelyn i got into a fight with ?: me Ryan: oh my god ( 16 years ago in ryan's past ) Ryan: maybelle come on seriusly please let me go with you or i will tell dad Maybelle: ryan i dont want you to go cause if you get caught dad is gonna kill you Ryan: at least i'll go out happy now come on please Maybelle: fine ( later that night ryan and maybelle were drunk) ?: hey cutie Ryan: hey babe what are you doin here ?: i came here to party and i found you Ryan: yeah i begged maybelle to take me with her to here ?: so you wanna have a little fun Ryan: yeah i would love that ( back in the present) Maybelle: why oh my god ryan Ryan: oh nothing i just i'm out of it Carly: what are you doing here ?: i need help Horatio: for what ?: to find my real dad Horatio: we might be able to help you with that Who is the kid? Who is the kids father? what is gonna happen? You will see soon

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/343221.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/343221.page GMT Keep on!!!!!!!!I'm just gueesing.Little help:Is that person is story?Just that and I'll tell you who I think it is

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/343591.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/343591.page GMT Tamara i need to know who you are talking about lol ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/343599.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/343599.page GMT About your ''father''.Will he came in story or he's one of these who are in it

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/343609.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/343609.page GMT you will find out soon just tell me who you think my "Father" is ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/343613.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/343613.page GMT I sent my PM.Myabe I made a mistake (Biiiiiiiiiiig).Am I close????

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/343623.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/343623.page GMT Chapter 98 the past might solve a mistery part two Horatio: what's your name ?: Tyler Horatio: do you have anything that could help us find your father Tyler: no ( 16 years ago in ryan's past the next morning) Ryan: oh s*** my dad's gonna kill me i gotta go bye ?: bye ( ryan rushes home) ?: RYAN WHERE WERE YOU Ryan: i am so sorry dad ?: RYAN HOW MANY TIMES DO I HAVE TO TEACH YOU A LESSON Ryan: dad please let it wait till after school or the teachers will suspect something ?: I DON'T CARE RYAN YOU NEED TO BE TAUGHT A LESSON( ryans dad punches ryan in the stomach and then in teh chest then gives him a black eye) Ryan: ahhhhh my ribs Maybelle: oh my god daddy it was my fault i took him with me i made him come with me last night ?: ryan still shouldn't have gone maybelle now i gotta go to work Ryan: it hurts ( ryan and maybelle's dad leaves for work and maybelle takes ryan to the hospital) Doctor: what happened Maybelle: my dad did this to him it's not the first time Doctor: all right nurse call the cops and lets get you checked out ok ryan Ryan: it hurts Doctor: i know ( what will happen next )

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/343661.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/343661.page GMT Well what??????12 more minutes for me!

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/343665.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/343665.page GMT sorry i couldn't finish that chapter cause my mom got home so i left it where it was but you will find out what happens next when i i post the next chapter ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/343794.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/343794.page GMT GOOD CHAPTER CARLY LOVED IT PLEASE CONTINUE SOONTHERESAAKA SAD CAINE GIRL

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/343839.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/343839.page GMT good chapter cant wait to find out what happen next

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344054.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344054.page GMT Thank you Gen and Theresa wait till you find out who ryan's dad is and other stuff that will be coming soon haha~~CarlyAKA SLEEPY

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344062.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344062.page GMT ok...TheresaakaSOMEWHAT SAD CAINE

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344066.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344066.page GMT ahh Theresa Why are you Sad~~CarlyAKA SLEEPY SPEEDLE GIRL

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344072.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344072.page GMT because i was just teasing a friend he's a guy and i was just kidding with him and he got all mad at me and so i didn't talk to anyone after that after i got out of school.Theresaakagetting a little bit better Caine

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344137.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344137.page GMT ohh i see yeah i have friends that are guys they are my age on an other website and i pick on them they sometimes get mad but hey they forgive me after i say sorry ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344146.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344146.page GMT ohh theresa thats nothing guy have such a big ego dont worry hell forget soon

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344152.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344152.page GMT yeah Gen's right hahaha ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344155.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344155.page GMT you bet iam lol just take it from an older girl guys have huge ego but smaller brain lol thats why hes going to forget soon lol

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344161.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344161.page GMT hahahahaha true Gen very true but some guy's don't have small brain's ~~CARLYAKA HYPER SLEEPY SPEEDLE GIRL

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344165.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344165.page GMT yeah yourr ight but soemtimes they dont use it lol

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344166.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344166.page GMT very true my dad can be a dummy a lot hahaha ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344169.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344169.page GMT yep mine too lol

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344170.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344170.page GMT lol yeah dad's can be weird and dummy's lol ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344174.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344174.page GMT carly not only dad guys in general can be weird and dummy but we love them anyway lol

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344176.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344176.page GMT yeah true lol haha ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344177.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344177.page GMT speaking of guys anyone you like at school

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344180.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344180.page GMT i'm home schooled the only guy's i like are actors or singers lol ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344182.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344182.page GMT ohh yeah thats right lol kind of hard to find someone then lol

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344184.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344184.page GMT yeah haha ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344186.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344186.page GMT how old are you again sorry if you told me already i keep forgetting things lately too tired

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344190.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344190.page GMT i'm 13 lol ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344191.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344191.page GMT ohh then you still have time yo find a good man lol

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344192.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344192.page GMT yeah hopefully first i gotta decied what i'm gonna do when i turn 18 ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344194.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344194.page GMT anything in mind choose carefully

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344195.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344195.page GMT yeah i'm trying to figure out if i wanna be a cop an actress a csi ummm work with animals or what i can't decied i still got 5 years ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344199.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344199.page GMT yeah but if you want to be acop or a csi you better have good grades i dont know how it is in the usa but over her in quebec you have to got o college to be a cop unbelievable 3 yrs of college to give ticket lol

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344201.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344201.page GMT well yeah but i don't really wanna go to college but if i wanna work with animals or be a cop or csi i gotta go to college so yeah sigh i got 5 years lol ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344205.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344205.page GMT iwanted to work with animals too but i ddint cuase i would have end up bringing allt hem back to my home lol i couldnt have stand to put an animal dwon i think i would have cry more then the owner lol

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344211.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344211.page GMT no no i wouldn't work as a vet i would work in a zoo or aquriam i couldn't stand to be a vet ~~CARLY

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344217.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344217.page GMT yeah tha would be cool we have a cool zoo over here its huge and they made it nice for animal they used to have this gorilla that was the second oldest gorilla in captivity in the world and the first one ever aloowed in canada but he died 3 weeks ago it was sad cause he was the emblem for the zoo he was 48 yrs old

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344232.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344232.page GMT i think i heard about that yeah i've never even been to a zoo i've been to an amusement park that has animal's but it's not really a zoo it's more rides and stuff then animal's i wanna go there so i can see the tiger's in their new exibit and see the monkey's and stuff i've been there before but i havent seen the tiger's in there new exibit it's really cool from what i've heard i wanna see the snake's to they are cool see i'm nto afraid of animal's and i don't think you've ever heard of this guy but i learned a lot of stuff from steve irwin he is the reason i'm not afraid of animal's cause he taught me a lot of the stuff i know about animal's and he was the most awesome animal conservastionist of all time yeah so haha ~~Carly~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344247.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344247.page GMT are you kidding of course i know steve irwin where do you think i live the north pole lol i was so sad when he died i always though he would end up beeing eaten by a crocodile lol but to get kill by a stingray man thats just silly and if you want to see the zoo im talking about just google zoo of granby its a very cool zoo

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344256.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344256.page GMT yeah i was sad when he died to he was awesome i saw his memorial on tv and i cried threw the whole thing cause he was the reason i am not afraid of animal's you know i mean i learned a lot from watching him on tv so yeah ok yeah i will google the zoo thanks ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344265.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344265.page GMT no problem enjoy

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344269.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344269.page GMT oh my god i just read about the zoo i wanna go there i wanna touch the sharks they are one of my favorite animals i love them oh my god that zoo sounds so awesome one day when i grow up and get the money i'm going to canada hahaha ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344280.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344280.page GMT yeah ts pretty cool they also have this huge waterpark you can swim and see the animals in one day and yeah canada is pretty cool but quebec is awsome lol and if you like tiger you should know that at the beginning of last summer the quebec police receive acall from a woamn claiming to have sen a tiger walking in the forest around her house at firstt hey though it was joke butthen another person call and it turned out to be true ,their was this guy keeping a 1 yrs old tiger chain in his backyard butt he tiger escape ,forutnatly it wa sbaby and they were able to cathc him without trouble he wass o cute and now the zoo of granby have him and hes only on pension there until the court decide what to with him cuase the owner claim he had all the legal paperwork ,i gott o see him when i ent there this syummer hes so cute crazy huh

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344292.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344292.page GMT yeah i love tiger's they are my most favorite animals and sharks and komodo dragons and snakes and pandas and bald eagels lol and wolves ok i love a lot of animals inculding monkeys! lol ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344299.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344299.page GMT yeah those cool animal but i love horse and dog the most i wish i could have a farm with alot of horse and panda are so cute lol and oh my god wolfe is my favorite of them all i have a blanket with a wolfe on it my sister doesnt like it cause for her they are freaky lol

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344306.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344306.page GMT hahaha i have two tiger pictures in my room i want a picture of a wolfe and a shark and a komodo dragon and a monkey i have a big white stuffed tiger i want a monkey lol and a wolfe and a panda then i will have enough stuffed animals lol ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344315.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344315.page GMT my god you have your own little zoo lol

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344316.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344316.page GMT well not really i mean i have uhh plastic or whatever they are animals and they are 2 zebras 3 tigers 1 wolf 3 lions 1 panda 1 koala uhh a shark a stingray teh stingray is kinda big so i swim with it in the pool lol and i forgot what else i have lol i wanna get some dinosaurs haha i have a game and it's called endless ocean and you get to swim with and study marine animals and shark's won't attack you and it's fun i love it ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344326.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344326.page GMT its cool your really passionnate about it lol

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344335.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344335.page GMT yeah i love animals i saw this game the other day if you know what zoo tycoon is then you will know what i am talking about well it's like all the zoo tycoon's combined and you can make a zoo with dinosaurs and marine animals and land animals and all that stuff and you can get into the enclosers with them it's really cool i'm saving up for it right now haha ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344360.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344360.page GMT yeah i know that game hope you get it soon and have fun with it .

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344364.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344364.page GMT i will hehe velociraptor is my favorite dinosaur i hope they have it in the game ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344369.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344369.page GMT yeah im not into dinosaur but it would be cool to see them by the way ddi you know that the guy that wrote jurassic park micheal chricton died yesterday

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344374.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344374.page GMT i know i just felt sad about it i said sorry but he didn't say anything back so i think i'm done talking to him for a while...Theresa

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344378.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344378.page GMT hey theresa like i told you man have such ego and if hes your friend hes going to forgive you and if he doesnt then hes just an idiot

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344381.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344381.page GMT yeah what Gen said and yeah i heard about the guy who wrote jurassic park it's like one of my favorite movies it's sad that he died sigh ~~Carly

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344386.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/344386.page GMT Chapter 99 the beginning of a mistery part one ( back in the present) Eric: wait so your's and maybelle's birthday was yesterday right Ryan: yeah we are 32 now Carly: daTim: i wouldn't suggest you finish that word Carly: yes sir Horatio: speed why don't you take trouble maker home and then come back Carly: i can ride my skateboard back home Kaylee: i'll take her home Tim: thanks kaylee Horatio: speed how come Carly doesn't look a lot like you Tim: i could never figure that out Horatio: she does look like eric and ryan and you Grissom: and me Carly: grissom! ( carly runs up to grissom and hugs him) Grissom: hey there you Tyler: what in the world Maybelle: ryan are you ok Ryan: yeah why Maybelle were you having a flashbackRyan: what no Horatio: a flashback of what Maybelle: our dad was abusive he treated me and gina like princesses but ryan Horatio: was treated liek a piece of garbage Ryan: exactly Carly: kinda like me Tim: what the Carly: your dad's name wouldn't happen to be harold wolfe would it Ryan: yeah that's him why Carly: he was my foster dad once he use to beat me up for getting detention Horatio: uhh tyler carly ryan eric tim grissom dna samples please ( horatio gets their dna samples and when the results come back ) Horatio: oh my god.. To Be Continued..

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/346648.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/346648.page GMT sweeeeet love it

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/346909.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/346909.page GMT hey Gen glad you liked it how are you and jack today ~~Carlynn

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/346911.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/346911.page GMT im fine im still laughing about how silly bel was last night lol and jack hes fine he sleeping in the corner sightintg a lot cause he has such a hard life right

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/346915.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/346915.page GMT yeah dogs have it so rough haha and thanks for reminding me how Bel was last night haha now i'm laughing ~~Carlynn

]]> http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/346919.page http://www.cbs.com/forum/posts/preList/19238/346919.page GMT