I was thinking that if we got enough interest that we could start a round robin story. I'd randomly pick an order and start the story with a paragraph and then it would continue to the next person. If we have enough interest to pick the prompt I will put up a vote with people's suggestions. Keep the prompt suggestions to one - two words only. Let me know if you would like to do this Also I don't have that much time so this will be running at a slow pace.

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Okay here are the rules, ask me if you need more clarification:

YAY!!! (((hugs))) Hey Red and Trips!!!!

Sounds good to me! Can't wait to see the mix of everyone's writing styles! There's so much talent on these boards...should definitely make things interesting!

Good luck with finals, FX!

Awww...very cute. My niece loves the zoo. She's 5. There's a small petting zoo here. She loves to go in there and pet the goats!

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It was a good day for me. Nothing too exciting. Had to work a little late today. The owners of our department store chain are coming to visit our store tomorrow, so we had to do some extra cleaning up and all that fun stuff. Having a very good night right now...the Penguins are winning 4-2 with about 2:30 left in the game! YAY!!

Awww...thanks FX! ((hugs)) Oh yeah, by the way...PENS WIN!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Guess I'm a little overly passionate about a team that plays absolutely nowhere near where I live!)

I would like to join if thats cool!

thn0715 wrote:

Awww...thanks FX! ((hugs)) Oh yeah, by the way...PENS WIN!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Guess I'm a little overly passionate about a team that plays absolutely nowhere near where I live!)

I'm just as passionate about the Devs, and they aren't anywhere near where I live (unfortunately). Sounds like there are a lot of writers on board. Can't wait to read what you guys come up with!

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Hockey players make soccer and rugby players look like pansies!!!

I enjoy running, mainly middle distance. Also netball, basketball and couple of others. Haha i suppose netball isnt probably big in america. I enjoy rugby union as well. again another sport not too popular if you arent from New Zealand, Australia or South Africa!

Is ice hockey anything like field hockey? by the looks of things i should direct this to falcon!

I would love to be able to run marathons. I'm too impatient though, 5km is my average. Haha running does the opposite for me, allows to think about things, uninterrupted. I think either way its a wonderful way to clear ones mind! Netball is similar to Basketball, but without the bouncing of the ball and a few other differences. Its a pretty wierd sport, but ive been playing for years. I love basketball, one of the best sports to watch as well as play I think.

Thanks for the icon praise, any icon with Emily in it is fine by me....and yours definately fits into that catagory. So in a long way I am saying I love your icon aswell

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I wish they would put Prentiss (well I spose Paget!) in more colours. I think we have only seen red and pink!

She wore purple once or twice, I think. And I think the girl looks fabulous in red.

falcon-121 wrote:

*shrugs* Touché.

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Hockey players make soccer and rugby players look like pansies!!!

Ha! You should see how agressive the soccer teams in myleague are. You do remember why i have this cast on my foot??

I'm off to bed now. Nice talking (typing?) to you!

aletheia_now wrote:

Is ice hockey anything like field hockey? by the looks of things i should direct this to falcon!

I don't know a lot about field hockey, but from what I've seen of it (I think I saw some during the summer olympics), it seems similar to ice hockey. Ice hockey is probably a lot faster-paced and physical, though. Field hockey is probably closer to street hockey than ice hockey, but those two are pretty similar.

thursdaynext wrote:

Um, there's really not enough Hotch talk going on here.

I have to agree with my 4 H Sister - WE NEED MORE HOTCH!!!!

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I thinkI need reruns.

Okay here are the rules, ask me if you need more clarification:

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1) Everybody can write as much as they want for their section but aim for at least a paragraph.

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2) Please add something in your part that the next person can elaborate and take further. Like Xoni said, she does not want to be stuck describing trees.

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3) If you cannot come up with anything, just say pass and it will go to the next writer. Sorry that means no writing turn for you till the next time. It has to be this way so that we don't have multiple people writing the same part.

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4) Please re-read your part and spell check it. Improper grammer can become a hassle. Also be senstive to other writers and keep to appropriate topics and away from excessive use of swearing.

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5) Have fun and use your creativity! We can have all sorts of genres and cover all sorts of topics.

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This is the current order: Me, Trips, Thn, Sparks, Ale, TN, Lily, Red, and last but not least Xoni . I'll try and have my paragraph up by this weekend so that we can get started.Oh and it would help if everyone picks a color to post their section with so that we can find the story easily and to distinguish between writers.

I'll go with orange since I'm using it for my fic anyway.

((hugs back)) We really will be a rainbow brigade after this! Trips...you changed your icon again!!! You're starting to rival Bleu!

forensicex wrote:

sports= yuck!

*sports addict shakes head in disappointment* I see my color theory is spreading across the boards. Next task, world domination. Mwahahahahahaha!!!!!!!!

That's funny, Trips!

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*shakes head and stands on the other side of the sports line with Falc*

The sounds of weary, dragging feet passed through the bullpen, stopping by the elevators. The team stood there, shoulders slumped, with their overnight bags in their hands. They had been working cases mentally and physically tough without a break for the past month and fatigued lines creased their faces. The entire team needed a break, a vacation.

The shrill sound of JJ’s phone ringing interrupted the silence, jer.king everyone out of their heads.

“Hello?” JJ asked puzzled.

“Darling! I got what you asked! The cabin in Maine has been booked and the getaway ready!!” Garcia’s exuberant voice came over the phone.

A smile broke across JJ’s face transforming it. Her surprise plan had been successful. Now to break it to the team…

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Sounds nice! And I love the attention to JJ!

"JJ? What's up?" Emily tipped her head to one side, her dark hair falling over her shoulder. "Is there a problem?"

"No, no problem. But I need you all to trust me." Looking at the puzzled glances her teammates were sharing, JJ carried on. "I need each of you to go home, pack enough clothes for a week, and meet me back here in half an hour." The glances had turned to alarm. "It's not a case! So no work clothes, just 'weekend' wear. Okay?"

Hotch peered at her.

"What're you planning?"

Grinning and shooing the team out of the door, JJ began dialling Garcia.

"Now that would be telling..."

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Hope it's okay!

[Pssst... Caption Contest is open again. Everybody's welcome!]

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Glad you had a safe trip back.

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I can just Relate to being in a Relationship and it is going so good - You don't want to mess anything up!!!

Maybe just a tad. I just watched an awesome NCIS ep called "Enigma". It's the one with the Colonel that Gibbs served with and he's become a schizophrenic. Wow! That was really great. Seeing Gibbs that close to tears at the end was so sad! So far it's the best one I've seen. (Of course, I'm only 15 episodes in, so I'm sure it will probably be replaced as my favorite as we move on!) I'm going to bed now. ¡Hasta Mañana!

"Hey, hey.. What's it all about?" JJ cut in. She was totally confused. Garcia wasn't usually like this. "Did Kevin say something to you?" When Garcia didn't reply, JJ sighed. "He did, didn't he? What did he say?"

Garcia mumbled something then replied hastily "I gotta go. Talk to you later, kay?" And she hung up.

JJ frowned. Something had happened and she needed to know what. She glanced at the clock on the wall and sighed because she didn't have the time she needed to go and confront Garcia in her office. She saw Emily putting on her coat. She looked around and saw that everyone was already leaving. She walked towards Emily.

"Emily, can I talk to you for a second?" She asked.

Emily's smile faded as she saw a worried look on JJ's face. "Sure, what is it?" She replied, concerned. "Are you okay?"

JJ nodded. She smiled a little to see her friend got all worried in an instant. "I'm good. It' not about me. It's Garcia..."

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Well, I hope this is good enough for everyone, because I'm not sure.. It's Zoni's turn now.

Agreed. I can't wait to see her take on all this!

Night Red!!! ((hugs))

Ah yes. Maybe we should bombard her thread with requests for Hotch and JJ pics!

I need some breakfast. Be back soon!

red_sneakers wrote:

"... I'm not the kind of girl people would care to look twice if they happen to see me on the street. I'm not you. I can't talk about anything serious without saying stupid things. I just..."

"Hey, hey.. What's it all about?" JJ cut in. She was totally confused. Garcia wasn't usually like this. "Did Kevin say something to you?" When Garcia didn't reply, JJ sighed. "He did, didn't he? What did he say?"

Garcia mumbled something then replied hastily "I gotta go. Talk to you later, kay?" And she hung up.

JJ frowned. Something had happened and she needed to know what. She glanced at the clock on the wall and sighed because she didn't have the time she needed to go and confront Garcia in her office. She saw Emily putting on her coat. She looked around and saw that everyone was already leaving. She walked towards Emily.

"Emily, can I talk to you for a second?" She asked.

Emily's smile faded as she saw a worried look on JJ's face. "Sure, what is it?" She replied, concerned. "Are you okay?"

JJ nodded. She smiled a little to see her friend got all worried in an instant. "I'm good. It' not about me. It's Garcia..."

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Well, I hope this is good enough for everyone, because I'm not sure.. It's Zoni's turn now.

Amazing Update Red - You are such a great Writer - Btw How are you Feeling today (((Hugs)))

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Emily's eyebrows went up and wiggled slightly as she responded in her own half-whisper, "The crow flies at night." JJ's smile broadened at Emily's offbeat sense of humor. Emily added, "Garcia won't suspect a thing." She winked and led their way out of the bullpen. With Em's help, JJ was certain that she could help Garcia see what an amazing woman she really is and how lucky Kevin is to have her.

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A few minutes later in the car garage, JJ heard Reid call out "Shotgun!" as Morgan, Rossi, Garcia, and he approached the car they would all be taking together. JJ, Hotch, and Emily would be in the second vehicle.

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Morgan thought it would be a nice change to have Reid up front, as he normally volunteered to sit in the back when they drove anywhere together. As he gave Spence a playful shove, Garcia called out "Driver's seat!" and headed for that door. Morgan's eyes widened suddenly at her unexpected move. A flash of them careening through the streets popped into his head, punctuated by Garcia's joyful laughter, and he swallowed the fear that rose unbidden into his thoughts and throat. "Hey, baby girl, why don't you sit back and let me be your chaffeur to the airport? You know I don't get enough opportunties to treat you like the goddess you are." He walked to the driver's door, and held out his open hand to Garcia.

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Garcia smiled back at Morgan and placed her hand in his, which he kissed lightly on the back. "Why thank you, my gallant and handsome sir," Garcia said warmly, courtesying slightly and batting her eyes as she flirted with him. Morgan led her to the passenger seat behind the driver, and opened her door for her. She slid in and smiled up at Morgan, "Hmm... now I need to think of a way to pay you back, and I have a few good ideas." Morgan laughed. "Girl, you know I can't wait!" He smiled at Garcia for a moment, then closed her door. He felt a rush of victory and pleasure course through him as he opened the driver's door and took the wheel. As Rossi and Reid climbed in,Garcia told him from which gate at the airport they would be departing. As soon as the rest of the team got into the other car, Morgan headed out of the parking garage to the airport.

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"Did you know... "Reid began spouting out commercial airline information as Morgan pulled out, and Morgan suddenly remembered why Reid usually sat in the back seat. He was thankful when Rossi quickly interrupted Reid to ask him to turn on the radio so they could listen for weather reports, and Reid smiled at the opportunity to operate the radio controls. With Reid successfully distracted by the radio, everyone in this car enjoyed their drive to the airport. However, the same could not be said for the occupants of the other car...

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(I hope that's a good lead-in for the next person. Thanks for the great lead-in lily and sneaks! Y'all gave me a lot of great ideas to work with. )

YAY!!! THE ZONI IS BACK!!!! I loved your part of the story. You guys have all done great with writing Garcia...I suck at writing her!!! And I loved your last line! I literally started to giggle and say "oh no!" all at the same time! I totally agree with Falc, you should definitely give writing a fic a shot. *sends the plot bunnies to invade Zoni-land* Haven't see ya in a while. How ya been???

Bye falc!

How miserable for you zoni That really smells. I hate insomnia, I ended up having to fix mine with tablets and relaxation stuff. I hope it improves for you soon!

Lol, that's a ton! No problem with sharing your problems, I'm here to listen and I'm sure the others are too.

Gremlins! Eke! *need to buy gremlin repellent*

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Hope you feel better soon, zoni! *hugs*

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Hmm... Ilike that, sparkle! A problem shared is a problem halved, may have to remember that.

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I actually did something similar to that for my next part, Ex, except that I used google. LOL!

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We're here for ya', zoni! Da' family's got to stick together, ya' know? LOL! I thought you wrote the dialogue very well. Don't sell yourself short, you are very talented!

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I love dialogue! Coming up with the interactions, what they say, how they react to what has been said, all that jazz. It is just fun!

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GREMLINS? >Lines up sword, forks, blender, microwave, christmas ornaments and a stuffed animal<

I am ready for battle.

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Thanks zoni! Yes, everyone in da' family is flippin' awesome! Bye! Hope you can get some rest!

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Good! You guys fight the gremlins, I'll protect Gizmo! Oh...and watch out for Spike...he's dangerous!!!

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*feels da love from da family!* ((hugs to all))

Here's my part...please excuse any typos, now it goes back to Sparks. Please let me know if you need the whole story, been saving it as a word document.

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Hotch was his usual stern and quiet self during the ride. He focused solely on the road, his mind still entangled in the snares of their last case. The silence hung thickly over the occupants of the car. JJ and Emily were eager to talk amongst themselves about the girls’ night out but having JJ in the passenger seat made it a bit difficult. Neither of them were keen on breaking the silence even with a whisper.

Both cars made quick stops at each other’s homes packing a few extra clothes into their overnight bags before continuing onto the airport. JJ had changed her mind about meeting the team back at Quantico . Instead she had programmed the SUVs’ gps system to send them to the Reagan National Airport where the team’s private economy seats awaited them. JJ chuckled quietly to herself; she could not wait to see the looks on their faces.

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Once they arrived at the long term parking garage, everyone exited the cars, bags in hand. JJ suppressed a laugh at the sight of a rarely confused team. Everyone wore completely puzzled looks on their faces except Emily and Hotch. They were both too good at hiding their feelings and expressions.

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“Follow me everyone. We have a plan to catch!” JJ strode off confident that the team would follow like lost sheep.

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She heard the murmuring behind her, “She’s such an independent woman on a mission. She could share the details with the rest of us!” Morgan complained playfully.

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Garcia blushed and looked away from Morgan, feeling slightly guilty. She had promised JJ that her lips were sealed. Unluckily for her, she was in a group of profilers and all of them stared at her while hurrying after JJ.

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“Sugar princess, is there something that you’re not telling us?” Morgan asked suspicious.

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“I know nothing.” she claimed plastering a sweet look of innocence on her face.

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“The probability that Garcia knows more than she is revealing is quite high considering that since we are in an airport, someone would have needed to plan our trip and flight plan. Someone with able computer skills.” Reid stated.

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They reached Ticketing/Check-In on the third level and JJ dealt quickly and efficiently with the lady behind the desk. No one was checking in any baggage anyways. Soon enough they were moving again, down to the second level.

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Emily then spoke up, “I’m pretty familiar with this airport and we are in terminal C, gates 35-45, which only offers flights from US Airways. That means this is a national flight, we are staying in the US .”

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At this point they reached security where JJ handed their tickets to airport personnel. They revealed their ids for their guns and passed through both the metal detectors and the air machines. Reid jumped nervously at the loud puff of air that surrounded him. Airport security had become so tight.

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Hotch grabbed his carry on bag off the conveyor belt and stood next to JJ surveying the crazy scene before them. Lines snaked through the room, loud beeps came from machines, but then his attention was drawn back to the team. Rossi had gone through the metal detector and was waiting for his bag.

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“Excuse me sir, please step aside. We need to search your bag…”

forensicex wrote:

It left a lot of options, lol. I did actually do some research for this, I found the nearest airport to quantico and even looked at the map of the airport. Just in case someone had really been there.

I did the same thing when I was lookin' for a ski resort in my fic. I picked Echo Mountain because it was the closest one to Denver.

ROFL. Hotch would be shocked if it was really the s'mores that set up the alarm. I hope Trips will continue soon!

He could get fired up every now and then, thn. LOL!

sparkletasia wrote:

I guess you could just put the first big drum bit of 'In the Air Tonight' on repeat?

Dunhdunh dunhdunh dunhdunh dunhdunh dundun dunh! I LOVE THAT!!!

I can only hope! Like when he's recovering from his gunshot wound (cuz we KNOW he's still alive) maybe we'll get a shot of him working out in a gym or something to regain his strength??? Shorts...tank top...*wanders off to Hotch-land* (Ok, now I know I'm losing it...instead of saying a "shot" of him, I actually typed a "hot" of him!)

For TN's eyes only... Um...do they have to cover the waist??? ???

*offers falc a pair of blinders to protect his eyes ... and his innocence*

Hotch and JJ stood by waiting for Rossi. Hotch tried to signal him to show his badge to the security guard to hurry this up, but Rossi shrugged and let the guard do his job.

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Hotch groaned. "I need coffee," he mumbled as he walked away.

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"Ooh! Coffee!" JJ said excitedly and followed.

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They returned to the waiting area with seven cups of coffee, well, six cups of coffee and one cup of coffee-flavored sugar for Reid. Hotch sat down next to Rossi.

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"What was that all about?" he asked.

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"Just a random search. No big deal."

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As they waited for their plane to arrive, Hotch watched his team.

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Morgan was giving Reid tips on what he affectionately reffered to as "the subtle art of babe watching". Not so subtle from Hotch's point of view. Especially since Reid was literally taking notes. He giggled, shook his head and turned his attention to the ladies.

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JJ, Garcia and Prentiss had been in a huddle since they sat down. Every time one of the guys would venture close, they'd sit back and look up as if nothing were going on. And as soon as they'd leave, they would go right back to their huddle.

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"Are you as confused by women as I am?" Hotch asked Rossi.

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Rossi laughed out loud. "I've been divorced three times, Hotch. What do you think?"

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"Look at them," he said. "They've been huddled like that for the last half hour. They're like middle school gossip girls over there! They're up to something."

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"Definitely," Rossi concurred. "The question is...what?"

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NEXT!

red_sneakers wrote:

Can't really imagine giggling Hotch tho

I use chuckling Hotch, but it is fun to see how everyone's vocabulary/style isdifferent.

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Sparkle is feeling witty today, I see.

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Thn is just super good at writing, period! I mean, it doesn't matter whether it is humor or serious and thought-provoking. The funny thing is that I enjoy reading some of the fics around here more than I do any novels from professional authors.

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"I'm in for five bucks." said Emily, looking a little disbelieving that they were actually doing this.

"Me too!" added JJ.

"Me three. Now let's get this straight ladies, winner is the person who gets the most correct out of the four. Winner takes all, which will be fifteen dollars. No backing out after signing the paper, and no changing your bets after either. Refusal to pay up gets you dishwashing all week. Okay, are we clear?"

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"Waterford."

"Excellent." A mischievous glint appearing in her eye, Garcia grabbed the pen and tucked a loose blue curl behind her ear. She obviously meant business.

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"Let's start with our very own resident genius. Girls, please write down your bet for the boy wonder." Quickly jotting down her own, she passed on the paper. Emily took her time, considering the options, whilst JJ scribbled hers down as soon as the paper was in her hands.

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"Now Hotch." The process was repeated, with everybody taking time to decide. "Rossi" Quicker this time. "Morg-" At this Garcia blushed. Was it cheating if she technically knew?

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Emily may have been on holiday, but the profiler in her didn't miss a trick. "You KNOW!" she exclaimed.

Garcia's eyes widened. "Um... it's not what you think?"

"What I'm thinking Garcia, is how do you know what Morgan's pyjamas look like?"

"He's stayed over before, when I was- When we had that trouble with Baylor. Don't look at me like that missy!" she yelped in response to JJ's raised eyebrow. "Look, we'll just exempt him. Make it a best out of three. Okay?"

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Stifling their giggles, JJ and Emily nodded very seriously, before bursting out into peals of laughter. The men looked over in alarm, but then something else grabbed their attention...

lilyrose777 wrote:

OMG!!! Did you all hear that Michael Jackson Died??? OMG!!!

MSNBC had an update a few minutes ago that says he is in a coma.

forensicex wrote:

Sparks - Wonderful update! Very funny, I loved the pajama topic. Plus it helps to distract Garcia from her insecure side. One question, does "Waterford" mean like crystal clear, like you understood something perfectly?

Sorry! Waterford's a famous brand of crystal over here (glasses etc)so often instead of replying 'Crystal', people say 'Waterford'. So exactly what you said

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Sparks...ROFLMAO!!!!! The ladies guessing about the guys' jammies! Hilarious!!! (Now you've got me thinking about Hotch in his jammies! *swoon*) Awesome update! (This one, and the other one, too!)

Oh, definitely, Ex!That is a great idea!

danabs wrote:

They always die in 3's.

That's what my mom said. I thought that McMahon's was just old age, didn't realize he had cancer. And MJ just came out of nowhere, really.

>faints<

- glad to know why she did it and have the full story

- sad because tis over

thn0715 wrote:

I just hope the ending isn't a let down. (That's always my biggest fear!)

Nothing you've written so far has been a let down, soI don't think you've got to worry about that. I should probably add some to mine (was going to yesterday, didn't happen).

dr_spitfire wrote:

Someone sent me 17 consecutive text messages (cuz the message was so long that it couldn't fit in one) about why Michael Jackson dying was a reason Ishould convert to christianity... so yeah... Iheard *Thinks I know who did it...* *considers punching him cuz he woke me up from a nap*

lilyrose777 wrote:

OMG!!! Did you all hear that Michael Jackson Died??? OMG!!!

I am going really, but I saw this and LOL. Sorry, doc, that sucks (but your friend sounds jokes :L)

I agree, sparkle. Doc completely debunked that excuse. Looking forward to seeing the "something else."

forensicex wrote:

I think I'll be updating my fic tonight, so keep an eye out for that,

Really?!? Score!!!

Be afraid falc, be very afraid...

So incredibly sorry I havnt been on and posting my part....something has come up so i havent been able to follow or be online often. I think I should miss my turn this round because I dont know when ill next be able to come on.

Again, I'm really sorry and I will definately be back in full force in a few days!

“Flight 262 now boarding at Gate 38.” The announcement came over the speakers, preventing Hotch from further speculating as to the girls behaviour.

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The team picked up their bags and headed toward the gate. Hotch looked at his team as they walked ahead of him. Morgan had picked up Garcia’s bag as well as his own and Garcia linked her arm through his as they walked together. JJ and Prentiss were laughing as they walked ahead and Rossi was trying unsuccessfully to look interested in what Reid was explaining to him. He wasn’t sure what JJ’s plan was, but he could feel himself relax, if only slightly, at the thought of a few days with his team as people, not as profilers.

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His attitude changed however, when he stepped onto the plane and followed the group down the narrow aisle…all the way to the back of plane. People jostled one another as they tried to get seated and over the din of the ‘economy class shuffle’ he heard a baby crying.

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“Excuse me…allow me…” Hotch felt a carry-on bag jabbing into his side as another passenger attempted to hoist it into the overhead. He glanced at the woman, his soft lips parting slightly in a smile and effortlessly lifted her heavy bag into the compartment. She smiled back at him, her cheeks blushing, and he continued on to his seat.

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“So, JJ wants us to leave everything behind, even civilization,” Hotch thought wryly to himself, as he took in the crowded, overwarm cabin. Before taking his seat, Hotch removed his jacket, allowing it to slip slowly over his broad shoulders and down his muscular arms before neatly folding it over the armrest. He realized that he was the only one of his team wearing a suit, and that even Rossi had foregone a jacket. JJ turned in her seat and made a sweeping gesture to indicate the press of humanity.

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“It’s all part of the experience!” Her eyes had a shine to them as she glanced at each of her companions. Hotch found it hard not to find her enthusiasm contagious.

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The remaining passengers had finished boarding and the flight attendants were settling in late comers when there was a commotion near the front of the plane. Hotch leaned forward in his seat, his crisp white shirt stretching taut over his chest.

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“He’s lucky, they don’t normally allow passengers to board after the final call,” stated Reid, as they watched the man take his seat several rows ahead of them. The man’s behaviour seemed odd, his gaze darting around the plane anxiously. Hotch couldn’t help but think that the man seemed familiar somehow. Hotch tried to put it out of his mind as he leaned back in his seat, loosened his tie ever so slightly, and closed his eyes for take off.

-- Hope you guys like it! Not quite as much sauciness as I wanted, but having Hotch strip off his shirt ever so slowly on the plane didn't seem to fit somehow

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Gremlins was awesome Gizmo is absolutely adorable!

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Now Iget all this talk of bunnies that flew over my head before.

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Terrible things always seem to happen in threes.

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*bleu steers clear of religious rant but pats doc on the back for having to deal with such foolishness*

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Zoni luv ((hugs)) I'll have to PM you later.

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You guys are amazing writers...I was unbelievably amused and enthralled with this lovely little story you have going here. I'm glad I finally made it over here to read it. It was a great idea ex! I love how you guys have stayed true to the characters and we get to see something from each character which is nice of course. Would say more but it'll most likely be incoherent *Sweet collapses from exhaustion*

TN - how wonderful! I love Hot helping the lady on the plane, and slowly taking off his jacket. Oooh, who is the nervous man? If it was my turn, I know what I'd write, but I can't wait to see what others come up with! (Who's turn is it next? I can't remember the writing order.) Oh, please feel free to pm me bleu! What's up? Night to all who went beddie-bye. Your night is my day.

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yes one more thing that went completely over my head kid. LOL

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Ohhhhh cookies yum!

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Rest up those of you who are probably still resting or should be.

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On a side note, Billy Mays has passed away at 50.

Boom boom pow! I was listening to that earlier! That and lots of Pendulum. Been a very dancey day.

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music can be helpful sometimes. Go for it!

- Pull Shapes by The Pippettes

- Keep Your Hands To Yourself by The Calling (this song makes me lol)

- Good Girls Go Bad by Cobra Starship

Just a couple to try maybe xD

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don't think I heard of any of those sparks.

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ur from the UK right sparks?

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Ahh okay. Cool! Yes I'm from the US but I think I was a Brit in a past life! lol!

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you would say that....nah not French!

Is hockey french or something?

There you go Sparks! Two pics for you from my trip in 06

forensicex wrote:

Let's see my list is German (check), English (check), French (half check), and then I want to learn Italian, Spanish, Mandarin, and Greek for fun. Falc - I agree with that, I can figure out a lot of Italian with my French knowledge.

That will give you a back-up as an interpritor.... Could provide a lot of travel for you one day!!!

Thn- Hey hey!

My comp just had a total meltdown, don't think it's used to it being so warm here :L I've got the fan on and all!

My entire school was less than that, FX! We had about 480 total school (9-12 grade).

You said you're in Cincinnati...did you by chance go to Lakota? Some of my cousins went there, that school is freakin' massive!

I think they were building the second freshman building when my cousins moved out of Cincy. I remembered it because I always thought it had a cool name! LOL! I guess the closest thing to that size around here is Hoover HS. That's the one who's football team is featured in the show "Two A Days" on MTV. Funny thing is, around here the only people that like that school are the ones who go to that school. The rest of the state can't stand them!

Unless you have a football team like the one my high school had the last time I went to a game. Every time they scored they had to go for 2 because the kicker couldn't kick the ball high enough to get it over the crossbar, much less be accurate through the uprights! When I was there we had a kicker who could kick a 60 yard FG without breaking a sweat!

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On that note, I'm gonna grab some dinner. Be back later.

The Moment Hotch Saw Kayla - He Knew that He would marry her one Day - He even told his Mother this and She Just Laugh, "Aaron Don't you think you are a bit young to be thinking About Marriage at this Age??" He didn't Care - All he knew Was He Loved Kayla and He Knew Kayla Loved Him.

''Aaron Will you Stop Running, Kayla Said as she tried to Keep up with him. "Yeah What is the Rush" Hotch's Young Brother Scream Running Behind Kayla. Hotch Stop and Turn to Face Kayla and Shawn, Who were Both out of Breathe Trying to keep you with Him , Hotch Smile, "i Just want to ge there before anyone else does and well if you all haven't notice it's hot as Heck out here and I would like to Cool Off - Don't you??"

Kayla Smiles, "Well of Course we do Silly But We don't want Pass out before we Get there, Couldn't we just walk for a while??" Hotch Sighs, When that Girl Smile at him - There was nothing he would not do for her. "Alright, Alright - We'll Walk, if that is what you want to do". Kayla takes Hotch hand in Hers and Smile, "Yes that is What I want to do, I want to Walk with you Aaron"

Shawn Just rolls His Eyes, "Gross - If this is what it's going to be like all Day I am going back Home, I can't take Watching you two Make Goo Goo Eyes at each other, I am Leaving. And With that Shawn Turns and Heads back to the House Leaving Aaron and Kayla to themselves. "Good" Kayla Says with s Smile, "Now it's just You and I" Blushing Aaron Smiles at Kayla, "I guess it is" Taking her Hand Aaron Leads Kayla up the Path towards the Swimming Hole, But Aaron and Kayla would not make it to the Hold that Day.

For as the two of them turn the Corner waiting for them was a Man - Dress in Black from Head to Foot, His Hair long and unkempt, His Eyes cold as Stone, with a scar running the length of his Cheek, He stare at Aaron and Kayla and Begin to Laugh, "So What do we have here, Where are you two Head off to.

Aaron pushing Kayla Behind Him, Glared at the man, "We on our way home, Now if you will excuse us, Grapping Kayla he Turns and begins to walk away, When he hears the man call after him, "Son you might want to rethink that Move". Aaron Turns and Sees that the Man has a Gun Point Directly at Him and Kayla, "Now son I don't Mean you No Harm, All I want is the Girl, That's All I want , You Just turn Around Go Home and Leave the Girl to Me".

Aaron Felt Kayla Hand Tighten Around his Arm, And He Glared at the Man again, "I can't do that, I will not Leave her", The Man Laughs Again, "Son You really don't have a Choice". And Aaron Didn't Because Just Behind Kayla And Aaron and Another Man Steps out of the Bushes and Before Aaron could React the Man Hits him over the Head with a Bat nearly Knocking Aaron Unconcious (sp??) The Last thing he hears is Kayla Voice Screaming - AARON HELP ME!!!!

Waking from a Cold Sweat Hotch Scans the Plane until his eyes fall upon the man in the first couple of roles in front of him - Glaring at the Man - He now knew why the man had looked so Familar to Him.......

I hope that is okay Guys - I wanted to Looked at Hotch is past - maybe Shake some stuff loose and see where it takes us - NEXT!!

Was so not expecting that! Great job, I'm really on my toes now to see where this goes next!

Frensic- Brisbane is blatantly the best. Just sayin'. Not that I'm biased or anything.... >whistles<

falcon-121 wrote:

Awesome job, lil! It was cute to think of Hotch with a little girlfriend, and young Shawn running back home. Kind of sad, though, guess the story is going to take a more serious twist (which can be a good thing). I liked it!

I know it's kind of Sad - But I Really Wanted to look into Hotch's Past - You know kind of Probe around in there and Maybe Find out what makes him Tick!!! You know maybe find out why he is so Dedicated and so Passionate about his Work. And I still think there are Avenues of Fun still Left in this Story.

Night to those who are going asleep...I think I'll get off too and continue watching HG. Our story is up...

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Good job, Lil!

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They were all much younger back then (I think that came out about 10 years ago or so). I hated her character (for obvious reasons), but love her as Angell. I may have hated his dad even more than her, though.

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Nice update to the story lil ((hugs)) always love seeing you!

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*waves*

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Hey, kiddo! That would be fun, since you are right there and all. How was the rest of your day?

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Sounds fantastic! LOL!

"Hotch?" Rossi opened his eyes, sensing a sudden movement on the chair next to him. He sat straighter when he saw Hotch's expression. "You okay?"He asked, concern filled his voice. His eyes followed where Hotch was staring at and the older agent frowned. "What are you looking at?"

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Hotch swallowed hard. He didn't realize that Rossi was talking to him until the agent shook him a little. He looked at Rossi with wary eyes and he shook his head. "No, nothing," he said after a long pause. "I just remembered I haven't turned the VCR yet. I have this game I'm dying to watch."

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Rossi widened his eyes in disbelief. He snorted. "The next time you lie, Hotch, pick something more realistic," The older man said irately. He closed his eyes and mumbled something about how people could be so stupid when they tried so hard to be believable. He knew something was off but he didn't think it was appropriate for him to make Hotch tell him anything he didn't want to. They were not working now. Even if they were, Hotch had the very right to hide things from him - the younger agent was still the chief of the unit. Soon, Rossi drifted back to slumber.

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Hotch lifted his hand to wipe the cold sweat off of his forehead and he realized that his hand was trembling. He gritted his teeth. He glanced up and saw the man he thought he knew again. No , he corrected. I did know him . Just as he was thinking, the man he was staring up stood up and made his way to the restroom. Hotch felt a rush of blood pumping his vein and his heart beat faster. He stood up, brushing Emily who sat beside him. The woman stirred a little but didn't wake up. Hotch walked slowly down the aisle. He could actually heard his heartbeat in his ears.

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As he reached the restroom, the door opened. A very tall man got out of the small cubicle, looking straight at him. Hotch's face grew pale in an instant. Those pair of eyes! He would never forget those eyes.

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The tall man nodded, frowning a little to see Hotch's reaction, then slowly started to make his way back to his seat.

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"Wait!" Hotch called before he could stop himself.

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Okay -- NEXT!!

Hope it's good enough and I hope I give Zoni enough to continue..

Unexpectedly, Hotch felt defenseless, like a child again, and he quickly turned and went into the bathroom to compose himself. Having no reason to be in there, he washed his hands in the sink, and then forced himself to face his reflection in the mirror. The ashen, fear-striken face that stared back at him wasn't someone he recognized. "Get hold of yourself" Aaron admonished himself. He reminded himself that he was no longer a small child, but an FBI agent with a team - his team - here with him, ready to help him at a moment's notice. He stared at himself until his face settled into a familiar, deadly stare that he had practiced many times in the past to create the perfect mask. He thought about the best course of action to take, composed a plan of action, and opened the bathroom door, confident in his abilities again.

Hotchner walked down the aisle to the back of the plane to reach a stewardess. In a hushed voice, he pulled out his badge and identified himself to her. He asked her if she could provide him with the name of one of the passengers. After assuring her that it was for official business reasons only, she agreed and went to get the passenger list. She told Hotch the name of the man in the seat he indicated, and asked if she should alert the pilot. He told her that would not be necessary at this time, as they still had a few hours before landing, and he would handle the situation for now.

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Hotch headed back up the plane aisle to where Garcia and Morgan sat together. He bent down beside them and asked Garcia in a low voice, "Kevin still works at the BAU, right? And he's in today?"

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Garcia, who had been smiling and joking with Morgan, was surprised by the question. With a more serious voice, she replied, "Yes, sir, he does. Why?"

"Do you think you could get Kevin on the plane's phone? I'd like him to run a check on a man named Lawrence Wilson - where he's lived over the past 30 years, his priors, everything." He provided Garcia with the little information the stewardess had been able to share with him about the man, and added "He's on this plane, and I'd like to know as much about him as possible before we land. If I'm right, he should be leaving this plane in handcuffs."

"Yes, sir, I'll get right on it"Garcia replied, reaching for the air phone.

"Hotch, what do you think this guy did? And what can I do to help?" Morgan asked, focused and serious now.

"Help Garcia get the information we need from Kevin to profile this guy. If he's the unsub I think he is, he is a child rapist and killer." The two men exchanged meaningful glances. Hotchner looked over to where JJ, Emily, and Reid sat together in three middle seats, talking and laughing. "Don't tell the others until we know for sure. There's no need to ruin their fun." Hotchner turned and headed back to his seat.

Rossi had only pretended to be asleep. While Aaron had been gone, he turned sideways in his seat and had noticed Hotchner's movement on the plane. As Hotchner moved to take his seat again, Rossi turned around and said "So, I guess you were asking Garcia if she could find a way to tape that game for you, huh?"He grinned slightly at Hotch as he said it, but the other man's serious expression quickly removed his smile. "Well, if you want to talk about it, I'm here," Rossi said lightly. He really wanted to pressure Hotchner into telling him what was going on, but he was trying to be more diplomatic with his team members.

Hotchner was surprised by Rossi's restraint. He looked at Rossi and smiled a little, and said softly "Actually, I was trying to get her to give up what JJ's plans are for us when we get to our destination, but she was surprisingly resistant to my charms." Rossi laughed at his comment, but knew he was still deflecting the truth.

"That's because she's been OD'ing on Morgan's charms this trip," Rossi replied. Both men smiled at that. They engaged in light banter, but Hotchner continued to glance over at the man in front of him from time to time, impatiently awaiting more information about him from Garcia.

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(I hope that gives enough material for the next person to work with. )